After Returning Home, I Created a Family of Swordsmen

It's okay, but there is one point of criticism. When Xu Qingya dies, no one should die in the early stage of the family story. Chengan can save the scene and run away together. Have you ever thought about the development of the direct line? Cheng'an will not get married easily in the academy. The protagonist's foundation is not established so quickly. There is only a little girl in the direct line. Is it enough for a family to only rely on a few swordsmen to fight?

A very good book, the first novel that I can read in 2024. This rating is really inappropriate. I hope all old bookworms can discover this treasure.

There is nothing wrong with the plot, but the character rendering is still lacking. Overall, it is better than most family stories in Tomato. Other stories are either too talkative and blunt, or the protagonist is like a diaosi. The protagonist in this book is very thoughtful, and the character dialogue is handled very well, but Xu Qingya personally feels that the handling is not up to your real level. This book is good, but I don't understand why the protagonist doesn't use the small wooden sword to help test his spiritual roots in the Immortal Ascension Conference. Isn't this a free prostitution technique? But it looks good, please update more, five-star praise (o^^o)

This book is very good on Tomato, the sentences are smooth, and the writing is not that interesting but not bad, but the plot is... Try to think of other plots by yourself. Those who have not seen it in the next door will be fine, but those who have seen it in the next door will find it difficult to understand (), keep up the good work!

It's a very good book, well written. It has a single heroine who plays swordsman. The protagonist is neither a virgin nor a fool. I love reading it but the updates are too slow. I hope it doesn't end badly.

Personally, I think it's okay, but Xu Qingya's is not necessary.

It feels like a real cultivator. The big monk no longer regards the minor monks as human beings. It is cruel but very realistic. The use of Leek Cake and Diao Lao truly embodies the fear and control of the big monk (Nascent Soul). Different protagonists also have different experiences in cultivating immortals.

The update is a bit slow, but the logic of the content is okay. I can feel that several people in the Li family will die and become Li Yang's help. It was okay at first, but then my expectations dropped. I'm still willing to watch it. I hope it's not so cliche and a little innovative.

I finally found another family novel that I can read. When can the protagonist start practicing?

Recommended when there is a book shortage, a different family novel, looking forward to the follow-up

It's a very good book. Please hurry up and book reviews will skyrocket.

Compared with the immortality novels on the market, this book has indeed created a genre of group portrait novels, but just like a big tree, the trunk can be touched at once, but when the branches and leaves are luxuriant, it becomes difficult to control. I hope the author can control it.

The protagonist can enable anyone to practice. It seems that the author has set the ancient Xia Kingdom royal bloodline for the protagonist's family. The mother's main plot may be to develop the family and then found the country.

The book is great, will the author Xu Qingya be resurrected? I really strongly recommend that there be a character like Xu Qingya in the future

Although it warms up slowly But good writing is rare As a Xiu generation, I have a good vision for layout. The characters of the supporting characters are not paper characters, they have strong three-dimensionality.

Imitation of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan

I've just read a few chapters and now I want to know when the protagonist can resume training.

The overall feeling is pretty good, but some of the plots are a bit awkward.

Not bad, if the pacing were a little faster, there would be more readers, but if it had hundreds of chapters, a lot of people would read it.

Beautiful, a different novel about cultivating immortals

The book has been lacking for such a long time, but it is already a decent family novel. The author should keep up the good work!

Enlightenment through incense is a relatively poor way to cultivate immortality, it can easily be cut off by the opponent!

Very good, well set up

Come on, it's not bad, it looks pretty.

Come on, come on, come on Very nice, keep up the good work

Not bad, worth a look In fact, the author's writing is quite good. The writing is good, the characters are well described, and the stories are connected smoothly. However, the entire background of cultivating immortals is very depressing, and some characters' endings led to a very low rating.

I like it, the plot is good

It would be nice if there was no such thing as taking the three golden elixirs and combining them with Yuanying. After all, that way is not my way. My way is to overcome all obstacles and move forward without hesitation.

It's great. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs. I stayed up late to read it [I almost cried] and it's so well written.

What is the name of Li Yang's child?