Quick Travel: the Male Protagonist Is Really Good at Self-Defeating!

It's good to read, but the second volume is a bit sadistic, but the rest is okay. I like Xiao Ling's character very much [laughing] It's the author, can you write the process of what they do more clearly, this is the only shortcoming, please, write it clearly! Clearly! It looks good. Let me talk about the important things first. First, the author has highlighted the characteristics of the characters, which is very good. Second, the plot has ups and downs, making it easy for readers to get involved. Third, what I'm talking about here is a shortcoming, mainly because the author's writing is so good! It's not good enough! Faster and faster!

It's nice, logical, and sweet, but can the author let them stay in the small world until they grow old? It would be unfair to the male protagonist if they leave. The person he loves has gone, and only bodies similar to his are in love. It feels like being cheated [crying] [crying]

It's really good-looking (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ). I finished it in one go, but I felt it wasn't enough. I like the character of the protagonist, who is gentle, funny and powerful, and I also like to see Brother Han being awkward and secretly doting. Although I feel sad every time I leave this world, I am immediately overwhelmed by the sweetness of the next world. I haven't read such a beautiful book in a long time [Love] Anyway, keep working hard, I will keep chasing＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و ////

It looks good, I like the character design of Shou, I hope it won't be too much to write down [Sending my heart]

Like! ! ! ! During this time, I finally read a book that didn't make me embarrassed!

It's really pretty, not brainless, and very sweet.

Overall it looks great, highly recommended! ! ① If you didn't read the introduction carefully, it means wearing it slowly. It's too long and I can't stand it. Please be careful! ②The last infinite flow world, the emotions are not handled well, it is indeed a bit awkward. Aling's feelings for Brother Han have been very solid in the past few worlds. Even if he loses all his memories, he will still fall in love with you. It's heartwarming. But when I was forced by the system to conquer Xiao Gu, I felt that hesitation was a little less satisfying. It doesn't mean that I can't struggle, after all, the system forces it, and this way of writing is indeed more in line with human nature. But I always wonder if he can be more decisive, for example, make it clear directly, even if it will trigger system punishment, would it be more in line with the tenacity he had accumulated in the previous copy? Just like what was written in the small world of the heroine before, leaving room for people you don't like, it seems gentle, but in fact it leaves the other person with undesirable thoughts. But it is forced by the system after all. Oh, so it makes people feel very uncomfortable. But other worlds are written very well, so overall I highly recommend it! Suddenly it occurred to me that there are a few more points to add. ③I always wanted to complain in the early stage but I was too lazy to write a review, so I will say it here. Xiao8 (system) was really useless in the early stage. This "uselessness" cannot be covered up by the appearance of an even more useless system in the last dungeon. In the early stage, it always "drops the chain" at critical moments, and it is not used when it is needed. When readers follow the protagonist and sweat, they will inevitably feel that this system is so ineffective. When designing a growth-oriented system, you must also grasp the pace of growth. A more useless system may appear later to highlight Xiaoba's usefulness. However, if you don't want him to be scolded, don't highlight Xiaoba's uselessness in key plots. You can let him grow slowly in other interesting plots.

It's good-looking and I love watching it. The only thing I don't like is that the male protagonists in each world share the same face. In this way, I always feel that the male protagonist who conquers this world will have emotions for the male protagonist in the previous world. Even if there is a setting to seal the memory of the previous world, you will still feel it when you first meet. I think the male protagonist in each world should be a different individual, which can be similar to a slice. They do not necessarily share the same face to emphasize the love for the male protagonist. What I love is you, no matter what, it is you. It does not have to use the same face or the emotions of the previous world to emphasize this love. Overall, the story is pretty good [blowing kiss]

There is a kind of beauty that will explode if you look at it again [laughing evilly] (Tai Hao Kang Spicy!)

It looks good, but the corner of my mouth is not wet. It feels quite sweet, but it is a bit short and a bit unfinished. The author is working hard and please update it quickly! (♡▽♡)

I have been following this novel for a long time. The two main characters really love each other, it's so sweet. Do you know that feeling when you can't help laughing in the middle of the night? Because I was about to take the high school entrance examination, I hadn't read this novel for a while, but when I came back, I saw it was finished. Their stories are always unfinished, and my time is also running towards the future. In these two intersecting lines, I saw their stories. Although they met briefly like intersecting lines, they will never intersect again, and their future will never be seen again. But as long as we meet for a moment, then it will be beautiful I hope the author can write more and better novels in the future, and more and more people will fall in love with you because of your books. In fact, I am a little selfish, that is, if the author sees this post, please wish me to get into the ideal school for the high school entrance examination [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's nice to watch. The protagonist's character really hit my mark. The cross-dressing boss (original owner) later clarified that it was not artificial at all. Highly recommended. Good-looking, good-looking, there are surprises in the third world [shy][shy][loving][loving]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahah. Basis. God. A. A. A. A. M. ! ! ! Madam, madam, madam, it's so good~ How can there be such a closed-loop novel? The plot of each small world is very novel. I have never seen such a good-looking article in Yangshizi. My darling Doudou Doudou, it's so good~! ! ! Author, you are my goddess! ! I was already shocked when I saw the small world of Zerg. I started laying out my plot from the very beginning. Oh my god, Jujujuju is so beautiful. Who dares to disobey this book? The beginning and the end are also connected. Brother Han and Aling will always be happy, okay? [I'm about to cry] I'll read every letter you write, okay? [Adoration] I've been reading Laiyang Persimmon for more than 1,000 hours. It's such a beautiful book. Author, you are my goddess [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's really great, every story is fascinating. It combines all the types of stories I want to read, and I also like the characters. Full of faintness! ! Full of faintness! ! ! ｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

The characters in the story are all great, lively, lively and interesting. It's like a real person is standing in front of you. The plot is also very continuous and immersive, making people want to read the next chapter after reading one chapter. The system is also very lively and so on. The story is also dramatic. All in all... Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This is the best book I've ever read! ! ! ! ! The plot of each small world is full of ups and downs. You never know what the author will write in the next second. There are foreshadowings one after another. Until you see the end, you never know what will happen in the next second! ! ! Highly recommended, it's really beautiful

This book is really nice and sweet, and the content of the story is also very good. It is one of the few books that I have read, and it has too many chapters. Oh my god, it is the first good-looking book of this year. It is a fast-travel story with two male protagonists. It looks really, really good-looking. Believe me, it really gets better and better the more you read it.

The writing is really good. Although I was really confused when I watched Feiyue Castle, I really felt sorry for him when I saw him struggling. One side is his sister, one side is his lover, and the other side is his friend. It is really difficult for him to make a choice (I won't spoil it too much), but the ending really makes people suddenly understand. I really like this ending, very logical [shy] I really like Xiao Ling's character design, it gives people a very strong and reassuring feeling, but also very gentle. He is a good brother and a good partner. You should be very happy to be his friend🥰 There is also Brother Han who is jealous and awkward, and our brother Han's indescribable cooking skills [laughing]

He is good-looking, not a very brainless one. Xiao Ling has a unique character, he is upright, brave and kind. When he found out that he fell in love with the male protagonist, he did not deny it. Unlike the original article, he kept denying the fact that he fell in love with the male protagonist. However, he felt sorry for the male protagonist and Xiao Ling was a heartthrob in every small world. However, he did not hurt others because of this characteristic. He just fell in love with this person only around him. He was upright and did not do anything harmful to the world. He also has a rich inner world.

It's beautifully written, and the interaction between the male protagonists is ambiguous and a bit tumultuous. It's the type I like to watch. It's so cute, especially Xiao, who gives me the feeling of a hooker. I can't stop seducing her. Mo looks like a sultry type at first glance. He says he doesn't want it, but in fact, he feels secretly happy. He likes to hang out with Xiao. Perfect Closed Loop, I just love it so much. Before reading this book, I always thought that I didn't like to read fast-paced movies with slices in them (the male protagonist is always the same person). But now I find that it's not that I don't like reading it, it's that the writing I read before was not good. This book is very good-looking. The closed-loop is written so well that all the pitfalls that need to be filled are basically filled in. I love it. Recommend! ! !

I like it so much! ! ! Nowadays, most of the two-man fast-traveling articles describe the protagonist more or less in a feminine way or portray the character in an abnormal way. This article has no such problem at all. The character creation is superb, and the deputy CP is also super sweet. I love it [blowing kisses] Come and take a look, whoever doesn't see this kind of treasure is a fool, the author needs to work hard and update it! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This book is very to my liking. I like the plot and character settings. And I am the kind of person who will lose the novelty after reading half of it, no matter whether it is good or not, and then just abandon it. But I can't bear to part with this book, just emm. I feel that the romance part in Shuang Nan's novel is a bit uncomfortable (personal feeling and liking). It's nothing, but it seems that there has been romance since the beginning of the second world. Do we have to add a cp to the original heroine in the future... If there is a little more romance in Shuang Nan's novel, I feel something is wrong... Emm It's hard to comment, it's just my personal feeling, but it depends on the author. After all, this is someone else's novel. I highly recommend everyone to read it! No kidding, this year's Top 1 just started, I'm willing to put up with the romance part, it's so good, if you're interested Bao Zi, just jump in

The full text is very sweet, the plot is very novel, the protagonist's character is also very attractive, and the three views are very positive. But for people like me who don't really like to watch sub-CPs, it's not very friendly [laughing] The protagonist's character design is very good, and the characterization is also very good, but some supporting characters are slightly inferior. Sisters like me who don't like to watch many sub-CPs can avoid lightning in a few chapters (such as The Bride of the Ghost King, to be honest, having two pairs of sub-CPs feels a bit awkward), but not every copy has a sub-CP, so it's still very passable [Admiration]

This book is very good. The author should not care about the bad reviews. You are really great (//∇//) This is the first time I have read a novel where the male protagonist wears a skirt, and it is very interesting. I'm very lucky. I only read this book after you finished it. Hehe, I can read it all at once. I'm so happy (*^ω^*) Keep up the good work, your writing is very good, I like it very much (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Come on, come on, look forward to the author's next book (≧∇≦)/

It's really a book that people can't put down! The author actually started hiding his plot from the first small world, and I didn't notice it at all the first time I read it! Then the whole little world is sweet and peaceful~ Our Xiao Ling and Brother Han are so sweet! All the stories form a closed loop in the end, and it's so refreshing to feel like you suddenly understand after reading it! The author is also a very sincere person. Don't miss it if you pass by! Also ask the author when he will publish the next book [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Depending on the reading equipment, the time displayed here is still too little. . . .

I have never read a book that suits my xp so well. The writing is plain but not boring, the plot sticks closely to the theme, and every picture is eye-catching. There is a twist at just the right moment⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄㉨⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄. The author is so awesome. Come on, I just hope it can be faster. It's not enough to read (quietly)

Let me express my truest feelings first: it looks good, I love watching it, I want to watch it. He ate life and death throughout the whole process, and twisted into maggots on the bed. The protagonist's love makes me scream, and the deputy CP's love makes me obsessed. Generally speaking, every world written by the author is beautiful and exciting. (Except for the regretful ending of the first world) Not only that, the story development and logical thinking of the small world are good. As far as I'm concerned, this book is very good, but of course, it doesn't stop the author from stabbing you from time to time. Anyway, I highly recommend this book. Also: Looking forward to the author's next work! ! ! [Love][love][love]

Closed loop! It is eternal romance! ,,,,,,,,,,, "Our encounter was a deliberate accident, but it was also a destined closed loop of reincarnation." "Loving you is an instinct engraved deep in my soul, and this will never change." Their stories are always unfinished And we, see you in the next story~

It's quite interesting, and I've read more than 200 chapters, but I only like to read the process of falling in love, and most of what the author writes about is love at first sight, so I'm not very interested. But it's still pretty and very sweet.

I like it very much! I have never seen such a favorite article QAQ in my life. I disliked all the settings. I was so busy that I forgot to read The Substitute Bride [laughs], but I am looking forward to the development of the plot in the future.