Avenue**

To be honest, it's not bad. Some of the cool points are not enough, but it is still much better than Xiaobai's writing. From my personal point of view, does the author have any writing baggage? I feel that some idioms are not suitable for use. This has to mention a classic saying. When writing online articles, forget about the damn writing. Come on, I'm optimistic about you👀👀👀

It's very interesting and good in terms of story content. I look forward to the follow-up. Come on author!