When I first crossed over, I was in the same dormitory as Wu Bilian. I had the illusion that everything around me was dangerous. Fortunately, as a time traveler, there is still a system, but this system just gave a novice gift package and disappeared.
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Good. It's just that the protagonist's sense of participation is a bit low
I don't know if the author has watched Under the Stranger, which is the version of the TV series. Duanmu Ying may not have died, but Lu Huan may have died. However, the TV series has many restrictions and cannot be broadcast, so it is changed to blood exchange. This is scientifically unreasonable. People with different blood types will die. Maybe It is true that it is used as a fertility tool. Secondly, Qu Tong is very interested in Feng Baobao and Zhang Chulan, which also shows that she may be the daughter of Duanmuying and Wang Zizhong. If it is Duanmuying herself, then she should be very aware of Feng Baobao and Zhang Chulan and has no interest in it. Lu Huan may be like in the TV series. Duan Muying changed his memory and became Lu Huan, and may be hiding.
In addition, I feel that the plot of the TV series about the master coming out of the mountain to destroy the whole sex is very enjoyable. When people are walking on the road, there are thunders in the sky. The Five Thunder Zhengfa is very cool. It would be better if the protagonist had a thunder fruit. It has electromagnetism and a super-wide range of heart network. It is so cool when developed. Thunder falls when dark clouds cover hundreds of kilometers in radius. A thunder version of the birdcage is developed, and people can't run away even if they want to. Whether it's the TV series or the anime, the comics show the Five Thunders Zhengfa in a very average way. It's a top-notch technique that can only be used against one person. In the 21st century, in the era of the explosion of big data, I don't have enough imagination, but there is always something to learn from.
Come on author, you can do it if you believe in yourself [Like]
And why did this little transparent guy follow me? Sigh, just study normally, and then hide your heart and hide your fire, isn't it good? Why do you want to expose yourself?
The structure is still okay and quite attractive.
Do you have any recommendations for novels about learning Baijiayi?
Not bad, good, I like it
The plot of the original novel is hilarious and exciting. It's okay to give it a try with other explanations. Chen Duo can be saved, but he still has both hands and red hands trying to find a way to do it. The most pitiful person is Chen Duo and Ma Xianhong.
Not bad, that's it
Are there two heroines?
This is the novel version of Under One Person. Without it [laughter]
Good. It's just that the protagonist's sense of participation is a bit low
I don't know if the author has watched Under the Stranger, which is the version of the TV series. Duanmu Ying may not have died, but Lu Huan may have died. However, the TV series has many restrictions and cannot be broadcast, so it is changed to blood exchange. This is scientifically unreasonable. People with different blood types will die. Maybe It is true that it is used as a fertility tool. Secondly, Qu Tong is very interested in Feng Baobao and Zhang Chulan, which also shows that she may be the daughter of Duanmuying and Wang Zizhong. If it is Duanmuying herself, then she should be very aware of Feng Baobao and Zhang Chulan and has no interest in it. Lu Huan may be like in the TV series. Duan Muying changed his memory and became Lu Huan, and may be hiding. In addition, I feel that the plot of the TV series about the master coming out of the mountain to destroy the whole sex is very enjoyable. When people are walking on the road, there are thunders in the sky. The Five Thunder Zhengfa is very cool. It would be better if the protagonist had a thunder fruit. It has electromagnetism and a super-wide range of heart network. It is so cool when developed. Thunder falls when dark clouds cover hundreds of kilometers in radius. A thunder version of the birdcage is developed, and people can't run away even if they want to. Whether it's the TV series or the anime, the comics show the Five Thunders Zhengfa in a very average way. It's a top-notch technique that can only be used against one person. In the 21st century, in the era of the explosion of big data, I don't have enough imagination, but there is always something to learn from.
Come on author, you can do it if you believe in yourself [Like]
And why did this little transparent guy follow me? Sigh, just study normally, and then hide your heart and hide your fire, isn't it good? Why do you want to expose yourself?
The structure is still okay and quite attractive.
Do you have any recommendations for novels about learning Baijiayi?
Not bad, good, I like it
The plot of the original novel is hilarious and exciting. It's okay to give it a try with other explanations. Chen Duo can be saved, but he still has both hands and red hands trying to find a way to do it. The most pitiful person is Chen Duo and Ma Xianhong.
Not bad, that's it
Are there two heroines?
This is the novel version of Under One Person. Without it [laughter]
Come on, come on, come on
Very beautiful, come on!
New author, okay
Looks good, keep up the good work
Good book, super exciting