One Person************

My friend, please take my advice and just restart the game. The main plot is not clear, and the main character is poorly written. Even if you were rescued just after traveling through time in the beginning, it still can't offset your hatred against the company. Besides, the company was not destroyed and the losses were small. Most importantly, the timeline is too messy, and the protagonist is invincible, but the result is like this. The three golden chapters really didn't explain anything clearly, so let's start again and review the outline, characters, background, development direction, and the theme is very good, but what I wrote seems to have been thought of in a flash. I wrote wherever I thought, and I didn't have a detailed outline or follow-up development direction.

I don't know what the purpose of this book is? What is the protagonist like? There is no autonomous robot. And I originally thought Xia He was the heroine, but it turned out that she lost her virginity. Not to mention it. So what does the protagonist want to do? It is obvious that he can be directly invincible. But it's not directly refreshing. Then where was Xia He when I first wrote about it? And isn't he a time traveler? Acting like natives. I don't know this, I don't know that. Just like Lu Mingfei's posture. Forget it, forget it

Is the author Xia He the heroine?

The timeline is very messy, and this is using the X-Men setting for one person

To be honest, it's not pretty and the content is a bit messy, but it's okay. Keep working hard. The settings are still ok.

Not good-looking, not ugly either

It's well written, come on✊, don't be a mess, don't be a eunuch

Just like history,