My Top Second Generation, the Goddess Wears Balenciaga to Express Her Love

Don't write if you don't know how to write. There are typos in the first chapter, and the foreshadowing of the second chapter is not directly: "I am willing to compensate my classmates." I have already started to persuade you to quit, and the dialogue is so bad, there is no feeling at all. Is this how you talk to people in real life? You have to make people feel like they are involved, and the Mercedes-Benz scratch is 1,000, which is outrageous. First of all, you didn't mention the car model or color, and you don't have any imagination in your mind. There are too many loopholes. You can't read it without a brain, let alone a brain, because the basic logic of what you wrote doesn't make sense. I advise the author to take a look at the writing of a good writer first. After all, I can still read it without a brain, at least the content is smooth.

By the way, our obscene articles must also be logical.

Too much poison First of all, the female anchor's bottomless money-worshiping character at the beginning is very unpleasant. Secondly, writing a cool article is not just a matter of being cool. You must have a basic story line and logical relationship.

The writing is good. Is there a group to talk about?

A pure novice author, just imaginary and without any skills.

The data is completely messed up.

Two stars is too much. After reading Chapter 11, I really can't stand it anymore. Dad, the richest man in Asia, you are wearing street stall goods and start pretending to be a slap in the face. No one knows the richest man in Asia. No one has heard of the richest man's company. The most poisonous among poisons.

Fine. . .

Classic urban cool writing

It's a cool article, but it's a little too brainless.

Cool! ! ! !