Expelled from the Brave Team, I Reorganized the Legendary Adventure Group

It's not that the subject matter is not good, it's not that the content is not good, nor that the protagonist is not good, it's that sometimes the author's writing doesn't match the strong style, and it doesn't look beautiful. For example, when the female knight comes to ask for help, she obviously does not need to refuse, she can ask first, and it is okay to agree, otherwise the train will not move. This is a low emotional intelligence and does not suit the character; when I negotiated for the price of the dragon girl, I didn't understand why I added 777 in the end. Shouldn't I lower it again at this time? You've already shown yourself to be giving in, but the other side still refuses to push further? Both parties are strange (the origin of the Dragon Girl is also strange. She was targeted by the earl, but she was not sent to bed immediately. I don't understand); when welcoming the major general, she came up to provoke him without any provocation. Why is she born with a bad mouth? Old friends don't greet each other first, but they actually want to talk to each other. What is there to be proud of? This guy is not arrogant, he is sick and has thorns on his body! And the phrase "Listen to my explanation", what the hell! What kind of environment is this? How can we still have this kind of conversation? Just saying "She is my new student" can explain everything. Doesn't she know what the protagonist's protection is? What about pulling? I can't comment, but I really don't like it. I can't really say that this is a cheat for checking other people's talents. It's really annoying to say that it's too utilitarian, but it can be said that "it's not about the heart but the performance". If you don't handle it well, you won't be able to read the book.

The old theme is okay, but I don't like it

It's good but I don't like it.

Okay, quite interesting

Not bad, very pretty

The subject matter is good, but the writing is really not that good.

The protagonist looks like a eunuch

The subject matter is great, but there is a bit of ink staining, and the article is a little slow. I can speed up the progress appropriately.

Come on, great author

The plot feels a bit familiar, as if I've seen it in comics. I'm not sure if I'm remembering it wrong.

Inexplicable, absurd