Feng Nu Returns: the Group's Favorite Milk Buns Farm and Become the Queen

It looks good, but the punctuation marks are tiring to the eyes, so I might as well change them!

The writing is so beautiful and funny, but not top-notch. It is very profound and moving, and the heroine is made more beautiful and beautiful. Five stars and fifteen stars.

Oh yo, why do you need me? Just the milky voice is fine. Don't translate it again. It makes me scratch my head.

Author, can you remove me? Then add a double "" after the character's words. "Thank you

Dialogue punctuation marks are troublesome to align

Person and punctuation marks, suitable for listening mode

The plot of the novel is quite good, and there is nothing cruel about it. It is a favorite novel. However, the author is not careless in writing the novel. There are wrong words and sentences in every page of the novel. Missing words and adding words make a true sentence become an irony, and an irony becomes a true story. After the heroine can speak, every baby talk she says has to be translated again. There is suspicion of wording. After writing a few chapters, it becomes the heroine's first-person narration, which makes the novel read strange. Yes, and then it returned to its normal state. People say that the flaws are not hidden, but when there are too many flaws, the flaws are covered up. There were comments from readers at the beginning of the novel, but after dozens of chapters, the comments became less and less, because I no longer have the strength to complain, there are too many wrong words and sentences, and I can't comment anymore 😂 I hope the author can be careful when writing the novel, and don't skip proofreading for the sake of speed. Too many mistakes make the novel lose its color, and it is also a respect for the readers.

I like it very much. It's very beautiful and has a strong sense of inclusion. This is a book that will make you like to read novels from now on. The author will give you a lot of support. Please update it quickly. I look forward to [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [love] [love] [love]

The subject matter of this novel is good. The family relationship between the group pets is warm and there is no extreme comedy. The author has a very strange mind, and some of the contents in it are all based on guesswork! ! 1. Readers have to guess the inner monologue of the novel by themselves, and there is no punctuation during the dialogue, which makes it visually tiring. 2. The anchors who dubbed this novel are really talented. I commend them for being able to separate the inner monologue and dialogue so clearly. 3·This novel is the best to listen to, but I'm too tired to read it [face covering] 4. This is purely a personal suggestion, please don't comment, thank you!

It looks good, but the punctuation marks make my eyes hurt. Say it without quotation marks

It's okay, but it's not good at all. Some of them are in the first person! ! ! Sometimes it feels weird to hear me, me, me...

[Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] The writing feels pretty good, so far. Come on, author! After reading the introduction, I really like this kind of hanging. Moreover, there are many supplies in the heroine's space that are not just for family use. They are just piled in piles, and the family members accept it well. Everyone is kind to the heroine. At present, it seems that there are not many good people in the village ('▽') In my opinion, there are several flaws that affect the reading experience😊 Example↓ 1️⃣ Regarding the use of punctuation marks, double quotation marks are not used correctly, and ellipses →... Are typed with dots one by one →······ Feng Shi smiled and scolded, you little bastards, if you have meat to eat, grandma is good, but if you don't have meat, is it bad? Yun Chun, Yun Ne: "No, Grandma has always been the best." "Pfft... Hahahaha, okay, you brats are smart." I'll leave a rabbit and chicken behind later, and the rest will go to the town now. I'll be back before dinner as soon as I can. "Mother..." "Ah..." Wan Niang's heartbreaking cry woke up Mrs. Feng who was in a daze. 2️⃣Some content will be described in the first person. After reading the article for so many years, I still can't adapt to the first person article. It feels very strange [face covering] [face covering] I can hear my father and brothers reading, discussing, and arguing every day, and I am not lonely at all. Every time my mental power becomes empty, it will make my mental power stronger, and the time flow in the spiritual realm will be slower, just like now it is one to ten, one day outside and ten days inside. 3️⃣The heroine fell into coma for three years because of saving her family! Moreover, the flow speed in the space is one to ten compared to the flow speed outside. So the heroine has been conscious in space for thirty years! Frog fun. This point is a bit hard to explain, it feels like a novel setting🌚🌚 4️⃣The heroine is three years old and she talks like this↓A baby talk and a translation. Currently, there are quite a lot of stories about this, and the heroine is still a bit of a talker hhhhh [Thinking] In fact, I think it can be half-baby talk, a lot of those writing about baby heroines are half-baby talk [Thinking] "The roots of the nest area are deep and the snow is hot..." "I'm going to study with the gods..."

📚This book is so beautiful! Not only is the writing beautiful, the illustrations are stunning! The image of a family of good-looking characters vividly appeared on the page, as if I was in this world. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to describe the characters' emotions and inner world, making people feel the beauty and warmth of life. Every detail has been carefully polished, and both text and pictures show extremely high artistic value. This book is not only a reading, but also a visual and spiritual feast. Highly recommended to readers who like good looks and beautiful things!

Please update it soon [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Not the best. The heroine is very, very happy. She was born into a big family and was loved by the whole village. After that, she was loved by her husband. She basically ran on the road of doting on Yinyin. Hey, I won't say anymore. I will go back to the countryside to farm. Isn't there a saying like this? If you sow melons, you will get melons. If you sow beans, you will get beans. I will go home and plant a small button [laughing]

Looking good so far

This is a good and refreshing work that I have read in recent months. I look forward to the next more exciting one.

The book is okay, but some points will be deducted for the first person description. If you don't mind, you can jump in.

Although it's just a fantasy, that's a lot of fun! There is a paragraph where the emperor mentioned that the Yun clan grew high-yield grain. Some officials wanted to pay attention to it... The emperor said that he would punish the sixteen clans [Cool] [Cool] but he went to Du Niang to check...

There aren't many ups and downs in the front, but it's pretty good in the back. It's a very plain article, and it's quite comforting to read. The heroine is the group favorite, and the people in the village are also very nice, strong, and open-minded. The male protagonist and female protagonist are childhood sweethearts. He cares about the people, his family, his country, and the world. Every family cultivates the land and has food in stock, so that the soldiers on the frontier have no worries. It is worth watching.

A very nice book. I listened to it in one breath and even cried when the heroine's grandfather and grandmother passed away. The Yun family, young and old, live in harmony, mostly for the throne. Kill each other. No one in this family wants to be the emperor. As a result, the throne was finally passed to the little princess. [Like][Like][Like]

It's okay::: It's just that the symbols are wrong:::: Also, it's always me, me, me: the first person sounds uncomfortable: it's super good to use me as the address (I still have no intention of letting others go) I shouted loudly and Xiao Naiyin began to command me. I quickly raised my hands and shouted: Stop! I continue to start the brainwashing method, that's what grandma said

The relationship between the whole family is touching! Such a harmonious family is rare in real life! Only the wisdom of such an old couple can unite a family closely. A good wife can prosper for three generations. A family with such wise old people can prosper for countless generations. This is what I yearn for and envy! Too bad I don't have one!

I have been reading this book for so long📚. There are no family members or friends in this book. I also like it very much when I see that there is no green tea or white lotus. The plot is not sluggish, and the male and female protagonists are also very strong. It is worth recommending! Come on, the author, come on!

The author writes very well. It was rare to have such a good family in ancient times. No one in the family has any bad intentions. It is very touching. There is a period of national feud at the back that is also very well written, but it should be wiped out completely, otherwise there would be no such cruel war.

This book is very comfortable to read! There is nothing great! The family is very harmonious and united! The people of the same clan are also very nice! I also like the heroine character very much! Kind, smart, brave, upright, and not a holy mother! A book worth reading!

When she was sleeping, I almost cried when I saw what the family did.

Oops, there are just too many of the author's inner thoughts.

Do punctuation marks cost money? I heard that there were no punctuation marks in ancient times. Could it be that the author traveled through time? [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's beautiful and exciting, the only drawback is that there are a few typos. [Like][Like][Like]