Quick Wear: Saving the Men's Matching System

The author's writing style is not very mature, but the logic is clear. The pace is a bit fast at the beginning, but it still feels a little emotional, but overall it is good. I give it five stars and hope the author will work hard!

There are too many forms of dialogue. Although it is not necessary to name all the other characters except the protagonist, the one-size-fits-all character really makes me want to laugh when I see one [facepalm]. It's okay for the character to have a title based on his profession, otherwise I won't be able to tell who is who. But I still have perseverance and can write 1 million words, which is amazing.

It's so tiring to watch, so childish