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It's great. It's a good material for writing about abuse. It made me heartbroken. In general, by witnessing Dill's death and worsening the behavior of Petunia's family (beating, kicking, bullying), a depressed Harry with masochistic tendencies was created. Not long after the start, I chose Zisha to escape reality. This is the most outrageous operation I have seen among all the fans, but personally I am very satisfied. The reason is that Dumbledore has never cared for Harry since he was a child, even once, which led to his savior becoming like this. Obviously, Dumbledore has an unshirkable responsibility as Lily's first guardian after her death. The original book and many fans do not show this. Let us use a bloody reality to tell everyone that this is Harry. Of course, this aspect should be because Petunia actually loves her sister, so even if Dumbledore did not give him any child support, she was still willing to take her in and even raise him to grow up, resulting in a relatively normal personality. Like this one, erasing this point is the beginning of a sadistic novel that I like to see the most. It is not the readers who are tortured, but everyone who cares about Harry. First, Dumbledore realized his mistake, and Snape had to make changes and try to love Harry and let him live. However, the harm that Harry's cautiousness brought to him was, in a word, absolute! Gryffindor is too hot, Slytherin is too cold. Only Hufflepuff can give Harry a sense of security. It must be said that the Sorting Hat is the first person to truly understand and care about Harry. But it is a pity that due to the needs of the plot, Petunia's family cannot be tortured for the time being. The rivalry between Voldemort and depressed Harry will not only let him know that his opponent is so weak and what kind of start he has, but also how will Tom in the diary view such Harry. At present, this is what the plot affects me. The following part should slowly fill Harry's heart and enrich his soul. As for how to give him the ability to love, maybe find someone who loves him, teach him how to love, and then let him love others. This is probably the main plot later. As for Voldemort, such a weak Harry is not worthy of being his opponent at the moment. Only if Harry cheers up and becomes the savior can he be qualified to be watched. Take your time, just torture Dumbledore, McGonagall, and Snape. Looking forward to Lupine and Sirius, and the time when the thing he fears most is being watched (the one about spiders) More updates, love to read

Friend: This book is super healing! It's so beautiful, go check it out Me: Warm family love? Let me see After reading: Woo woo woo, my little Harry... Woo woo woo woo Harry will be my favorite fanfic from now on. For the first time, I realized so clearly that if it weren't for Harry's tenacity, after experiencing being treated as a "little monster" and the filth of the world in reality, the wizarding world would have welcomed a child who was so twisted and fragile that he could break at the touch of a touch. I felt sorry for little Harry every time he was stabbed repeatedly in the dark. This is great. I hope little Harry can finally find his own light.

Ahhhhh! ! ! So sweet! It killed me! ! ! ! Really super sweet! Little Ha is so cute! ! ! You are so obedient and always answer your questions! ! ! Can you please stop being so obedient! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhh ｡ ∧＿∧｡ﾟ ﾟ (ﾟ ´Д｀ﾟ)っﾟ (つ/ | （⌒）

The plot is very good, the writing is very clean, Harry's character is perfectly created without any flaws, the author's writing is very good, and the sentences he writes are very nice (beep quietly: it can be included in the composition). It is simply good news for book-hungry readers, five stars out of five (a shallow recommendation for this book) Wow, little Harry is really miserable, Cedric feels so gentle.

Harry's character and other aspects are very well developed, and not very one-sided. The other characters are also well developed. To be honest, I can relate to it. I can't accept the kindness of others. Although I am grateful, I am panicked. I often feel palpitations and panic, and I experience shortness of breath when encountering stressful situations. I can't show it yet, I can only suppress it in my heart. I'm afraid of causing trouble to others, so I don't want to show anything. I'm glad to see someone willing to redeem Harry in this book. [Sending Hearts]

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! Really really! I feel that Harry in this book is more real than the original. It would be strange if a child did not develop psychological problems after being bullied for eleven years.

The writing is very good, and it made me see a different Harry. Some of the sentences are really well written and touching. Some of the authors described things that I have experienced, which made me feel Harry's pain and made me feel real [I almost cried]

It fits the xp very well. I hope there can be someone similar to the boy who committed suicide (forgot his name) as the CP so that he can do some stunts. It feels like I can ask Dumbledore to use Legilimency and then entrust the new student to disguise himself. Finally, I can use a big sword.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking hp fanfic. I'm still here on Tomato. I'm really shocked. It's not OOC at all, and it's not the kind of cool writing. It's very interesting. Harry's psychological problems are also well described, which makes people feel deeply involved. It's not the kind of superficial and sloppy writing about torturing Harry and then Harry turning black. The writing is really good, and the feeling of Narcissus is also very good. The author describes the emotion that is indispensable to half of the soul with a very gentle writing style. It is worth recommending. The plot is also very smooth and logical. I hope to see more works from the author in the future.

It's super good-looking, please give the author a thumbs up [Adoration] Harry's mentality is really heartbreaking [crying] Cedric is also super gentle, Bai Yueguang, okay [blowing kiss] I just don't know if Cedric will die during the Triwizard Tournament. It's so uncomfortable [crying]

I shed tears when I read it on the train, but I felt like crying and laughing at the end. If it weren't for the wrong environment, I felt that this book would be perfect for relaxing when I want to cry. Although I haven't finished the original Harry Potter book, I still love him and all the friends and family characters in it. Of course, it has something to do with part of my own psychology. Being affected by my unprecedented academic situation and physical condition, I feel that my mental state is not as good as before. Reading this article makes me feel so much empathy. This book is really good to read, and the psychological description of the little savior is very detailed. I hope you can take your time and not give up, so that you can see the completion of this book. I promise to watch it for a long time. I started watching it in the morning and didn't follow up the review until after nine o'clock in the evening. Thank you very much [love] [love] [love] [please update] [blowing kiss]

The writing is very nice and the rating should be easy to see. Maybe many people came to watch it because of the word Narcissus in the introduction at the beginning, but I want to say that the focus of the whole article is not on the word Narcissus. I'm describing Harry's life experience and Harry's emotional experience. If you can't accept the abuse at all, you can skip reading it. Although I personally don't think it can be regarded as abuse, and the plot is a bit abusive, but I feel that it reflects many real examples in reality. It's not just Harry in the original book whose childhood experiences are unacceptable. In reality, for most people, these things may rarely happen around them. But this kind of thing is definitely not uncommon, but it is rarely made public. Society does not allow us to see these dark things in a bright place. Different classes have different views on society. We have no way to change the environment of our lives, so we can only make ourselves miserable. This article has undergone major revisions, and the entire language is very coherent and clear. The writing style is not particularly immature, and it does not feel like a running account.

It makes me feel sick to my stomach (it's not that it doesn't look good!!!!) It's nice to look at and not contrived at all. There is no intentional abuse for the sake of abuse. It is because of the difference in worldview and self-values ​​that people can empathize with. (I felt depressed when I watched it, but I was very tearful and couldn't cry, but I was very sad.) It made me feel that little Harry should be freed, instead of being forced to stay here by various people (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). First, he is Harry, secondly, he is a Potter, and finally, he is the savior. But it seems that everyone has it reversed, with him leading as the savior first, and Harry as the last. Harry cannot die because he is the savior, he can destroy Voldemort, he is the child of Lily and Potter, and they are ashamed of him, so he cannot die (I am so sad now that my language is confusing, don't worry)

This work is very touching, both in the delicate style of writing that touches the soul in the early stage and in the unexpected tragic turn in the later stage. Originally thought that after Daniel appeared, Harry would receive true spiritual salvation, but he had no way to eliminate his thoughts and nature. Many places in the article hint that Harry is destined to embrace annihilation and death, Harry's performance to his friends, his name to Sirius, his determination to destroy the Horcrux, and his own birth. At the same time, driven by the plot, Harry had to die. When he was born as a secondary personality and endured the dark childhood for the original Harry, he was destined to end. He would definitely wipe out his own life for the sake of Daniel's light. Later in the plot, he and Daniel must fight against Voldemort. One person must face Voldemort, and as the one who physically possesses Voldemort's Horcrux, he must be killed, otherwise everything will be in vain. And in order to give the free Daniel a bright future, Harry, whose heart and soul are in turmoil, will definitely go to death alone, giving Daniel and everyone a bright future. I am very grateful to the author for finishing this book and giving Harry, Daniel and everyone an ending. Although it is BE, I think the author actually gave everyone a good ending. First of all, all the supporting characters except the protagonist have the HE ending. As the protagonists, Harry and Daniel are actually lucky enough. Harry fulfilled the meaning of his life and finally walked towards death with determination. Daniel abandoned his dark childhood and grew into an unfettered, free and wanton teenager. The only thing that makes me sad is probably that Daniel will regret his carelessness when Harry died for the rest of his life. Finally, I still want to thank the author for allowing me to read a different story and see a different living Harry [almost crying]

Harry is a rare depressed and rational version, which is reasonable and sad. At the same time, he feels sad for those who have also experienced bad experiences. He hopes that they all have their own Daniel and his friends to pull them out of the mire. Even a ray of sunshine should make them feel a little warmth in the world.

This book made me unable to stop reading it and made me feel uncomfortable. It's awesome.

Good knife. The characters in the author's works are emotionally delicate and truly depict Harry Potter's childhood in my imagination. Although Harry was depressed and tried to help him, Harry himself did not change. Dumbledore and Severus who helped him in the article both had mental illness. They redeemed each other and tortured each other. Daniel is the embodiment of Harry's other side, but Harry's humbleness is contradictory to Daniel's self-love. Harry's compromise is the reason why there is no way to save him (he compromised to make his friends think he had recovered), but Harry did not recover. Harry still realized his wish. Although there was no HE, it was indeed the norm.

First of all, this book well portrays the image of a depressed patient. Everyone is an indispensable part in the process of Harry being slowly redeemed. Secondly, this book has much fewer casualties than the original. Sirius, Cedric and many other characters were still alive and well after the war. Finally, the character of Daniel was also perfectly created, an infatuated, cold, strong, and dedicated Obscurus. Finally, we were told that Daniel is the number one personality. The real Harry really shocked me. In summary, this is a very good novel, which makes up for a small number of character creation holes in the original work and the regrets left by readers after reading the original work. I hope the author will get better and better, and his future works will become better and better!

A very good novel, the writing is very good (like it), the author is simply my Kamisama. I love his cute little Harry so much. A very realistic description, as if little Harry was standing in front of me alive. This kid is so cute. Like!

The early stages were really good. It felt like Harry was always changing, whether for better or worse. As the author said in the introduction, anything can be knocked down. It is true that anything can be knocked down. Sirius, Snape, Draco, even Cedric All of them can kowtow very well, except for the official match To be honest, I came here for the official wife Narcissus. I watched more than half of it, but the official partner didn't appear at all. I was very disappointed, so I didn't finish reading it. One third of the way through, I started to give up. Because the official wife doesn't even have a shadow It's good, it's really good, but if you're looking for an official match, you'll be disappointed. I hope the author can explain in the introduction that the official match appears later. I can't continue. Have you watched it? Can you tell me whether Xiaoha's depression got better at the end?

The sweet little couple are HP Narcissus! ! Don't trust others, it's really sweet! Not cruel at all! I finished reading it in one sitting and I really didn't shed any tears. Finally, he, Harry opened an orphanage~

After reading it, it's really sad. The author's writing is really great😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭I really cried when I read the title of the book after reading it😭😭😭It feels like what Daniel said to Harry😭woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo To To Tovin to 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Some parts really made me feel distressed and felt that this would develop like this. The author's writing style is really good. This novel really touched my heart! This novel is really good, I highly recommend it!

I read it in a hurry, and generally felt that the writing was pretty good. It's just that those who post comments are a little too extreme. They will criticize a character if he is not nice to Harry, so I suggest you turn off the comments when watching. (I feel like the whole world owes them [face covering]). There are too many flaws to mention... (On Tomato, you can even see complaints about librarians) The plot is pretty good, but it's so cruel [I'm about to cry]. The overall atmosphere feels depressing and depressing, but the ending is also very good. Harry is a good baby, I feel sorry for Harry [crying], Sirius is also saving Harry, and everyone is fine [crying]

It's really beautiful, and the author's descriptions are so detailed. Harry, who was sensible and had low self-esteem during his painful childhood, was unwilling to contact others and was at a loss. In the care of his friends at Hogwarts, he felt the warmth little by little. Everyone changed from the process and ending in the original book. The arrogant Draco also became Ron and Harry's friend. Severus and Sirius quarreled, changing the view that Harry is a substitute for others. The relationship between teachers, students, and classmates at Hogwarts is super healing, warm, and beautiful. I really like this book [love]

The description of children with depression in this book made me feel very real. There is no particularly fantasy plot. The plot is very consistent with common sense and logic. The characters are not OOC. It describes the complex and delicate personalities of many characters. It is really well written! Especially the twist at the end really opened my eyes. No one in the comments seemed to have thought of the author's ending in advance! The writing was very successful! The subject matter is also very novel

I finished reading it in one go. From the heartache and heartache at the beginning, to the suffocation of being unable to read the text, to the redemption and reversal later, I have become calm. This may be the best ending that Harry can go to under the big background. I have read many novels, and this is the most touching one, "The Dawn of Harry Potter", Born for You and Departed for You.

I originally came here for the unique plot, but the ending was quite shocking. It's been a long time since I've read an ending that left me heartbroken. We are a minority, but we are right, we can also become the unique scenery in each other's hearts. Come and read this book. The writing is also very good and the plot has a twist. Come and read it! ! !

It's a really good book. It's from my hp fan 🔝. It may have changed a lot in the middle, but in the end it's still a very good work. The plot is very good and the emotions are really delicate. It's especially easy for people to empathize with, especially in the early stage. I hope the author and everyone are well.

Nice! This book is one of the two best fanfics I have read so far. The ending is really shocking. To be honest, I would never have thought of such an ending. A very unexpected result, but after reading it and looking back at the content of the entire book, I suddenly felt that this ending seemed reasonable. It's a pity, but if the story has no regrets, how could it be so memorable? What stories can be told without regrets?