Fighting the War of Resistance Across the Cinematic Multiverse

The beginning is good, I hope the rest of the writing will be better! The new book has been reviewed and approved, and everyone can move to the new book. The new book seamlessly connects the world view of the old book.

The commander goes to the front line [covers face] Is the military blind? Weapons are ahead, but with so many equipments, it's so difficult to fight, and I'm going to die in a dog's belly [awkward laugh]

I think it's okay. Some readers have said that the protagonist cries when a soldier dies. Let me explain here. The protagonist is a non-military fan. When he first goes to the battlefield, his head is full of blood and he wants to lead the charge. The people below advise the protagonist not to go to the front line to be in danger, but the protagonist refuses to listen. After he gets to the battlefield, the Japanese invaders sneak attack and he is saved by the soldier next to him. The reason he cries later is probably because the protagonist feels that he killed the soldier.

Come on! No eunuch

It's well written and you can see that the author is constantly improving. I have some small suggestions to make the hierarchy clearer. I know it's a cool article, but try to be more rigorous.

Not much nonsense, it's readable, and it's pretty good, but the author doesn't know much about it, and it's easy to be criticized.

Come on, come on, it's just finished

Okay, when you explain this equipment later, you should forcefully explain it.

It's good to read. Good luck to the author.

Okay, but the weapons and equipment are too advanced. There is no passion, only a sense of equipment.