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It seems ok so far, but do you want to accept female [admiration]? The firepower has already been stretched like this, it might as well be a bit more arrogant. For example, if the protagonist does not develop his own camp, although he is cultivating immortals, he can have these in the early stage, otherwise it will be too boring, and there is no other choice but to fight monsters.

The author is parachuted [crazy] If there is something bad in his writing, I will complain about it here! I'm a new author, my abilities are limited, sorry for that!

Come on come on come on come on

Very messy. . .

Oops, that's good

Nanny article + intrusion, extremely poisonous.

I was also drunk, and I forgot how I died. If you travel through time, you will become a eunuch. Give up, give up

Great writing, highly recommended

The author is too indulging Qiu Sheng. For Qiu Sheng's idea, he will not kill the female ghost. He will slay demons and fight for life. For the protagonist, it is empty talk.

If you give Ren Tingting to Qiu Sheng, it's still acceptable. If you write him to Wen Cai, you won't be able to understand it.