My Little Pony Immortal Legend

What can I say? This book is very well written, especially the first chapter of Nightmare Moon. It tells about Nightmare Moon's gay pony Malia actually wanting to make dreams come to the real world and control the world. The author wrote it very long. The first chapter of "The Origin of Nightmares" can almost be a large chapter by itself. The description is very detailed, and the villain's IQ is very online. I wonder if there will be a finale if we get to the chapter of Discord? Then, let's talk about the protagonist - Meng Xi. The protagonist is Lu Ma at the beginning. Unlike the ordinary My Little Pony novels, this is already an attractive place, and the character is also very mature, and she seems to be some kind of queen. According to the chapter of Fable Dream, it seems that Twilight Sparkle drags Meng Xi down. , Causing the protagonist to be injured, and Meng Xi could become a god, but that would mean losing her emotions and her feelings for Twilight Sparkle, so Meng Xi did not do that. There were also three characters mentioned (Wushang, Wuying, Wuming). We still don't know what role they play. Let's go back to the topic. It also mentioned a new level. The level above Alicorn is World of Warcraft, and there are also rune settings, five spirit element settings, and more advanced realm five spirit element settings. It can be said that this novel is very rich in content and highly readable, and it seems to have something to do with CP. Just wait until the author writes this pair CP, so you can take it, and here, I feel that what Rarity writes is slightly different from what is in the animation, so I am a bit selfish, and there is nothing else. The novel is really written very well. It can be said that the author has made a good start. The next step is to see whether the author can continue to move higher.

1. The author has added many new elements to the original world view of the Pony series, such as the Celestial Beast on top of the Alicorn, as well as elemental magic such as metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. They also dug a lot of holes, which can only be said to be a show of sincerity. (Don't kill me QAQ) 2. The villains' IQs in this book are all online. If the protagonist did not travel here, M6 would definitely be sent. (I'm curious how the author of the disorder chapter will write it, and whether it will end directly in disorder) 3. The protagonist has a lot of personality in this book. He can be said to be decisive in his actions. He can be said to be merciless to the villains. He occasionally acts coquettishly towards Twilight. Moreover, the protagonist seems to like Twilight and Fluttershy very much. Twilight has been the protagonist's personal horse pillow and Fluttershy has been the protagonist's towel. The shortcomings of this book: 1. Some sentences in the book lack punctuation marks, and there are many adjectives that are not horse-like (it may be an oversight caused by too strong a code word. This situation occurs in basically all pony fanfics, and it is harmless.) 2. The protagonist's time travel is a bit too sudden. Although time travel stories basically follow this routine, the content of the previous life can be explained in the following text like Mu Xi next door. 3. Twilight Sparkle is portrayed a bit silly in this book. Some people may like it and some may not. It just depends on the individual.

It looks good, please update it soon. I like this kind of plot where M6 likes the protagonist.

Not bad, but I still like the Chinese version of names, Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, etc.

I'll give you four stars first, and I'll give you one more to make you proud.

I prefer the previous Chinese name. I feel uncomfortable when you change your name.

I really like it, so I'll give it 5 stars.

Come on, it looks pretty

Come on author, I am optimistic about you

The content is wonderful, but it's a pity. Too little. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

The author of this book wrote it carefully, especially the protagonist's character and various abilities. And the villain's IQ is basically online, unlike other novels where the villain is basically beaten to the ground by the protagonist, so my first feeling about this book is that it is very good. The author thought and wrote this novel very carefully. So I will support the author until the end. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very good, come on, pay attention to rest

The main reason is that there are many typos, and here I suggest that you describe the main character's operations in detail (if the writing is poor or you are too lazy to write, just pretend I didn't say it). My evaluation is: compared to other fans [I won't say how much better it is]

Looks good, come on!

Looks good, looking forward to the follow-up

No matter what, I think it looks good

It has great potential. Although the writing style needs to be improved, the content and plot are pretty good!

I hope the author will update one chapter a day, okay? The author is [crying] [please update]

If you really can, you must hold on. Not enough to watch

When did the author win the Easter match?

The content is substantial, the details are well grasped, and it has great potential.

It looks great, and the author won the resurrection competition! [Sinister smile]

Win the Easter match quickly! !

Although the reading time is not long, I feel that the writing is very good. The author must not be eunuch or end it prematurely. At least 200~500 chapters should be written first. [Laughing evilly][smiling]

Dear author, your writing is very good, but can you update it faster? Please

Added unknown plot points such as why Korra came to Ponyville, but it's pretty interesting anyway.

The world of girls is so big, I want to see it

When does the protagonist reveal his identity? ? ?