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Or I say that your books must be supported [cool]

Sword Art Online... Kirito... I remember it from a long time ago, and I remember this work. The male protagonist was... Ambiguous with many female characters? And this author, I guess, likes to have female characters get… um… beheaded What made me particularly uncomfortable after that was when Eugeo died, and then only one of Big Alice and Little Alice could survive... So the two of them left in vain, and then Alice followed Kirito Alas, anyway, after reading the comments at the time, I didn't have the heart to pursue it [face covering]

The author writes very well, I hope he won't stop updating. (Quietly BB: I hope the author will not remove the official match here. Even if it is done, it is okay. As long as it does not open a harem, it is acceptable (what kind of harem can a kid who looks about 12 or 13 years old have a harem)? I still hope that the official match will not be removed. The heroine will be Silica, who also looks 12 or 13 years old. Who can resist a naturally cute little lolita with twin tails?

Very well written. It makes me want to write a sword fanfic. I used to write about it in high school but didn't write it down. Now I want to write a book, but my writing skills are poor, so I can only write about it [smile]

Points are deducted. Since the protagonist has initiated a death duel, there will be a lot of trouble if you don't kill the opponent.

It can be said to be a very good second-generation SAO novel. At least I feel that there are no poisonous points. It may also be that I no longer care about some minor poisons and cannot find any poisonous points. It would be better if the heroine could choose Kiritani and Ye (of course, this short paragraph is my personal information, please take a look). I feel that I can still give it a five-point recommendation.

I'll give it four stars ⭐ first, and I'll add it later (for fear of falling in the middle), and the author, if there are irrelevant things at the end of each chapter, the experience is a bit poor [laughs awkwardly], you can put it in the comments at the end of the chapter, because basically readers will read the comments [learned] [eat melon]

A very good Sword Art Online fanfic. It is an invincible and refreshing type of novel. It is worth adding to your bookshelf. Why give it four stars? The author always likes to include a lot of PS at the end of the chapter, which greatly affects the perception and interrupts the substitution. Maybe the author likes interaction, but it is not recommended to be so comprehensive. You can do a small review of a single chapter once a week, like a light novel, as well as explanations from time to time (these can be put together) Another small problem is that the characterization of the protagonist is problematic. If you look at it according to light novels (the characterization of light novels relies on the readers' associations, often using out-of-the-air dialogues, mixed with some small details to highlight), it is okay, but the description is mixed with the writing method of many Internet articles, which is a bit different. The author needs to seriously consider the subsequent characterization. Of course, it is nothing more than the possibility of an invincible literary trap. Once I am invincible, there will be less characterization. If there is less characterization, it will become incomprehensible, and if it is not involved, it will create a sense of fragmentation. Of course, the opinions on the last question are just small suggestions. The author circle says it well: authors should have their own ideas and not be taught by readers to write books. But please consider the first suggestion, it is really uncomfortable for me, just like the author in the third and second dimensions - here I come! I jumped out again! I'm in again! I jumped out again! Come and hit me, you idiot!

Come on, I hope to become Tomato's best sword fan (author, tell me honestly, have you played a lot with Beng San and Genshin Impact? I didn't notice it at first, but there will be more of this later. The protagonist is a warrior and can forge. Is this a reference to General Raiden?)

It's very beautiful, but it's a pity. I had been planning to keep it for a long time, but suddenly I wanted to take a look, but the supply was gone.

The character design is still very restored. Although I watched the anime, I still hope that the author will continue to work hard.

Personally, it's not suitable for me to write about this kind of daily style? Maybe the style of the original work influenced me. After all, Ye's abilities and the system can obviously do better. He knows the plot and can cheat. It's really hot! [Laughing] However, the novel is a kind of sustenance for the writer, and the writing is relatively detailed. Unfortunately, it doesn't feel daily enough for me💧, but the overall impression is still good. I am also looking forward to how the author will write his own sao [] in the future.

I originally wanted to give it four stars, but the extra one is for Childhood. I hope that the follow-up will give a reasonable reason for the disappearance of the system, otherwise the disappearance and sudden appearance without reason will make the whole plot very far-fetched. (We still need to wait for the protagonist's legs to recover)

Will Asuna still be trapped in the Sky Tree by Sugou? To be honest. I don't really like the scene where Asuna is trapped in the Sky Tree. You can refer to the scene in the game Sword Art Online: Infinite Moment or the scene in Void Chapter when Sugou appears. There is no need to trap Asuna in the Sky Tree.

The main thing I want to say is, are there any orthodox Sword Art Online games that are relatively well-made and are available for PC and mobile phones? As a fascinating work, although it was not the first anime I watched, Kirito's sword light in 2012 was really attractive.

Come on, author! Sword is the first Japanese manga I have ever read. I am quite impressed by it. I often stayed up late at that time, until 12:00. I didn't go to bed until my parents urged me to. I have read many fanfics before, but I feel like yours is full of emotions without much change, and it satisfies my fantasies about swords.

It completely satisfied my fantasies about swords and made me fall in love with Kirito and Mr. Ya's CP again. Thank you so much to the author.

Yes, it's a very good sword novel. I highly recommend it. I haven't read Sword in half a year. It's very worth it.

One of the few sword fan novels, I didn't feel any poisonous points while reading it (at least I didn't feel it). I personally like the fact that it is not an official version. Although there are typos in a few places, the author has also actively corrected them. In short, I hope that the results of this novel will get better and better. Not bad, the author should continue to work hard

Although some people mentioned the Holy Mother in some places, I felt the same way at first. But then I thought about it, in Sword Art Online with the aura of the protagonist and the addition of cheats, it would be better for people to have more truth, kindness and beauty. And the protagonist is not just a "Madonna". All in all, I personally think it's okay [laughs]

Why did it disappear inexplicably?

Come on, sword fans are hard to find😭

Why was it taken off the shelves? Just keep it and then it will disappear? [Smile][smile][smile][smile]

I really want to ask if there is a female protagonist? [Eat melon]

With such a hook, wouldn't it be possible to play solo? Isn't it good to have it all to yourself?

Hahaha, it's well written and suits my taste, just... (Get it, egg noodles)

At first I thought it wasn't very pretty. Only when you see it will you know how beautiful it is. Highly recommended for book lovers to take a look.

One of the few sword fans

So who is the heroine?

It's a very good book. Don't stop updating it. Also, please join the book club group.