Warning⚠️⚠️⚠️Do not enter the dark history
Warning⚠️⚠️⚠️Do not enter the dark history
Warning⚠️⚠️⚠️Do not enter the dark history
I used my normal brain to write a reply, which is the key to the Southern Journal.
Why can't the ending be hidden? Why can't the ending be modified? Who is harming me? It turns out to be you, rotten persimmon!
Haha, I'm crazy.
Reader comments
① A novel about strong women, containing the thought of loving women, but it does not count as a novel about loving women. It is a bit confusing.
②The supporting characters who appear in more scenes are basically female. I prefer Shen Sanchun as the female lead to the female lead.
I'm still willing to give five stars to encourage this kind of article that doesn't make any mistakes. I hope the more I write, the better it will be.
It's finished, it's okay, the last part is better than the first one.
After reading it, it was well received and praised. The author said at the beginning that some people talked about the content of the base and questioned her writing an all-female story. I read the full text and this problem can be explained. The heroine took a slave (a real slave to squeeze out value and strictly manage it) in her own private territory (similar to the player's own birthplace), and the all-female base (Similar to a gathering place for female players) It is Wupai♂. The heroine is not a feminist character. She belongs to ordinary people with simple female intuition. Because she faces the natural empathy of women in her heart, she gradually shares the same path with the girls (female supporting characters have a lot of love), and you can see the heroine grow up little by little. The content was just about to be unfolded, and many of the conflicts in it came to an abrupt end. The author said that writing without an outline is too unrestrained, and he will not write about CP-free topics in the future.
It is said that the heroine is the "Madonna" (it is obviously a good word but it is used as an insult to women, it is more appropriate to say the Sacred Heart). The heroine exudes the Sacred Heart when she saves the captives, and nothing else. If some people think that the heroine uniting with other single women is a manifestation of the Virgin's heart, don't doubt it, he is just an ordinary male, and he has a holy disease, so he should be cured as soon as possible.
Beautiful! [Send heart][Send heart]
It can be seen that the author's writing power and the heroine's strength have improved together. The author has some sense of love for women, is sensitive, and understands the situation of women in this world, but maybe that's the only thing missing. There are many high-profile female characters, but no one is interested in them. They exercise well, are independent and self-reliant, and women help each other. At least most of their actions are female-oriented. It's fun to see the establishment of an all-female base! The ratio of female to male characters is 9:1.
The ending is too hasty, some settings and plots are not explained clearly, and the framework is large but not well expressed. This may also be the reason why the author said there is no outline for writing the article. .
I really like this kind of novel about strong women without cp. It's so difficult, but it's a pity that the author said that he won't write cp-free anymore. There are too few stories that specifically focus on single strong women, but female videos never belong to women or female characters. So my requirements are not very high. If people start writing and we can read them, and there are more and more, I will be very happy. I hope that soon there will be female videos that truly belong to us women, and that the basic base of female videos at that time will be of this level, which will be great!
(Other problems include degrading words for women and non-female-oriented words. I read too many articles about women who love women and it seems quite awkward. But the author said that what she wrote was not about women who love women. I won't hold it against the requirements of women's articles for the time being. I want to cherish food and encourage it.)
I really want to respect her choice of not wanting to write without cp, but I really, really hope that the author will continue writing! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart]
(Never take one step back, and then the feminist consciousness and even the female consciousness will completely disappear, and you will be in trouble [fear][fear] the next year. I have seen too many things like this, don't do it!!)
The all-female setting is quite nice. The central idea is to love women. Some men joined the base in the middle, but they were all kicked out later without causing any problems. Later, the admission standards were also quite strict. I think the overall shortcomings are not concealed. I support it.
No CP, no ambiguous objects, strong women, sympathetic but not overwhelming, all-female base, more female supporting characters than male supporting characters, and the characters are well-drawn. Worth watching! ! !
The writing style is very good. Come on, come on
The basic tone is good. The protagonist uses excess materials to help others without affecting himself. Some people say this is a thunderbolt. But if we are at the bottom in the game, don't we want someone to help us like this? I don't think it is a thunder because the heroine is not the kind of brainless virgin, and the author's thoughts expressed are also very girl-loving. It is a pity that the acquisition of materials is not described in detail. Many of the important props are skipped directly, causing the protagonist to get whatever he needs next time. It feels like you can have whatever you want, and it is a bit boring to get whatever you lack, but the flaws are not concealed. As a free novel, Tomato is pretty well written, and there isn't much of a problem with the writing.
All-female base race high! [Praise]
It's pretty, the settings are great
It's quite good to read. Compared to other books, it has a bit of a girl-loving plot but not much. Come on! [Love]
Mrs. Rice rice. Hungry
I think it looks great!
I feel like I can continue writing. But it's over
It's pretty, a little more beautiful than what you can see
① A novel about strong women, containing the thought of loving women, but it does not count as a novel about loving women. It is a bit confusing. ②The supporting characters who appear in more scenes are basically female. I prefer Shen Sanchun as the female lead to the female lead. I'm still willing to give five stars to encourage this kind of article that doesn't make any mistakes. I hope the more I write, the better it will be. It's finished, it's okay, the last part is better than the first one.
After reading it, it was well received and praised. The author said at the beginning that some people talked about the content of the base and questioned her writing an all-female story. I read the full text and this problem can be explained. The heroine took a slave (a real slave to squeeze out value and strictly manage it) in her own private territory (similar to the player's own birthplace), and the all-female base (Similar to a gathering place for female players) It is Wupai♂. The heroine is not a feminist character. She belongs to ordinary people with simple female intuition. Because she faces the natural empathy of women in her heart, she gradually shares the same path with the girls (female supporting characters have a lot of love), and you can see the heroine grow up little by little. The content was just about to be unfolded, and many of the conflicts in it came to an abrupt end. The author said that writing without an outline is too unrestrained, and he will not write about CP-free topics in the future. It is said that the heroine is the "Madonna" (it is obviously a good word but it is used as an insult to women, it is more appropriate to say the Sacred Heart). The heroine exudes the Sacred Heart when she saves the captives, and nothing else. If some people think that the heroine uniting with other single women is a manifestation of the Virgin's heart, don't doubt it, he is just an ordinary male, and he has a holy disease, so he should be cured as soon as possible.
Beautiful! [Send heart][Send heart] It can be seen that the author's writing power and the heroine's strength have improved together. The author has some sense of love for women, is sensitive, and understands the situation of women in this world, but maybe that's the only thing missing. There are many high-profile female characters, but no one is interested in them. They exercise well, are independent and self-reliant, and women help each other. At least most of their actions are female-oriented. It's fun to see the establishment of an all-female base! The ratio of female to male characters is 9:1. The ending is too hasty, some settings and plots are not explained clearly, and the framework is large but not well expressed. This may also be the reason why the author said there is no outline for writing the article. . I really like this kind of novel about strong women without cp. It's so difficult, but it's a pity that the author said that he won't write cp-free anymore. There are too few stories that specifically focus on single strong women, but female videos never belong to women or female characters. So my requirements are not very high. If people start writing and we can read them, and there are more and more, I will be very happy. I hope that soon there will be female videos that truly belong to us women, and that the basic base of female videos at that time will be of this level, which will be great! (Other problems include degrading words for women and non-female-oriented words. I read too many articles about women who love women and it seems quite awkward. But the author said that what she wrote was not about women who love women. I won't hold it against the requirements of women's articles for the time being. I want to cherish food and encourage it.) I really want to respect her choice of not wanting to write without cp, but I really, really hope that the author will continue writing! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart] (Never take one step back, and then the feminist consciousness and even the female consciousness will completely disappear, and you will be in trouble [fear][fear] the next year. I have seen too many things like this, don't do it!!)
The all-female setting is quite nice. The central idea is to love women. Some men joined the base in the middle, but they were all kicked out later without causing any problems. Later, the admission standards were also quite strict. I think the overall shortcomings are not concealed. I support it.
No CP, no ambiguous objects, strong women, sympathetic but not overwhelming, all-female base, more female supporting characters than male supporting characters, and the characters are well-drawn. Worth watching! ! !
The writing style is very good. Come on, come on
The basic tone is good. The protagonist uses excess materials to help others without affecting himself. Some people say this is a thunderbolt. But if we are at the bottom in the game, don't we want someone to help us like this? I don't think it is a thunder because the heroine is not the kind of brainless virgin, and the author's thoughts expressed are also very girl-loving. It is a pity that the acquisition of materials is not described in detail. Many of the important props are skipped directly, causing the protagonist to get whatever he needs next time. It feels like you can have whatever you want, and it is a bit boring to get whatever you lack, but the flaws are not concealed. As a free novel, Tomato is pretty well written, and there isn't much of a problem with the writing.
All-female base race high! [Praise]
It's pretty, the settings are great
It's quite good to read. Compared to other books, it has a bit of a girl-loving plot but not much. Come on! [Love]
Mrs. Rice rice. Hungry
I think it looks great!
I feel like I can continue writing. But it's over
It's pretty, a little more beautiful than what you can see