I Took a Shower Right After the Game Started, and I Rushed to Rub the Monkey King's Back.

The plot is endearing and well-written. But there are a few things to avoid. 1. Maybe this was originally an article about wanting to marry a great sage, but the author made the heroine look like a "spoiled wife" as he wrote it. The heroine is a mythical beast, and she also cares about her image of "eating a lot" and serving in the beauty service. 2. Some words are very inappropriate. When there is a group of female immortals, the author uses the word "female relatives", and when there is a group of male immortals, the author uses the word "men". The titles of female and male immortals are incorrect. 3. The heroine's strength, treatment and personality are not equal. In the early stage, the heroine thought that she was an ordinary deer, still in the growth stage, and it was normal to be weak. She had not yet broken away from the thinking of ordinary mortals. Later, the heroine ate the divine fruit and practiced alone for a long time. Her cultivation level increased a lot, and she knew that she was a divine beast. She was directly named a deity in the Heavenly Palace (although she was not a high official, her starting point was much higher than that of other gods). Always cooking, cooking, cooking. Shangtian Palace also cooked, and a group of gods came to eat and praised her delicious cooking. (I personally think this is very magical and dramatic. Of course, some people like it and I don't object to it.) But! There is no change in the character, and it does not show any growth and understanding of the heroine. Logically speaking, it is impossible for her to transform from an ordinary modern person to an immortal cultivator without insights. The heroine is written too flat by the author. All her improvements in strength and all changes in her identity seem to be for the purpose of better marrying Sun Wukong and becoming more worthy of Sun Wukong. I am not writing so much just to criticize, I just want to make my voice heard and let more female video authors and readers pay more attention to the heroines in my novels and pay attention to your own words (try not to use words that are asymmetrical between men and women, and do not use words that insult women). I hope to see more works that have both love and life insights! I think readers and authors have to work together. Only with readers' feedback and authors' creativity can more and better female works be born.

This book allows us to see another image of the Monkey King. It can be said that all his advantages are more perfectly displayed. I think this book has written a Monkey King who can have love, hate, and hatred. The great love in the world also includes the love between men and women. I think this version of the Monkey King is more full of vitality. I can't stop reading it. It is a very perfect book.

It's really good-looking. They express many things very directly, which is good. Don't have so many misunderstandings and messes. What are you doing with such misunderstandings? I asked you to read an article to read a refreshing article, to read a sweet article, to read an interesting article, but you ended up with this I've made a lot of conspiracy theories, and I've been trying to resist and refuse, but what are you doing? I'm really convinced. If you want to do this kind of thing, why do you write the last one with a very sweet ending? I don't think you can be more direct. Let's talk about love, not political discussions, court confrontations or anything like that. So it's really well written and worth recommending, so please keep reading.

I really recommend reading this book I really love the author, and the heroine's character is also very good. In the later stage, we BTs really fell in love with each other. I didn't expect that Brother Monkey turned out to be MS.

It's so beautiful. Who hasn't fantasized about falling in love with a great sage? It's really beautiful [Blow Kiss] More from the author

Sun Wukong is also my idol. The author is so awesome. The character design of the monkey fits perfectly. The author is so awesome! I finally experienced the feeling of not wanting to recommend myself to others, but why is this rating only 8.0? I think it's worth 9.9. The less 0.1 Would make the author proud.

It's really beautiful, the author's writing is very good, and the heroine is also very good, not a virgin. The Great Sage is really doting when he is in love. There was no meat in the end (due to being reported many times). The plot is also compact, the arrangement is reasonable, there are tears, and it is not OOC. Oh my gosh! It's really good to watch, it would be great if there were extras, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo......

Lang Wan, Lang Wan, ah ah ah ah ah Lang Wan is really good. I think Erlang is really more charming than Brother Monkey. Brother Monkey is impulsive and brave and full of enthusiasm, while Erlang is calm and calm after years of courage and planning. Being with someone like Brother Monkey, although he is sincere, he keeps getting into trouble because of his sincerity and lack of consideration for the consequences. Such a life of constant fear is thrilling at the beginning, but over time it makes people anxious and exhausted. To put it bluntly, such a person is selfish. He is more like a fire and is suitable for viewing from a distance. Erlang is a type who has a righteous heart but can also consider the feelings of people around him. He is not easily impulsive and has his own principles in doing things. Hahahahahaha, to sum up, Erlang's long flowing water is more attractive to people like me who have experienced some punches and kicks from society than the great sage's burning oil. [Sinister smile]

I especially like it. It is the first novel about Monkey Brother CP that I read in Tomato.

How can I put it this way, I just like to watch this kind of things related to Brother Monkey, and they are not cruel and very sweet [Adoration] [Blowing Kisses] [Love]

The plot is very good, but there is a bit of a trap for the sake of trapping, and the Great Sage is a bit too impulsive in the middle. Logically speaking, I won't be so impulsive, just to set up the plot. But overall it's pretty good Ah, no, no, I still have to complain. The male protagonist is straightforward and reckless, and the female protagonist has said it many times, but once the female protagonist is not around, she doesn't listen. There is a feeling of forced intelligence. The heroine is the mother of all waters, an ancient divine beast, and her strength is really special. The heroine can tell which one is fake at a glance, but the hero cannot tell that the heroine is fake.

It's so good to watch. When Brother Hou decided that Xia Wan was definitely not his mother, I laughed to death. The reason is that there are more than 20 peaches in one meal, five meals a day. Brother Monkey is either looking for fruits or on the way to find fruits every day (つx)つ🍑 Excerpts from the book: This is Xia Wan's description of Brother Monkey: "The man I like must be as beautiful as a tree facing the wind, with a clear mind, handsome, lively and cute, heroic in appearance, and uniquely discerning." "Kind-hearted, gentle and considerate, pure-hearted, fiercely loyal, omnipotent, omniscient, able to fight against injustice, upright." "Don't be afraid of power, dare to speak out, neither humble nor arrogant, speak your mind, and be invincible." Xia Wan became more confident as he spoke more energetically. The rich are rich in all kinds of ways, the poor are poor in all kinds of ways, and the miserable people are poor, miserable and prone to disasters. The three words "Bi Ma Wen" really poked at Sun Wukong's sore spots. In his life, he only had two pains and three weaknesses, namely: ——Xia Wan, Bi Mawen ——Xia Wan, Huaguoshan, brothers. I want to cry here: "I thought I could change your ending, but in the end, I was just the extra chess piece." "Now that the chess game has been decided, the useless chess piece is out..." Xia Wan looked at him distressedly before disappearing. And the place where she disappeared was covered with daisies. Sun Wukong had given her away many times. It symbolizes hope, courage, peace, innocence, purity, and love deep in the heart.

I also like Yang Jian very much. Although Monkey is my childhood idol, this is the first time I hate why it is not the two male protagonists. My heart is half wowed and half sweet. Every time I see the plot of Erlang Shen, I automatically bring into mind Jiao Enjun's face.

Very good! It's the first time I've seen a great sage fall in love with a happy ending! Although the true identity of the heroine is awesome, I feel like she is a bit put off. She keeps emphasizing that she is a squishy mage, but she doesn't even work hard to practice, just waiting for the plot to develop and successfully regain the mana from her previous life! Could it be that those who are favored are confident! But the overall plot is still very interesting to watch! I love Patriarch Bodhi!

Madam, madam, you are so pretty! ! ! Monkeys are not OOC at all! Both the male and female protagonists have mouths, but the one that pokes me the most is the monkey tail setting. I really like it! ! The image of the heroine is very full, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, great author, I will follow you for the rest of my life! ! ! !

I have read many articles about the Great Sage, but this one captured my heart the most. The heroine's wisdom and ability to find the key to the problem is the most gripping! Moreover, she is not dependent on the Great Sage and has her own methods to create an independent character for the heroine. There is no misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists running in both directions, and the chapters are compact and not procrastinating, with core content. Very recommended Both male and female protagonists have mouths! !

This is too arrogant, so I asked anyone who had never dreamed of Monkey King, the Monkey King, when they were young. The character portrayal is also very consistent with the original work. Although the great sage is emotional, the feeling of gradual and steady progress after hundreds of years of getting along is reasonable! Come on! [Love][love][love]

Do you know, this subject matter is really novel and interesting. It feels like parallel time and space, different experiences, and many adventures. The main thing is that it has the idol Monkey King. It is like a virtual game, but it is the life of the heroine. Emm is the combination of reality and imagination. It feels like a dream and very real. (I don't know if I describe it this way). I feel attracted to me and want to read on. Good review [blowing kiss]

Sun Wukong's private series is so good. After watching it, I can only say that I loved it. It was so good!!! I watched it in three days and felt a little familiar. Maybe I saw some clips a year or two ago, but I really deleted a lot of what I wanted to watch. Xia Wan immediately hugged his arm and said, "Like is what you think in your heart, love is taking action, liking is having the present, and love is planning for the future." Sun Wukong: Sure enough, she is charming and charming, charming people every step of the way. Move the lotus steps gently, shining brightly to disturb the sacred heart (shining brightly) Before Xia Wan could nod his head, he read: "With my life, I will connect with your soul. I will play the music to the sky above and the hell below. It is a metaphor for the three realms. Heaven and earth serve as mirrors. The sun and the moon are of the same heart. If you fail a beautiful woman, your body will die and your path will disappear." These are some of my favorite jokes. They are really good. How can I put it? The foreshadowing is really great. The heroine is even greater than Nuwa.

The author is really rigorous. He studied the book "Journey to the West" very carefully. When I read it, I felt that I didn't understand a lot of things and then the author popularized the science. I have read the 1987 version of "Journey to the West" and other books, and I'm not sure I know that well (not that I'm saying that, most people should have read "Journey to the West" every day when they were children). Remember [full]) It shows that the author is really attentive, and the heroine is very determined to choose the Great Sage. No two people are particularly sweet. [Send Heart] I twisted into maggots on the bed after watching it. There were twists and turns along the way (but they love each other very much). The two finally got married. After reading it, I am still unsatisfied. I highly recommend [crying]

The subject matter is very novel, and the author's writing style is also good.

The literature is very good, the plot is good, and the characters are very popular with me. [Admiration] It's good to watch. The only drawback is that it's not interesting enough.

The writing and plot are really great! ! The characters are also very three-dimensional. I am not stingy with my praise. I would like to say that the characters are brought to life and the emotions are well rendered. It is easy to immerse yourself in the plot when reading! The emotions of the characters in the book are well conveyed to the readers through the author's pen! The characters are brave and resourceful, dare to love and hate, and see through the hypocrisy of Heaven and the West. In the author's writing, each of the characters seems to be flesh and blood, slowly telling their stories and emotions to the readers through words. The plot is ups and downs without being abrupt, and the connection is natural (gosh, I really fell in love with it!), Coupled with the author's excellent writing style, it gives people a good impression. I highly recommend it! ! ! !

I really like the heroine and Brother Monkey, but Erlangshen's feelings are a bit confusing, and his liking for the heroine is a bit abrupt. It feels like it is just to promote the development of the plot. In the end, Tathagata was defeated by Huanying who broke the seal. It was reasonable and reasonable. However, there was not much emphasis on this character. It seemed that he was created just to defeat Tathagata. There was no sense of the plot developing naturally, and it seemed a little deliberate. But overall it's still good, I like the relationship between the male and female protagonists.

This is the best one I have read among all the Monkey King fanfics. The Monkey King is not OOC, and the author did not make up myths. The heroine in the first article is weak, and she becomes stronger later. Some people say that when the heroine becomes stronger, she will always be a bit girly, but I think it is normal. From the beginning, the heroine has clearly liked Sun Wukong. It is normal for the heroine to care about her image in front of Crush, but she does not care about her image in front of other people. In this way, it is an image that is not easy to mess with in front of other people, only in front of Monkey Brother, and the heroine is a girl from the modern past, so it is normal to care about the appearance, and the author does not often mention this point, but it is regarded as a dessert. The heroine becomes stronger in the later period, but she is not the kind to hang up to the sky. I am very annoyed. If you like the kind of heroine novels, this is not suitable. Let's talk about Monkey Brother. He really restored his character in the early stage. If you think about it, it seems that he can really do it. I have read both the original book and the TV series version of Journey to the West. I think the character design is very consistent, but it is a bit inconsistent in the later period. The plot is forced to return to the right track and cause trouble in heaven. That part, that part is the original plot of the original work, which gives me a strange feeling, but it is only one or two chapters, which can be skipped. There is also a small time travel in the later period. Maybe the main character is focused on the female protagonist, so the male protagonist feels a bit like an ordinary romance novel. If you don't like it, you can skip it, but there are only a few chapters. Overall, the flaws do not hide the flaws. It is a novel that fits the character very well. It is more like a real fantasy of a girl who likes Monkey King.

It's okay. The writing style is funny and quite fun. The Great Sage is very expressive and not OOC. This is the reason why I gave it four stars. But I really don't like the description of the Jade Emperor and Queen Mother in Heaven. Since the heroine is given a powerful background and life experience, why bother to make the heroine restricted and angry in Heaven? The Jade Emperor and Queen Mother are like emperors and queens, and they are just like palace fights, which is very unpleasant. Not a cool article

The writing is very good, each character is well written, there are no surprises, and it is attractive to watch. The image of Sun Wukong is similar to that on TV. It's nice to look at, not clichéd, not draggy, and attractive.

This book is really worth reading. The Monkey King we come into contact with is all about friendship. This book writes about Sun Wukong's love. Although the plot is a bit unrealistic, it is really good. I want to fall in love quickly. The heroine traveled from the future and was adopted by Sun Wukong. The heroine knows the future ending of the hero. In order to avoid the current situation in the future, the heroine helps the hero everywhere. They have gone through many difficulties. The heroine has always insisted on pursuing Sun Wukong. Although Wukong does not understand love, his performance can make his aunt laugh every time. A pure and pure big boy, Wukong is extremely protective of his shortcomings and will never let anyone bully the heroine. This article still has some scripture-seeking plots, but very few. Tang Monk got married in the daughter country [laughing], the scripture-seeking team was disbanded, and the rest of the people all returned to Huaguoshan. Witnessed by many brothers in the heaven, the male and female protagonists held a wedding. After experiencing various difficulties, the ending was happy [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

It's so pretty! Wan Wan and Monkey Brother are the couple that I fell in love with! I could tolerate a little bit of abuse in the middle, and then I started to take the lessons. I thought I would finish the whole process, but it didn't happen. To be honest, I really wanted to skip the short section of reading the scriptures based on the original work, because it felt no different from reading the original work. But in that regard, there were differences later on, so I didn't skip it. There was also the scene where the Demon King went to Lingshan to kill him. I was really happy. He was plotting this and that in order to promote Buddhism. The more I watched, the more excited I became. Still fake, mouth area. Generally speaking, it can be said in two words: beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have been a bookworm for many years. I think the writing is good and the protagonists, supporting characters and passers-by all feel alive. No matter how different the direction of this book is from the original book, like the good guy winning version of Journey to the West, the Western conspiracy did not succeed, and there are ups and downs along the way. I am really speechless.