Great Sage, If You Won’t Marry Me, I Can Throw a Punch or Two

The plot is endearing and well-written. But there are a few things to avoid. 1. Maybe this was originally an article about wanting to marry a great sage, but the author made the heroine look like a "spoiled wife" as he wrote it. The heroine is a mythical beast, and she also cares about her image of "eating a lot" and serving in the beauty service. 2. Some words are very inappropriate. When there is a group of female immortals, the author uses the word "female relatives", and when there is a group of male immortals, the author uses the word "men". The titles of female and male immortals are incorrect. 3. The heroine's strength, treatment and personality are not equal. In the early stage, the heroine thought that she was an ordinary deer, still in the growth stage, and it was normal to be weak. She had not yet broken away from the thinking of ordinary mortals. Later, the heroine ate the divine fruit and practiced alone for a long time. Her cultivation level increased a lot, and she knew that she was a divine beast. She was directly named a deity in the Heavenly Palace (although she was not a high official, her starting point was much higher than that of other gods). Always cooking, cooking, cooking. Shangtian Palace also cooked, and a group of gods came to eat and praised her delicious cooking. (I personally think this is very magical and dramatic. Of course, some people like it and I don't object to it.) But! There is no change in the character, and it does not show any growth and understanding of the heroine. Logically speaking, it is impossible for her to transform from an ordinary modern person to an immortal cultivator without insights. The heroine is written too flat by the author. All her improvements in strength and all changes in her identity seem to be for the purpose of better marrying Sun Wukong and becoming more worthy of Sun Wukong. I am not writing so much just to criticize, I just want to make my voice heard and let more female video authors and readers pay more attention to the heroines in my novels and pay attention to your own words (try not to use words that are asymmetrical between men and women, and do not use words that insult women). I hope to see more works that have both love and life insights! I think readers and authors have to work together. Only with readers' feedback and authors' creativity can more and better female works be born.

This book allows us to see another image of the Monkey King. It can be said that all his advantages are more perfectly displayed. I think this book has written a Monkey King who can have love, hate, and hatred. The great love in the world also includes the love between men and women. I think this version of the Monkey King is more full of vitality. I can't stop reading it. It is a very perfect book.

I really recommend reading this book I really love the author, and the heroine's character is also very good. In the later stage, we BTs really fell in love with each other. I didn't expect that Brother Monkey turned out to be MS.

It's really good-looking. They express many things very directly, which is good. Don't have so many misunderstandings and messes. What are you doing with such misunderstandings? I asked you to read an article to read a refreshing article, to read a sweet article, to read an interesting article, but you ended up with this I've made a lot of conspiracy theories, and I've been trying to resist and refuse, but what are you doing? I'm really convinced. If you want to do this kind of thing, why do you write the last one with a very sweet ending? I don't think you can be more direct. Let's talk about love, not political discussions, court confrontations or anything like that. So it's really well written and worth recommending, so please keep reading.

It's so beautiful. Who hasn't fantasized about falling in love with a great sage? It's really beautiful [Blow Kiss] More from the author

Sun Wukong is also my idol. The author is so awesome. The character design of the monkey fits perfectly. The author is so awesome! I finally experienced the feeling of not wanting to recommend myself to others, but why is this rating only 8.0? I think it's worth 9.9. The less 0.1 Would make the author proud.

It's really beautiful, the author's writing is very good, and the heroine is also very good, not a virgin. The Great Sage is really doting when he is in love. There was no meat in the end (due to being reported many times). The plot is also compact, the arrangement is reasonable, there are tears, and it is not OOC. Oh my gosh! It's really good to watch, it would be great if there were extras, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo…

Lang Wan, Lang Wan, ah ah ah ah ah Lang Wan is really good. I think Erlang is really more charming than Brother Monkey. Brother Monkey is impulsive and brave and full of enthusiasm, while Erlang is calm and calm after years of courage and planning. Being with someone like Brother Monkey, although he is sincere, he keeps getting into trouble because of his sincerity and lack of consideration for the consequences. Such a life of constant fear is thrilling at the beginning, but over time it makes people anxious and exhausted. To put it bluntly, such a person is selfish. He is more like a fire and is suitable for viewing from a distance. Erlang is a type who has a righteous heart but can also consider the feelings of people around him. He is not easily impulsive and has his own principles in doing things. Hahahahahaha, to sum up, Erlang's long flowing water is more attractive to people like me who have experienced some punches and kicks from society than the great sage's burning oil. [Sinister smile]

I especially like it. It is the first novel about Monkey Brother CP that I read in Tomato.

How can I put it this way, I just like to watch this kind of things related to Brother Monkey, and they are not cruel and very sweet [Adoration] [Blowing Kisses] [Love]