Xiaoyao of Long Love Travels Back to After Running Away from Yushan

As a first time writer, this is already very good~! The idea is reasonable~ but there are also bugs. In the original work, Xiang Liu has been working as a Fangfengbei for more than 400 years, which means that Xiao Yao was rescued by Hong Jiang before she was born, and after Shen Nong destroyed the country, Xiang Liu returned to Hong Jiang. Even if Xiao Yao just wandered in the wilderness, there was no time to change this fate. In addition, it is not delicate enough, and the description of emotions and details can actually be strengthened to make it more attractive ~ I hope you will keep updating!

Jing is still smart, gentle and strategic, and has not been abused Xiaoyao has a good mind, spiritual power and identity, and has not been abused. Xiang Liu is alive, and there is no love that cannot be obtained, and there is no abuse. Xuanxuan, well, I got what I wanted in the end. Although I couldn't find my sister, I won't fall in love or be abused [laughing and crying] [Working on draft]

A super interesting Yao Jing novel with an interesting plot setting. The love stories of teenagers are always full of youth and ignorance. But there is also heartbeat and sincerity! Finally, I would like to thank the author again, it's great, it's really super nice [sending my heart]

It's already great for someone who is writing a novel for the first time👍👍👍 At least the development of your storyline is complete. Super powerful, better than most people, you can finish writing (≧∇≦)/

Jing and Xiaoyao deserve all the good things [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Please rate after reading the book! Every author who insists on finishing a book deserves respect! In fact, I also like the setting of this story, so it's not a shame to end it here. After all, my original intention has always been for Yao Jing, and a happy ending will fulfill all the wishes of the first season!

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The writing is very good and novel. Please give it a thumbs up to the author. [Like][Like][Like] It's very well written, I read it twice. Today I open another big Yao Jing chapter [Flying Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Adour][Adour][Adour][Adour]

It's pretty good, but the score is a bit low.

That's right, I don't like to see Xuanxuan turn into a dark person, so it's just fine as it is now.

1#Young Jing is indeed gentle and capable 2# Yao Jing is very sweet 3# Xiaoyao is still so full of vitality 4# Some places are very interesting, such as Fenglong, Chang, Cousin, etc., But they are too short.

Very beautiful! Come on, author!

The author's writing style is very delicate ~

It's pretty. Yao Jing has no regrets.

It's great, I love watching it, please update more, I will watch it every day [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Good, good, good

I watched it happily. Although I stayed up late again, I have a chance to see you again, my wife. I hope to see you again in the second season.

I really like this sweet plot. The drama feels so sorry for Xiao Jing.

It was well written and gave Yao Jing another more complete encounter.

Good looking, I love watching Yao Jing

I love Yaojing the most! ! ! Of course, I also love every character in Sauvignon Blanc, and this ending is very happy! ! ! Everyone has a good home

The plot is novel and in line with the character's personality

It's beautiful. Very interesting. I like it very much.

Very good oh oh

It's great to watch, and the ending is great!

Very good, good logic

The content of the story is very good, I like it very much

Very nice. I like it very much.

Very well written, I like it

Finally settled, the drama version is difficult to settle