Lost You Forever: Xiao Yao Transmigrates Back to After Leaving Jade Mountain

As a first time writer, this is already very good~! The idea is reasonable~ but there are also bugs. In the original work, Xiang Liu has been working as a Fangfengbei for more than 400 years, which means that Xiao Yao was rescued by Hong Jiang before she was born, and after Shen Nong destroyed the country, Xiang Liu returned to Hong Jiang. Even if Xiao Yao just wandered in the wilderness, there was no time to change this fate. In addition, it is not delicate enough, and the description of emotions and details can actually be strengthened to make it more attractive ~ I hope you will keep updating!

Jing is still smart, gentle and strategic, and has not been abused Xiaoyao has a good mind, spiritual power and identity, and has not been abused. Xiang Liu is alive, and there is no love that cannot be obtained, and there is no abuse. Xuanxuan, well, I got what I wanted in the end. Although I couldn't find my sister, I won't fall in love or be abused 😂 [Working on draft]

It's already great for someone who is writing a novel for the first time👍👍👍 At least the development of your storyline is complete. Super powerful, better than most people, you can finish writing (≧∇≦)/

A super interesting Yao Jing novel with an interesting plot setting. The love stories of teenagers are always full of youth and ignorance. But there is also heartbeat and sincerity! Finally, I would like to thank the author again, it's great, it's really super nice [sending my heart]

Jing and Xiaoyao deserve all the good things 😘😘😘

Please rate after reading the book! Every author who insists on finishing a book deserves respect! In fact, I also like the setting of this story, so it's not a shame to end it here. After all, my original intention has always been for Yao Jing, and a happy ending will fulfill all the wishes of the first season!

The writing is very good and novel. Please give it a thumbs up to the author. 👍👍👍 It's very well written, I read it twice. Today I open another big Yao Jing chapter 😘[Flowing Kiss][Adour][Adour][Adour][Adour]

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It's pretty good, but the score is a bit low.

1#Young Jing is indeed gentle and capable 2# Yao Jing is very sweet 3# Xiaoyao is still so full of vitality 4# Some places are very interesting, such as Fenglong, Chang, Cousin, etc., But they are too short.