[Hanhan Big Dog x Face-Controlling Big Salted Fish]
[Junior brother x senior brother]
Once Jiang Yunshu traveled through time, he became the cannon fodder for the popular BL novel. The original owner did everything he could to control heaven and earth, and died miserably in the end. Because his popularity was so bad, only his junior brother came to weed him in the end.
The system said: "Complete the task and I can send you home."
Jiang Yunshu was completely destroyed.
The system also said: "Dear, passive tasks will cause social death!"
Jiang Yunshu: "For example?"
System: "Public your browsing history~"
Jiang Yunshu: "... Well, actually, I suddenly remembered that the faucet in my house was not turned off."
So, in order to complete the task and return home safely, Jiang Yunshu began to carry out plot tasks.
The system said: "The protagonist's appearance is amazing, you won't lose!"
So Jiang Yunshu turned around and faced the most beautiful person in the crowd and began to read the lines: "I was wrong. As long as the engagement is not terminated, I can do anything you ask me to do."
There was silence all around.
The system is furious: "The protagonist is attacking behind you! That's your junior brother! You've got the wrong person!!"
Ah? Junior brother? Is it that passer-by who has less than one sentence to describe it? No? Which passerby has such good-looking armor?
Jiang Yunshu silently put down the hand hooked on Jiang Xingxu's shoulder.
Jiang Xingxu, who recognized his mistake, just tilted his head and looked at him.
After the oolong, Jiang Ze had a little tail.
[Lightning protection: The writing style is a bit like that of a primary school student, with many emotional lines, no scheming, and a pure honest person! ]
Reader comments
The whole book is very restrained from beginning to end, with calm sadness in the early stage and light happiness in the later stage. There is no heart-wrenching pull. All emotions are as light as the evening breeze passing by the fingertips in the evening, and even sadness is too light to catch.
I like the characters of both protagonists, which is rare. Jiang Xingxu is emotionally stable, has a sense of justice, is transparent and frank, and I can see the exquisite and innocent heart in him. Jiang Yunshu is a person with a mottled background. His native family is not a good one, and he is rarely loved or affirmed. He despicably envies the family of the original protagonist in the book, but tries hard to survive because of Jiang Xingxu's words, "Many people will love you in the future."
After reading it, the previous life impressed me more deeply. The two met only briefly and separated in just two months. Trapped in the shackles of his mission, a sensitive and strong person received a pure and frank emotion without impurities for the first time. The ignorant boy who had just come down the mountain was attracted by his complex, broken and unique soul hidden under his calm appearance. But fate had already written farewell. Jiang Yunshu was like a gust of wind caressing Jiang Xingxu's face and left quietly, leaving the young man alone to stop where he was, standing in his position and understanding his "cannot be sad".
Fortunately, the ending is happy and stable, and the two of them can spend the rest of their lives happily ´ᵕ`
It's good to watch, the plot is well written, a little bit sadistic, Shen Yan'an is really good and bad, at first I felt a little pitiful that he was without a single person in the world. Who knew he was so bad, he was born a bad person. Gu (the original male attacker) is pitiful. He is led away by the plot and forgets his childhood sweetheart. His actions and thoughts are limited. Even so, he still subconsciously thinks of the original owner's preferences. In my first life, I thought of Jiang (the original owner) last. Zhang San was also at loggerheads with the original owner. He didn't like flowers, but he just took care of them because the original owner liked them. When I saw him waking up, I could tell at first glance that it wasn't him. The original owner is really distressing. Seeing himself being forced to do things he doesn't like, but unable to do anything, and finally determined to die, maybe this is relief. The main plot is also good, the plot is sweet and slightly sadistic, and the foreshadowing and pitfalls are filled in perfectly. Both endings are good and sweet, and the characters are well developed.
Teacher, I like mud, why do I write so well? [Code]
Teacher, I hate mud, why do I write it so cruelly [crying]
Lock the little couple together! ! The ending extra is so sweet that I eat it! !
After reading it, let's talk about it first.
The story is a piece of writing with a touch of sadness, and the characters are relatively novel. At least they can be separated from the characters of most novels and can leave an impression on people. The story is complete and basically complete. The narrative is also okay. The content is normal and people will feel comfortable after reading it.
But the problem is more obvious. The writing skills are relatively immature, and the characters are not fully developed enough. Take the villain as an example, to be honest, I don't feel much about it. The biggest feeling is that he is like cannon fodder. I didn't feel much about the protagonists, I just knew they were suffering and then I was gone. The depth and breadth of the plot can be improved.
All in all, as a small sweet article, it is completely qualified. But to go a step further, you have to do some more research.
Looking forward to the author's next work. [Like][Like][Blow kiss]
It's quite good. This is my first time watching Honest Man 1. It's very cute hahaha
Except for some flaws in the plot and a few minor holes that were not filled in, everything else is pretty good, but they are all minor issues that are innocuous and this book is primarily about emotional lines. The character design is also very good, and the protagonist's personality is well developed. However, in terms of the emotional line, I didn't expect that the kiss will only take place in chapter 99 of the main text... I thought it would progress faster, but in fact it is still relatively slow.
Anyway, it's quite a good read. It's just enough to read in my spare time when I'm short on books. I finished it in one day. I highly recommend it!
There are no flaws in the whole text. The author is very attentive and even includes the if line😭😭. It took me a day to read it carefully! I feel that the tone of the whole story is indeed a bit sad, with a feeling of inescapable fate. But the ending is the best for the current protagonist, he ending! ! 🔥🎸
Finally, I would like to say quietly that it is very suitable for writers to write about literary games!
(I feel the writing style is very suitable for
And when I finished reading it, I felt like I was playing with an ending, because the author's writing was a bit suspenseful and conspiratorial. When I read it, I felt chills in my back. When I read it, I secretly thought that the ending would be more terrifying and despairing. But in the end, it turned out to be too kind-hearted😭😭)
Finally, I wish 99🍰, my dear children, have something sweet!
It's a funny and light-hearted novel about cultivating immortals. I really couldn't stand the part where the protagonist takes laxatives. It's quite funny.
I quite like the settings.
At first I randomly opened a book to kill time. The more I read, the more I wanted to watch the ending in one go. But after I finished reading, I couldn't bear to leave. [Crying]
The plot and characters are very good and very interesting to read (I really can't write book reviews [crying])
Super shocking and delicious! ! !
The light interaction was so happy and I was so impressed by it.
Super invincible and beautiful, with a touch of happiness. The plot is eye-catching, especially the if line and the miracle.
The story is very interesting
It's beautiful, and there's a lot of foreshadowing.
It's so good, I stayed up late to finish watching it [Sending my heart to you]
When I read it earlier, I felt that I was very useless [face covering], but overall it was good, but the writing style felt a bit rusty. I hope the author can keep up his good work.
It's a bit funny, but also a bit sour in the middle. The characters are very good and the content is interesting. I like this ending.
The whole book is very restrained from beginning to end, with calm sadness in the early stage and light happiness in the later stage. There is no heart-wrenching pull. All emotions are as light as the evening breeze passing by the fingertips in the evening, and even sadness is too light to catch. I like the characters of both protagonists, which is rare. Jiang Xingxu is emotionally stable, has a sense of justice, is transparent and frank, and I can see the exquisite and innocent heart in him. Jiang Yunshu is a person with a mottled background. His native family is not a good one, and he is rarely loved or affirmed. He despicably envies the family of the original protagonist in the book, but tries hard to survive because of Jiang Xingxu's words, "Many people will love you in the future." After reading it, the previous life impressed me more deeply. The two met only briefly and separated in just two months. Trapped in the shackles of his mission, a sensitive and strong person received a pure and frank emotion without impurities for the first time. The ignorant boy who had just come down the mountain was attracted by his complex, broken and unique soul hidden under his calm appearance. But fate had already written farewell. Jiang Yunshu was like a gust of wind caressing Jiang Xingxu's face and left quietly, leaving the young man alone to stop where he was, standing in his position and understanding his "cannot be sad". Fortunately, the ending is happy and stable, and the two of them can spend the rest of their lives happily ´ᵕ`
It's good to watch, the plot is well written, a little bit sadistic, Shen Yan'an is really good and bad, at first I felt a little pitiful that he was without a single person in the world. Who knew he was so bad, he was born a bad person. Gu (the original male attacker) is pitiful. He is led away by the plot and forgets his childhood sweetheart. His actions and thoughts are limited. Even so, he still subconsciously thinks of the original owner's preferences. In my first life, I thought of Jiang (the original owner) last. Zhang San was also at loggerheads with the original owner. He didn't like flowers, but he just took care of them because the original owner liked them. When I saw him waking up, I could tell at first glance that it wasn't him. The original owner is really distressing. Seeing himself being forced to do things he doesn't like, but unable to do anything, and finally determined to die, maybe this is relief. The main plot is also good, the plot is sweet and slightly sadistic, and the foreshadowing and pitfalls are filled in perfectly. Both endings are good and sweet, and the characters are well developed.
Teacher, I like mud, why do I write so well? [Code] Teacher, I hate mud, why do I write it so cruelly [crying] Lock the little couple together! ! The ending extra is so sweet that I eat it! !
After reading it, let's talk about it first. The story is a piece of writing with a touch of sadness, and the characters are relatively novel. At least they can be separated from the characters of most novels and can leave an impression on people. The story is complete and basically complete. The narrative is also okay. The content is normal and people will feel comfortable after reading it. But the problem is more obvious. The writing skills are relatively immature, and the characters are not fully developed enough. Take the villain as an example, to be honest, I don't feel much about it. The biggest feeling is that he is like cannon fodder. I didn't feel much about the protagonists, I just knew they were suffering and then I was gone. The depth and breadth of the plot can be improved. All in all, as a small sweet article, it is completely qualified. But to go a step further, you have to do some more research. Looking forward to the author's next work. [Like][Like][Blow kiss]
It's quite good. This is my first time watching Honest Man 1. It's very cute hahaha Except for some flaws in the plot and a few minor holes that were not filled in, everything else is pretty good, but they are all minor issues that are innocuous and this book is primarily about emotional lines. The character design is also very good, and the protagonist's personality is well developed. However, in terms of the emotional line, I didn't expect that the kiss will only take place in chapter 99 of the main text... I thought it would progress faster, but in fact it is still relatively slow. Anyway, it's quite a good read. It's just enough to read in my spare time when I'm short on books. I finished it in one day. I highly recommend it!
There are no flaws in the whole text. The author is very attentive and even includes the if line😭😭. It took me a day to read it carefully! I feel that the tone of the whole story is indeed a bit sad, with a feeling of inescapable fate. But the ending is the best for the current protagonist, he ending! ! 🔥🎸 Finally, I would like to say quietly that it is very suitable for writers to write about literary games! (I feel the writing style is very suitable for And when I finished reading it, I felt like I was playing with an ending, because the author's writing was a bit suspenseful and conspiratorial. When I read it, I felt chills in my back. When I read it, I secretly thought that the ending would be more terrifying and despairing. But in the end, it turned out to be too kind-hearted😭😭) Finally, I wish 99🍰, my dear children, have something sweet!
It's a funny and light-hearted novel about cultivating immortals. I really couldn't stand the part where the protagonist takes laxatives. It's quite funny.
I quite like the settings.
At first I randomly opened a book to kill time. The more I read, the more I wanted to watch the ending in one go. But after I finished reading, I couldn't bear to leave. [Crying]
The plot and characters are very good and very interesting to read (I really can't write book reviews [crying])
Super shocking and delicious! ! !
The light interaction was so happy and I was so impressed by it.
Super invincible and beautiful, with a touch of happiness. The plot is eye-catching, especially the if line and the miracle.
The story is very interesting
It's beautiful, and there's a lot of foreshadowing.
It's so good, I stayed up late to finish watching it [Sending my heart to you]
When I read it earlier, I felt that I was very useless [face covering], but overall it was good, but the writing style felt a bit rusty. I hope the author can keep up his good work.
It's a bit funny, but also a bit sour in the middle. The characters are very good and the content is interesting. I like this ending.