The Wudao Heavenly Lord of Ordinary Cultivation

The three views are pretty good. If you want to seize the opportunity to rob a woman, don't fall into this trap.

I really hope the author sticks to it

It can be seen that this kind of book should not be easy to write. The character portrayal of Han Laomo after passing the volume of Qixuanmen and meeting the protagonist after the timeline. There may be some controversy among the original work party, but I still hope that the author will work hard. There are thousands of people with thousands of faces, and you can write what you want. Han Laomo has a life and death brother, which can be regarded as satisfying or making up for some regrets. Although the plot is a bit draggy at the moment, the flaws are not outweighed. The writing is very good. Full marks to the author for encouraging you to generate electricity.

Very good, but I think the protagonist's strength is not clearly described, and the gap between the realms of mortals cultivating immortals should be very large. It is impossible for there to be a plot of just entering the foundation and building the golden elixir. As a mortal fan, this setting is a bit difficult to accept. I hope the author can express the difficulty of crossing borders.

The first novels adapted from Mortals that I have read so far, I think they are quite good. Some of them are similar to the ones I used when I was gay. Most of them I still like the old devil Han who kills when he has the ability and runs away when he doesn't. The Sky Palm Vase is something that the old devil left for himself, so can it be understood that the old devil has been watching all this?

It's okay, but Dong Xuan'er made me deduct one star This book is very good, I look forward to following it up

It's very good-looking, okay, cool article, but why not add more? It's too short.

5 Stars for encouragement. In addition to liking the setting as the text and writing the plot, I still like it very much. I just want to read a novel about being friends with Han Li. The author should continue writing.

I feel good after reading the beginning. I like that there are very few fandoms like this. I hope there won't be too many women. A harem without a brain is a waste. The purple spirit in the anime is pretty good. You can consider giving him a try.

Super pretty! Super pretty!

Fighting Chicken among Spicy Chickens

Don't stop reading for me. If you stop reading for me, I'll take advantage of you!

It's very well written, don't keep updating. The conversion of talisman paper and spiritual stone in the early stage must be wrong. It is recommended that Han Paopao refine alchemy > formation > weapon refining. The protagonist can refine more weapons, create magical costumes for himself, and also make money. Han Paopao sells spiritual herbs, and the protagonist sells magic weapons. This way there is still content to write, how great. You can also open a harem, Chen Qiaoqian, Yuan Yao, Mu Peiling. Zi Ling and Nangong Wan can forget it and leave it to Old Demon Han.

It's pretty good, quite good. It's not like some novels where people think they are invincible because they lead the system. They don't even look down on the children of destiny. The children of destiny are not that simple...

Seriously, good writing, keep it up

I hope there is no heroine. If I still don't have enough to listen to, can you update it faster?

Please update it soon. It's very interesting. I hope it will be more enjoyable later on. It's the two Nascent Souls that made me very unhappy when I read the original novel. The protagonist kept being chased away.

I've been chasing it for a long time, it's very good-looking, especially the male protagonist is as handsome as me

Overall, it's pretty good. I believe the author can write better. I hope I can also see the protagonist grow up.

Very nice. Come on.

Yes, well written.

Although there are some minor flaws in the writing, compared with other mortal fans with the same history, the writing is already in line with my taste. I hope the author will continue to maintain it and update it soon! [Learned]

It feels good and bad at the same time, and there is a lot of poison. Such a good spiritual root cannot be used, nor can it be upgraded, nor can women be accepted. It seems to make you angry. I don't want to give you five stars.

I hope to come back and update it. The writing is very good, and the plot is not fan fiction. You care so much about it. What are you reading? Are you reading original fairy tales?

Although the writing style is very ordinary, I understand the plot and Han Li's relationship, and I have my own thoughts. Overall, it's good. I just don't know why some people keep giving low ratings.

When can the protagonist see Han Li again?

Very nice, very good

It can be very good!

Different plot, very exciting

Good, good, good