Longevity Begins with a Glimpse of Welfare

Come on, author. I originally wanted to give it a three-star rating, but the author listened to my advice. The system, dark blue, and double cultivation will become stronger. It is destined to be a good article. Don't abuse the master. Not to mention that with this strength, cannon fodder is not qualified. The main line is to become stronger through points. Strength points are still very strict. They will not skip battles at every turn. The writing is still good. The most poisonous thing is to take risks at the first and seventh levels of Qi training. Pure and pure Looking for death, but it would be good if the protagonist can learn the essence of Gou Zhidao from this incident. It is an inevitable event for the growth of the protagonist, and the most important thing is the following. This is the key point, and it is also what our readers like to read. It is related to the performance of the book. The author circles "Find a woman to marry a concubine to gain favor." I hope that the author Mouse Tail Juice has already lost some readers just by following the adventure. Also, ordinary women and low-priced female cultivators are just tool people. Moreover, the system is limited and cannot only have a few women. The protagonist is now cannon fodder. It is impossible to help women improve their qualifications for cultivating immortals. Unless the system really provides it, or the best dual cultivation techniques are introduced later, cultivating immortals and seeking immortality, all strength is king.

Really, the author has written this book very well, and the characters are vivid and vivid, but it needs some details. The author can add a little more, and can use certain words instead of letters. I must give you five stars for this book.

It's good, but the update is weak, and the protagonist is not very good at life, and always offends people with his words. In such a dangerous world, as a little shrimp character, he is not very cautious in doing things. These aspects need to be strengthened.

I've seen Chapter 32, it's okay. However, can you write a little more details? 😁😁😁

Five-star praise! It's really good

Not bad, not bad, the beginning is very good, a very solid fairy tale. The system has a low sense of presence and is purely for life-saving purposes. It does not overwhelm the system, which is good. As for the development of the later story, I hope it will not fall into clichés. Just don't write it like a novice's upgrade article. You can try to develop the female character from the perspective of development. It may be a good idea to raise every heroine well.

This book is a good book and a book written by a novice author. Nowadays, people who write novels seriously cannot make much money. They really provide entertainment for the spiritual world. Instead, most of the money is taken away by short videos. Maybe there are too few people who read novels for fun.

It's a fairly three-dimensional little character. You can keep watching it. I hope it won't end badly.

Update quickly, don't upgrade too quickly, we are all ordinary people, we like to see what's going on in the market [face covering]

Give you a good review, come on and work hard✧＼ ٩(눈౪눈)و /／✧ Come on, hey

It's free and good to watch. There are things that brothers will like to see. Come and watch it quickly.

The book is very good, but the author is not good

Looks good, don't be lousy

Come on come on come on come on

It's great, looking forward to the follow-up plot

That's right. Come on, author, increase productivity. Can't you be as productive as the protagonist?

Stay level, there is a possibility of becoming a god

Come on, author, speed up the pace

I was about to read it and then it stopped. I think it was pretty good for a new author. It's such a pity.

Yes, it is a steady and steady way of cultivating immortality, focusing on reality and being boring. Regardless of the length of the article, you have to chew it slowly to appreciate the depth. Anyone who understands its taste might as well read it again.

Not bad, the description of the plot process is quite complete, keep up the hard work.

I love reading this kind of article that is more logical as you slowly progress in cultivation. The author's writing style is smooth and humorous.

The writing is very good, I can read it.

As an author, I give myself a five-star rating, it's not too much [laughing and crying]

Forehead,………! ! ! ! ! An era is over

Come on come on come on come on

Just design a cool word

Not bad, looking forward to the next book

Well written, very good

The writing is very good and not pretentious, unlike those 2Bs who write that they are saints.