Infinite: I Lie Flat to Victory in a Livestreamed Game

Overall, it's pretty good. The relationship is a bit abrupt. It's probably because the psychological changes they had when they got along and the emotional changes they had towards each other were not written out, so it feels abrupt. Also, each copy ends so suddenly. It feels like the summary of the story will be summarized later, but the level is suddenly cleared. Like the one on campus, I thought I would tell the story of the boy later and tell him what to do, but he suddenly had to jump off the building, and he cleared the level directly after being rescued. It's okay to write it this way, but it just feels very sudden.

How can I put it, Chi Xia is too kind (that Shan, this kind of person does not need to be saved is a drag, Chi Xia is a bit of a virgin), Ji Yan has very few scenes, and the rest of the story feels a bit fluent (there is also the girl Jiang Chu, who directly changes to He Chu later, just in the front is Jiang Chu (don't ask, it is the name of the girl who first appeared), and I don't seem to see the girl telling Chi Xia her name)

Is it okay? But it feels really inexplicable. The relationship between attacking and receiving is a bit too sudden, and I don't feel that I can fight well. I think the combination of lame and mute is better, and I even think Cheng Yinian and Chi Xia are better. And it feels like the dungeon passed by at once. I feel like I can't even remember a few names.

I don't know why the score is so low. Although I haven't read much of it yet, I think it's well written. The dungeon length and difficulty settings are very reasonable, and the dungeon types are not very common, making it attractive and not procrastinating. The writing is also pretty good.

It's good-looking, but the emotional line is so sudden. There is no description of Wen's feelings for Chi in the first eighty chapters, but Wen suddenly falls in love with Chi after he regains his memory? ? ? I don't quite understand this, but the plot is very interesting and the pace is fast.

It looks good. It's just me. I feel that the two of them are together inexplicably. I don't understand the main story line or anything like that. The two brothers can write about it. It's so embarrassing [shy]

Gong and Shou suddenly get together. There is nothing to foreshadow the relationship between the two parties, and the subsequent plot ends quickly.

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This book is so wonderful, so wonderful! ! It's my favorite type, but why is it missing at the critical moment? Please give the author a boost in writing! ! ! Oh my god, it looks really good! ! !

The writing style is very good and the story is logical. It is not rambling. It looks more comfortable. The two male protagonists are also in a very comfortable state together. However, the relationship line feels strange from the beginning. From the recovery of the memory of the other male protagonist to the inexplicable warming of their relationship, coupled with the sudden heavy responsibility (clearing the dungeon) given to the male protagonist, it feels a bit rushed.