Hogg*********

Very good, I hope there won't be a female protagonist.

It's very interesting. The time traveler was shattered by the pursuers, so that part of his soul miraculously merged with an orphaned baby to become the current protagonist Hawk Mag. The time traveler and the system turned into a chicken called Heizi and a toad as big as a basketball, and the protagonist was the son of the chicken in disguise [thinking], interesting, so interesting, hahaha

Good Good, the author writes a daily life that is light and funny. I have a few suggestions. I hope Heizi and the system can be the old fathers who serve silently behind the hero's back. Don't do too many tricks and bring out extraordinary items from other worlds to help the protagonist.

Very good, I hope there is no love line

Help, why has it been removed from the shelves? Is there any other software that I can watch?

Because I was curious about the trap the protagonist's Animagus fell into, and it was really outrageous to me. I have thought about many species, but I never thought it would be this one. I have to say that the author's imagination is really big. It's really interesting, so when will the author update? Too little, not enough to watch👀[almost crying]

The most interesting Harry Potter fanfic I have read so far

To be honest, I love this version of HP so much. Zei Kuner is so interesting. According to this rhythm, I estimate that as long as the author stays out of the palace and works hard, before the book is finished, I will laugh out loud with a six-pack 😂😂😂😂

Oh, Animagus, it's become quite interesting [laughs evilly]

I can only say that Tomato is pretty good, but so far I feel that the relationship between Snape and Lily has not been resolved well. In the latest chapter, Lily even held hands directly. Because according to the original plot, the two parties basically broke up before Lily died. Even if it is explained after the resurrection, after all, Lily has the memory of living with James Potter. If you wait a few years or use other plots to promote the development of the relationship, it will be more normal. A few months is still a bit short.

It's very good. The plot is exciting and interesting, not cumbersome. It's one of the best Hogwarts fanfics I've ever seen. Come on, author [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]. Don't leave it unfinished, and don't stop updating it. Otherwise, I'll break the glass in your house.

It looks good. The author will give it a try and update it. Don't stop updating. The plot has ups and downs and is very attractive.

Is this book about two male protagonists?

It's okay. Soul fusion is great. The plug-ins are measured and there are no tricks.

It's beautiful and very interesting. It's so interesting and interesting, different routines. Many novels seem to have the same route, but I still enjoyed reading this one.

Good, good, good, good, five words.

Very interesting daily novel

Five-star praise! ! ! Come on! ! ! !

Why is it closed? What a great book

Great author, come on! ! ! ٩( 'ω' )و Get! Work hard to defeat the disease!

I read Chapter 20. It's very interesting, but I'm just curious about the fate of the time-travelers.

It's also a fanfic, why is his so beautiful! !

It's pretty good to watch, and it's also funny. It's a very interesting fanfic, but the rating is so low [Chigua] [Chigua]

Even if I kept updating when I was sick, he even added more updates. He really made me cry to death.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A very good book

Only two chapters have been updated today. Look at their production team he tui

All I can say is that it deserves five-star praise.

Very beautiful, very happy

Go gently, lightly, lightly, lightly