The Hidden River of Stars

This is my first attempt at writing a novel. Please bear with me. If you have any opinions, feel free to accept them all with an open mind. However, I also hope to fulfill my dream of completing a self-written novel in high school. The writing style has been improving, and the plot has been polished in my mind. I accept suggestions from all parties. There is definitely room for improvement. For example, the heroine's growth line can actually be written more. What makes love last is never the bright skin, but the attraction of the core. In the end, I only hope that everyone can meet their own "Ye Xinghui" and have their own star in their hearts.

The emotions are so delicate, I cried halfway through watching it 2023.10.6 There are still 20 days before your wedding, and there are still many words that have not been spoken. I clicked on wx and thought for a while, maybe this is fate. I wanted to use sweetness to comfort my heart, but in the end I found someone who was really abusive, but he abused me all in his heart. You gave me the courage to move forward, but I might just be a waste. I won't read the next volume, it should have a good ending. It's no use trying hard for something you don't deserve. Goodbye xwx, I don't like you anymore

I have read the updated chapters. The writing is very good and I also like the character design. I am a big fan of sister-brother relationships, so I have a special liking for this type of sister. I also hope it is he. Real life is already very unsatisfactory, and I don't want the characters I like to be together.

From the first chapter to the last chapter, not a single extra chapter was left. How should I put it? From Ye Xinghui's secret love to being revealed to the public, I felt deeply, but the process was still very good. There were no major misunderstandings, and in the end, I didn't miss the person I loved most. It's a pity that this book contains so little content that it feels like it ended shortly after I read it (¯へ¯)

The process of a sadistic novel with its ending is bumpy, but fortunately the ending is good. The male and female protagonists seem to have no words to speak, but in fact they may be too strong and don't like to drag others down. It reminds me of the song "Young and Promising" many times 🤦. Also, the "sibling relationship" in the novel actually does not involve the woman taking care of the man 🤔.

It's pretty good, the ending is quite satisfactory ~ I give it five stars However, when I read the previous chapter, I felt more and more uncomfortable and wanted to cry. "Secret love is a person's chaos." I have experienced it first-hand, and I really feel sorry for Ye Xinghui. Of course, I also envy him for finally marrying the girl he has been secretly in love with for more than ten years. But I can only silently let go, silently bless, and fall in love with someone I shouldn't like...

In the end, all the misunderstandings were solved perfectly, and all the pain was comforted. It was good and sweet, but I always felt that something was missing. Maybe I just like imperfect and sadistic stories. After all, a story that is too perfect seems a bit out of touch with life.

It's a good romance novel on a male channel, much better than some novels with a single female protagonist and sweet stories that always follow the same formula and template.

Yay, first book review

I have been in love with one person for more than ten years, and even if there is a misunderstanding in the middle, I still love her. Although when we reunited, the male protagonist had a very bad attitude, which made me feel unworthy of the female protagonist, but the reason was later explained. Some people only love one person in their lives, such as the male protagonist. Some people let go after being rejected, like Song Cheng. I still like the love that lasts until death, the dedicated, affectionate, gentle, delicate and considerate male protagonist. Later, the male protagonist became successful in his career and established a company. After marriage, I have a lovely baby. I am so happy. I wish them happiness forever. We are not so lucky in real life. Love in novels is very rare in real life. There are a lot of scumbags out there. The male protagonist really loves the female protagonist, manages all interpersonal relationships for her, and is her strong support. Their love goes both ways. Who doesn't want to be loved so firmly.