Western Fantasy: the Self-Redemption of the Sick Mage

In a way, it seems that you followed the same setting as the previous book (characters dressed as characters in the game world) (although time has passed and I can't remember the content, but I still have a general feeling). Although I don't know why I read it a little weird (maybe I am sick, or maybe you are a little unfamiliar with the author in the early stage). Anyway, it is not as comfortable as the previous book, but in any case, you are welcome to return, and I hope your book will become more and more popular. I will leave for now, and I will read it when I feel better. I hope you will have more readers by then.

The author still handles the details very well. I just hope this book's combat effectiveness doesn't collapse. Don't let the protagonist's combat power increase too quickly.

There are some flaws, but it is indeed well written. The flaws are not hidden, the characters are vivid, and there are no major poisonous points. I look forward to the follow-up. I hope the author will work faster (under the premise of ensuring quality). I also look forward to it if he can concentrate on practicing, polishing, and improving the quality. In short, as long as you pay attention and don't make mistakes, this book can be popular. If the main poisonous points are solved, it can be popular. As for the title of god, there is no hope at present. As for suggestions for improvement, the writing is not good, and the writing is very specialized. The author looked at the comments section, and some people have pointed out that this is not a good idea.

It's like this again. Every time I find a good book, I haven't updated a few chapters. . . [Pouts]

It's well written, but I feel like some of the turns are a bit abrupt. The protagonist is too weak, and the boundaries of strength are blurred. It is recommended to level it up, such as first-level mage level 1-10 and low-level swordsman level 1-10. Otherwise, the protagonist will feel useless, and the plot is a bit slow, and there are few updates. It feels like it is just a tortoise. You may be able to watch it if you keep it for a long time.

So far, it's pretty good. The characters haven't fallen apart, and the plot is fairly smooth. Well, I just don't know how the emotional lines are. After all, many good books have lower ratings due to messy emotional lines... I came from the non-CP side, and it's a book recommended by someone. I hope this quality continues. Of course, it would be better if I try to improve it.

I personally think it's pretty good. All mission IQs are online. There are currently no hard facts in the more than 60 chapters. Only the mention of the game is a bit abrupt. As long as no players enter the content later, this book should not be bad.

From the previous book, I hope the author will not make it too short or too fast this time.

It's okay. Although the plot is a bit cliche and the strength depends entirely on the system, at least the characters have some brains, at least they are not poisonous. It seems that it is going to develop into a harem. I hope you can grasp the personality of each character well and the plot will be more innovative. Come on [please update]

Is this ready to be cut? The writing is quite good.

No wonder the score is not high, there is no main plot, and there is no sign of the fourth natural disaster. The character description is average. The maid still relies on the setting to pass. Without the setting, the character cannot be written, so it is a yes. But generally speaking, there are no big poisonous points. About seven points is a normal score.

I think the logical structure is quite nice. Why don't I update it? At the end, I found out that the author stopped updating it for a year [crying]

I start with a relatively new idea. I explain the causes and consequences... The opening is concise, concise and orderly; the key points are described... Leaving a lasting impression on people. Make a deep impression. The beginning goes straight to the topic and is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively and attracts readers. The beginning goes straight to the topic and the words are very attractive. 0 0

It is much better than the author's previous book, and the writing style and main line are more outstanding. I even wonder if the author didn't write an outline for his last book? A book written on a whim.

Not bad, very pretty

The writing is pretty good

Damn, won't you update it? It's hard to find a good book [cry][cry][cry][cry]

How can I put it? It doesn't feel as good as the previous one (personal feeling)

Nice. It's just too short

Very good, but too short

You can rub ants

It's been half a month, have you had it cut?

Well, well, well, sleep, sleep, sleep, sleep

There is no sense of fantasy in Western fantasy novels

So far, except for the rather abrupt character change, everything else is good.

Well written. The story feels tense and exciting. A nice refreshing article. I hope the author will continue to do so, become bigger and stronger, and create greater glories.

Judging from the plot of 120 chapters, if it didn't jump, it would be a score of 9 or above. Very nice

Feng Changhao, very good book.

Very good first review

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