The Wimpiest Necromancer in the City

My own book, I will give it 5 stars first to encourage myself... The boss...

After reading the first few chapters, this book has a lot of ideas and style. The long psychological description of the protagonist is also very consistent with the protagonist's cowardly and slightly loser setting. However, it is a pity that the main line at the beginning is not very clear, and the sense of expectation is not very high. The daily plot and the long psychological description of the protagonist can easily give readers a feeling of being watery, and the pleasure of upgrading and becoming stronger can also be diluted. At present, it seems that the main problem is the beginning. It can be seen that the author likes to use dividing lines, which is one of the distinctive features of the work. However, considering the difference in typesetting between computers and mobile phones, there is only one line on the computer, but three or four lines are missing on the mobile phone. The extensive use of dividing lines at the beginning causes the words and lines to be almost one to one, which still affects the perception. Readers are easily persuaded. If the dividing lines are shortened, the reader experience will be greatly improved. More readers will read it, and the score can easily be improved. Another point is the issue of a large amount of psychological description, which is also one of the author's styles. The author's comics should also have a lot of psychological description, but it is still a bit uncomfortable when placed in a novel: comics are the painter directly presenting the picture, and a large amount of psychological description can support the protagonist's behavior; while novels require the author to narrate and let the reader imagine, psychological description There is too much writing and too little action description, which makes it difficult for readers to imagine the picture; coupled with the difference in reading speed between comics and novels, comics only look at pictures and words are only briefly browsed, and it is easy to create a story structure in the mind; while novels have less action descriptions that can support readers' imagination, and the requirements for psychological description will be higher. If not handled well, it will appear to be weak. The above is my humble opinion, and I would like to use the author's book to sort out my recent thoughts and prepare myself for writing. If you have different opinions, the author is very welcome to put them forward and communicate with each other to improve them. If you have any other ideas during the follow-up reading process, I will continue to mention them. I hope the author will not find me annoying 💕 Finally, I hope the author will work hard! I like this book very much and hope the author will keep it up. I will send you the razor blade if you become a eunuch [laughter] Let's encourage each other!

The novel is very interesting to write. You can feel the author's rich imagination. I put more thought into the concept of this book. It's more interesting to write in a fantasy drama. Song Huohuo's characterization is relatively vivid.

It is a very interesting work of urban cultivation. The author uses a unique perspective to describe the uniqueness of the protagonist. The world of mortals is rolling, the world of the sun, the world of the underworld, you and I are both in the middle. Worth recommending.

A very good urban fantasy novel, it must be supported by five-star praise. The author's writing is smooth and meticulous, with his own unique style, and he portrays the protagonist's character very well.

The author has a big head, and the suspense film is very exciting - the plot has ups and downs - thrilling, let us witness together, Song Huohuo's reversal. 👍👍👍👍👍 It's so good. I've finished watching it... Looking forward to the follow-up... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️