Mastering the World, Starting in Parrot Alley

It's quite good-looking. You are indeed the fan of the naughty Ma Xiaotiao. You are the first one I have ever written. It is very fresh. Secondly, the writing is not bad, and it reads very smoothly. However, I still hope that you can have more daily life. Just like the previous one, I found it very comfortable to watch. I basically skipped the artificial intelligence and stand-ins in the later ones, mainly for the drama. Secondly, I think the writing is indeed a bit dry. . . The rest is a bit confusing. Your daily life is very comfortable to write, but as a result, more and more substitutes and foreshadowing of the world view of Charles IX are inserted. Moreover, the writing is very stiff and boring, and it is completely exploiting the shortcomings and avoiding the strong points. I'm tired of reading your foreshadowing and wanted to see the love line, but the result was an inexplicable cold war and an inexplicable end of Luma CP. Then what's the point of so many chapters you wrote earlier to enhance the relationship? Seeing that you wrote so much, you just said, "There is no way to change it, so forget it." Ah? That's it. It's really tiring to read. It's also tiring to follow the updates every day. What's written makes my head hurt. Why don't I find a JoJo fan to read the content described by so many substitutes?

Write quickly, author. I don't know what generation the author is from. I and those born in the 2000s want to watch Ma Xiaotiao and Laughing Cat again. I came into contact with Ma Xiaotiao through Laughing Cat. I had read one before, and then after falling in love with Laughing Cat, I read A Girl's Diary and The Bad Boy from Class 53, and then I watched Pretty Teacher and The Bad Boy. Ma Xiaotiao is very happy. I have to say that I have also imagined what it would be like if I met these guys. I was particularly touched and wrote a comment first, hoping to see the laughing cat later, although Ma Xiaotiao is afraid of the laughing cat 🤦

It's very beautiful. Ma Xiaotiao really reminds me of my childhood. It's a bit trance-like. Don't disgust me. . .

This is the only book I have read so far that allows me to read about Ma Xiaotiao himself.

It is so well written, it gives me a feeling that I don't have when reading other novels. I feel that this is the best novel I have ever read. There must be more heroines and a harem!

The daily writing in the front is really good. Really, I will not be stingy with my praise. Your book is the first and only one that allows me to read page by page. But later on, the addition of the substitute is a bit poisonous. It is not bad to add Cha Jiu's world view. After all, it can be substituted. If you really want to write a substitute, it is really It's better to find a Jojo fan to read. If there are too many substitutes, this book will be very uncomfortable to read. I suggest you write more in daily life. As for CP, I can't say much. Luma CP is a pity. Author, you can try Xiama CP. After all, you are the only one that can attract the attention of Ma Xiaotiao fans. You still have to support it.

The subject matter is rare, I hope the author can stick to it Anyway, I've given it up. Smart characters are really unlikable.

No, this new character of the author really makes me feel uncomfortable. I hope there will be some improvement in the future 🥺 Is the author trying to make a stand-in destroy the streets? 😅 Let's give a brief review. The first part is pretty good, but the second part is too toxic. The protagonist's alien panel cannot catch up with an ordinary dog, and the arrow was stolen by someone else. The biggest disadvantage is that the protagonist's stand-in was not done well from the beginning. Alas o()o It's up to the author to figure it out 🥺

It is a very good novel, and it is also the only Ma Xiaotiao fanfic I have seen. The shortcoming is that the author is too hasty and introduces stand-ins too early. He checks for things that are not in Ma Xiaotiao's world view and does not focus on describing the characters in Ma Xiaotiao's world. Therefore, I will give it four stars for the time being. In addition, the update is a bit slow. Two chapters a day is not too much. Author It feels like the world of Ma Xiaotiao has been reduced to a background, and the protagonist feels like he just adopted the name Ma Xiaotiao, but I'll give it four stars.

To be honest, it was Ma Xiaotiao and Xia Linguo who was knocking, but Lu Manman was OK too 🤔