Shock! Why Is My Taoist Father a Crazy Critic?

I came here to see the father and Taoist priest, but I didn't expect that it made me feel like I was watching Tomb Raiders Notes. Although the love part is not as much as I expected, it is still very good. I have to say, (the part that is not the love line should be called the career line, right) the career line part is really well written. I listen to books, and then, when I was taking a shower, I was taking a shower alone in the shower room outside the dormitory, just across the door from my roommates, which made me super scared. (Maybe it's because I'm timid and have too much imagination. Anyway, I really think this part of the career line is super well written) - (You can refer to Uncle San's Tomb Raider Notes. Personally, I feel almost scared.) This career line has the feel of a supernatural + Tomb Raider Notes, which is really good.

Wu Yu and Lu Yao are really good, and they are a combination of the arrogant young master and the boring (?) Poor and white (?) Taoist priest. They are very good and their writing skills are good. Hehe😌😌😌, come and take a look😁😁

I finally found a book of this type. This kind of character really touched me. I really like it. I hope the author can update it more [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

It's really good to watch, unexpected, full of plot, and a lot of professional knowledge. It was a bit scary when I watched it at night. It wasn't high-energy horror, but it just felt a bit spooky. Personally, I still like the character Wu Yu very much. Although sometimes I hate him for being too kind, it seems that this is who he is.

It's really good to talk about the arrogant young master and the big Taoist priest who dotes on him. The writing is also very good! ! ! It's very easy to learn and easy to read! ! ! !

Really good-looking! I've been reading Tomato's books for so long, and this is my first time commenting! The author's writing is really good, and the emotional line is very interesting, without any delay! The only drawback is that it's not enough! ! ! ! Update soon! [Crying][crazy][crying]

It was quite interesting, going to the tomb, exploring, and even falling in love. It's just that I'm feeling stuck before I finish the extra chapter, and it's HE after the main text is finished.

I was really heartbroken when Wu Yu just left. Lu Yao was only supported by the fact that Wu Yu was still alive. My ability to empathize is so strong that I cried, but at least the two met again later. I really can't stand my cpBE😭, but the ending is still good. The two of them got together in circles. My wife's writing style is very good. In terms of shaping the emotions of the characters, I really empathized.

Come on, author [please update], it's really beautiful, I like it so much, the characters really touched my heart

It was a wonderful night and I could see that I was sweating coldly. It was a bit like Tomb Raiders.

Before, I thought it was with Xiao Tianwen, two male protagonists, one doting and the other tsundere, but who knew it would turn out like this later, and the final ending was good. Wu Yu and Lu Yao

It's great to watch. The plot is very novel. I like the character of Lao Han very much. Very nice, very nice. Come on author😘😘😘

It's beautiful. I like the main character very much.

At first I thought it was going to be an ordinary love story, but after seeing various tombs, I realized that something was wrong. When the storyline started to get sweeter, I thought I would be happy forever. Wu Yu's death also shocked me. I just had surgery without giving a hint. Growth is good, but I can't believe that the ending of Lao Han is like this. Lao Han is a good person in reality. I turned to the later episodes. At least a little happiness can be given to Lao Han, but there is no

After reading it, I feel really good. I didn't even memorize the book after reading it. Now I start to stay up late and memorize the text [face covering] [face covering]

The writing is very good, the plot is addictive and interlocking. It is not easy for the baby to grow up 😭😭😭. The young couple is 99. It is a pity that the ring cannot be given to Han Bazi in person. The extra story is so well written. The three of them can just accompany each other on this journey.

Very, very, very, very, very beautiful 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

Very well written! ! ! Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.................. Can we really make some extra stories about Han and Xiao, they're so cute.

Very nice and highly recommended! ! ! ! !

Wu Yu has grown up a lot, but what remains unchanged is his feelings for Lu Yao. The lives of you two and Lao Han will get better and better in the future [crying]

It looks good, but what about the follow-up! ! !

Although you may not understand something before, but after reading it, you will find that it is really good and beautiful, and the characters are very vivid and have their own characteristics.

Really super pretty

The plot is very exciting and can be enjoyed

Really super pretty

Very beautiful and worth recommending

It's really beautiful. [Like][Like] It's really beautiful, rich in emotions, worth watching [Like]

Like, good-looking, love to watch

It's a good watch after watching it, but Lao Han is really miserable and I feel sorry for him.

Not bad, but I personally felt that the plot was a bit off in the end, but I liked it