One Piecedawn in the Dark

The writing is super good. He is Luffy's brother, and he joins Whitebeard with Ace, so it's heartwarming.

Hahaha, I really like the relationship between Luffy and his three brothers in this book. Luffy is a child who grew up in love. He is loved wherever he goes, so when he grows up, he can generously share his overflowing love with others [full] [full] [full] Damn it, there are no good books on Tomato except this one and Luffy's Tomb Robbery Notebook. They are all about praising the protagonist and belittling Luffy, and there are some outrageous fantasy articles about Luffy falling in love with the heroine. Just from the text, you can feel the author's great love for Luffy. Oda 2.0 Is a god. I have already made him a god. I will not accept refutation [cry][cry][cry]

It's well written and quite to my liking. Although most of the main plot follows the original plot, the emotional descriptions are very delicate and sincere. It is rare to see such works, and the original parts are also written very naturally. I really like watching the interaction between the protagonist and ASL. It makes people's hearts warm when they watch it. Every time they watch it, they will stop and reflect on it. Will keep reading, good luck to the author

It's very consistent with the original work. It's 10 out of 10 beautiful. You won't find all the settings too abrupt. The relationship between them is really exciting. It's passionate and warm. It's really great. As long as this work continues, I will always follow you, the author🌹

Author, please don't stop updating, Luffy's group pet is really cute and beautiful [please update][please update]

It's very interesting. I love reading the Lobo fanfic.

The four brothers are close to Luffy. Now Lucci has lost his memory, but he is with Ace and joined Whitebeard.

This book is super good-looking. It adds an extra brother to Luffy, and he is very powerful. The brothers also went through twists and turns before finally meeting and uniting. Anyway, it is super good-looking.

I like it very much. I hope Lucci wakes up soon and thinks of Luffy. I hope Lucci is on the Luffy Spaceship!

It's so beautiful. I hope Lucci, Luffy and Ace meet Sabo soon. I like the heart-warming content of this book. It is well written and the characters are well drawn. I really like it.

In fact, I think there is no need to follow the boat, and we can focus on describing Lucci. When writing about Luffy, it is a bit the same as the original work. It seems a bit watery to me, but I still like this book very much. Good luck, author.

The descriptions between the brothers are so loving. They are always amused and feel like they are watching the original work. The protagonist's super brother-in-law character design is also very delicious😋! It doesn't feel like something you can see in Tomato... The description of family affection is very delicate and I like it very much.

It's very beautiful, why don't many people see it? [Thinking]

Come on! Looking forward to the day we get to know each other! !

Just keep at it and the five stars will be yours.

The friendship between the four brothers lasts forever!

The theme is very good, I hope there will be movie viewing content later

Very interesting, good luck to the author

It looks good. It's not a Mary Sue, but it basically fits the character. Luffy has an older brother.

It's very interesting to watch, but the plot is too long and it feels a bit boring. It's just my personal feeling, so I just skip it and watch it.

Super beautiful, highly recommended. Lobo is really super cute. My brothers also love it. I love it so much [Send heart][Send heart]