Reborn to Set My Life Right

It feels good. But the lyricism is too much, which often leads to a sense of disconnection when watching it. In terms of character design, the protagonist has stepped out of the past and become independent and free; in terms of narrative, the description is not so "resolute", which makes the protagonist still carry a heavy burden in the eyes of readers.

I only saw the chapters before entering high school. It has a strong flavor of grilled sturgeon in Orleans. It has a historical background, the motherland is taking off, and a poor family is rising. It focuses on rebirth + youthful campus + making up for regrets, and there are a few impressive female protagonists. It's very routine, but I still have to praise the author. This writing method is quite tiring. It requires a lot of information to be checked, the writing style must be excellent enough, the background of the era must be realistic and relevant enough, and the details of the campus must touch people's hearts. This book does everything well. I don't know whether it is a shortcoming or an advantage. The writing style is more prose-like. Many rhetorical and writing techniques are readily available. There is a lot of lyricism and sentiment, which somewhat distracts from the drama of the plot. Although the opening plot is old-fashioned, it is full of tension. The fake noble son is reborn and faces the turning point of life between rich and poor. The fake father's indifference, the fake mother's intolerance, the biological parents' rejection, Qingmei's ignorance, the pity for the protagonist's situation from multiple perspectives, and the respectable protagonist's rise. In short, it is very interesting to watch. The plot after that is very unspectacular, renting Uncle Li's house, changing shifts, learning musical instruments from Uncle Li, taking the top prize in the high school entrance examination, and performing in rural areas. It's like a running account, with limited characters, limited plot, and unlimited lyricism and perception. The only desire to continue watching is to see how the protagonist rises up later, how to slap the Xu family in the face, and whether Qingmei's fate of marrying the noble son can be changed. Although the protagonist does not hate the Xu family, but I really want to see the slap in the face! I hope to have more youthful daily life, as long as there is a career line. This is not a commercial novel, the main focus is youth and regret. I hope that the characters and plot can be expanded and written, that there can be more dialogue, action, and psychological description, and that lyricism and sentiment can serve the characters and plot. There are so many articles about heroes and scumbags. This kind of small and fresh articles makes people miss them. I will give you the five-star praise first and wait and see what happens next.

The writing is good, there are almost no disturbances, no conflicts, no intrigues, no slaps in the face, which is what everyone likes to see nowadays. Put aside the literary youth, it is just one chapter. If you like plain and simple things and like to record life, you can read it. I saw that the male protagonist had hundreds of thousands and had to spend all his money to invest in stocks that would skyrocket in twenty years. It was very easy to use his brain after being reborn. Why did he have to think about becoming a rich man every day? The meaning of being reborn is to become a rich man. I directly felt that there was no need to read this book. Rebirth at the age of sixteen. I firmly commented that learning can achieve success. You have to be sixteen to be like a person who is obsessed with money. I am so bored.

It's pretty good to read, but the section from the junior high school entrance examination to the final examination is too complicated and boring, which is a bit discouraging. The rest is actually okay. I say it's a literary youth, but literary youth is also a characteristic of this article. It's also good to be more focused on rebirth and make up for the shortcomings in life.

An admirable book!! There is no heaven or earth, I am the only one who is supreme!! On the contrary, it is another world view and values ​​​​after rebirth!! I'm really looking forward to the next plot! There is also hope that Qin Mingyue will be reborn!! I hope those who missed each other in the past life can make up for it in this life!! No regrets!!! May we all never forget our original aspirations, live up to our youth, and live up to our dreams!

There's a lot of nonsense, but the author's writing style is really good, and the characters he created are also likable.

Five-star praise! The screenwriter's plot is clever! The language is witty and humorous! The characters are vividly drawn and three-dimensional! Keep it up and look forward to increasing the number of updates! [Learned]

A book that I can't stop reading once I read it 👍 👍 👍 Please update the author quickly.

The author's writing is beautiful and the storyline is compact, unlike the first time. The shortcomings are that there is a little too much chicken soup and too many quotations from famous people. Come on👏

The writing style is very good, and it can be adjusted appropriately. At first, I felt that there were too many embellishments, which made it a bit boring. However, it got much better later on. It was very comfortable to read and made me calm down to read it. This feeling reminded me of Nirvana, but when I saw the author's pen name, I was indeed a Nirvana fan. Very good. I am looking forward to your next book. I hope you can write a book like Nirvana one day.