Rebirth*****

It feels good. But the lyricism is too much, which often leads to a sense of disconnection when watching it. In terms of character design, the protagonist has stepped out of the past and become independent and free; in terms of narrative, the description is not so "resolute", which makes the protagonist still carry a heavy burden in the eyes of readers.

I only saw the chapters before entering high school. It has a strong flavor of grilled sturgeon in Orleans. It has a historical background, the motherland is taking off, and a poor family is rising. It focuses on rebirth + youthful campus + making up for regrets, and there are a few impressive female protagonists. It's very routine, but I still have to praise the author. This writing method is quite tiring. It requires a lot of information to be checked, the writing style must be excellent enough, the background of the era must be realistic and relevant enough, and the details of the campus must touch people's hearts. This book does everything well. I don't know whether it is a shortcoming or an advantage. The writing style is more prose-like. Many rhetorical and writing techniques are readily available. There is a lot of lyricism and sentiment, which somewhat distracts from the drama of the plot. Although the opening plot is old-fashioned, it is full of tension. The fake noble son is reborn and faces the turning point of life between rich and poor. The fake father's indifference, the fake mother's intolerance, the biological parents' rejection, Qingmei's ignorance, the pity for the protagonist's situation from multiple perspectives, and the respectable protagonist's rise. In short, it is very interesting to watch. The plot after that is very unspectacular, renting Uncle Li's house, changing shifts, learning musical instruments from Uncle Li, taking the top prize in the high school entrance examination, and performing in rural areas. It's like a running account, with limited characters, limited plot, and unlimited lyricism and perception. The only desire to continue watching is to see how the protagonist rises up later, how to slap the Xu family in the face, and whether Qingmei's fate of marrying the noble son can be changed. Although the protagonist does not hate the Xu family, but I really want to see the slap in the face! I hope to have more youthful daily life, as long as there is a career line. This is not a commercial novel, the main focus is youth and regret. I hope that the characters and plot can be expanded and written, that there can be more dialogue, action, and psychological description, and that lyricism and sentiment can serve the characters and plot. There are so many articles about heroes and scumbags. This kind of small and fresh articles makes people miss them. I will give you the five-star praise first and wait and see what happens next.

The writing is good, there are almost no disturbances, no conflicts, no intrigues, no slaps in the face, which is what everyone likes to see nowadays. Put aside the literary youth, it is just one chapter. If you like plain and simple things and like to record life, you can read it. I saw that the male protagonist had hundreds of thousands and had to spend all his money to invest in stocks that would skyrocket in twenty years. It was very easy to use his brain after being reborn. Why did he have to think about becoming a rich man every day? The meaning of being reborn is to become a rich man. I directly felt that there was no need to read this book. Rebirth at the age of sixteen. I firmly commented that learning can achieve success. You have to be sixteen to be like a person who is obsessed with money. I am so bored.

It's pretty good to read, but the section from the junior high school entrance examination to the final examination is too complicated and boring, which is a bit discouraging. The rest is actually okay. I say it's a literary youth, but literary youth is also a characteristic of this article. It's also good to be more focused on rebirth and make up for the shortcomings in life.

An admirable book! ! There is no heaven or earth, I am the only one who is supreme! ! On the contrary, it is another world view and values ​​​​after rebirth! ! I'm really looking forward to the next plot! There is also hope that Qin Mingyue will be reborn! ! I hope those who missed each other in the past life can make up for it in this life! ! No regrets! ! ! May we all never forget our original aspirations, live up to our youth, and live up to our dreams!

There's a lot of nonsense, but the author's writing style is really good, and the characters he created are also likable.

Five-star praise! The screenwriter's plot is clever! The language is witty and humorous! The characters are vividly drawn and three-dimensional! Keep it up and look forward to increasing the number of updates! [Learned]

A book that I can't stop reading once I read it [Like] [Like] [Like] Please update the author quickly.

The writing style is very good, and it can be adjusted appropriately. At first, I felt that there were too many embellishments, which made it a bit boring. However, it got much better later on. It was very comfortable to read and made me calm down to read it. This feeling reminded me of Nirvana, but when I saw the author's pen name, I was indeed a Nirvana fan. Very good. I am looking forward to your next book. I hope you can write a book like Nirvana one day.

The author's writing is beautiful and the storyline is compact, unlike the first time. The shortcomings are that there is a little too much chicken soup and too many quotations from famous people. Come on👏

Very good. It's rare to see a good article these days. Does the author have any other works?

The writing is very good, with a bit of a physical book style, but there are more people on the Internet who like mindless white texts. When the number of words increases, more people will read it.

An author you must support! Godly temperament!

After reading all the way, let me summarize it first. This book has many flaws, but it also has many bright spots. Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. The plot is actually quite simple, but the content is very rich. It incorporates a lot of prose, Internet memes, campus life, sports, the Internet and other elements. Except for some parts that are a bit long-winded, it is very watchable, at least I enjoyed it. This is a book that you can calm down and read slowly. The author has feelings and thoughts that he wants to express. It is somewhat different from mainstream fast food articles.

The author is a very special author. He often likes to talk about divergent thinking, and then unknowingly writes a lot of irrelevant words. However, this approach has also formed his unique creative style. If he can keep up with the author's way of thinking, it will actually look like there will be a lot more easter eggs. If he can't keep up, it will actually be easy to persuade people to quit. It can be seen that the author is indeed a novice, the story itself is flawless, and the characters created are recognizable to a certain extent, and it is obvious that he has put in a lot of effort. If you like this style, this book is half-immortal and above the level of food.

The writing is good and the plot is smooth. It is a rare good book, but personally I think it is better to have two people for the whole life emotionally. Of course, with the current progress, both Mingyue and Ningxia are involved, so there is no other way. I hope they can coordinate it well in the future, or make the right choice.

So far, it seems that the subject matter and plot are excellent, and the writing is very good, although the chicken soup is also long and long... I personally think it is a high-quality work, and I hope you will be patient and persevere to finish it. (If you like it, you will love it. If you don't like it, you may find it annoying to drink chicken soup.)

As soon as I saw the second chapter, I wanted to give it five stars. The story is overwhelming, the writing is simple and sad, and the plot is tortuous but just right. If it doesn't break down, it should be a hit. Ps. I added more than a dozen books today, and this is the last one left. I've given up. Not to mention it's a dog-licking novel, at least it's all about romance. I want to watch the grudges between wealthy families, shopping mall legends, hatred due to love, crazy slaps in the face, none of these...

How should I put it? It's different from the rebirth novels I've read before. It surprised me a little. I quite like the story written by the author. It has both losses and gains, regrets, and touches. I hope the author will continue writing and bring me different stories.

The writing style is very delicate, and there is some suspicion that the word count is crammed in the middle, but I will continue to pursue it.

When I read Nirvana, I liked the character Lin Luoran the most. Unfortunately, Sturgeon gave her too few scenes. After reading this book, I started to think that Qin Mingyue was a character like Tang Fu. But now it seems that she is more like a combination of Jiang Hongshao and Lin Luoran.

The language and situations are all in place, and there is also humor. It is a master of liberal arts; the experience and understanding of emotions are very profound, there is true love, and the author is a person with stories; Ningshi is the place where I once studied, there is love and regret, and memories come out as I read it, it is beautiful and good There was a rear-end collision, and it was gone so quickly. National Youth Championship, hurry up.

I have read the book and reviewed the reviews. Overall, the writing is quite good, with beautiful words, a touching plot, detailed descriptions of the characters, and a reasonable setting! It's just that I didn't grasp the degree well in some aspects, and if there are too many, it becomes superfluous! Another protagonist is in his 30s and has experienced a lot of hardships and rebirth. He should be more determined and purposeful. However, when he faces some things again, he is still described as if he was 18 years old. He is not like the way he handles things in his 30s. He is still very young, which is not reasonable. Come on, author!

It's a really good modern novel about high school students falling in love. I thought it was too damn infuriating. When I was in high school, I only watched other people fall in love, and I thought about it myself, but I had the evil intention but not the courage. If I had read the author's big book at that time, how could I have watched the little cabbage being raped by the guys? Oh...❤ It hurts! Hahaha

There are many lyrical aspects in this article. People who like it will feel that the writing is very good and the slow pace is very comfortable to read. People who don't like it may think it is all nonsense and slow down the pace of the article. Qingmei is really good, don't run away and give up.

The writing style is super good, large sections of text are written in one go, childhood sweethearts, childhood sweethearts, and true love. The author gets better and better as he writes. I feel that the previous 16 years are foreshadowing. Sooner or later, it will re-influence the "passing" of rebirth. I am looking forward to it. . .

The rhythm of the plot is very suitable for my taste, it is not a purely enjoyable novel. Some of the writing is also very delicate, but as some people in the comment area commented, there are some young writers in it, which makes it seem too draggy.

A rare good book, cheers to the author＾0＾~

Five stars is a high score and contains encouragement. The subject matter of this book is quite good, but it lacks plot. The summer release "Sauvignon Blanc" is quite popular, but most people don't read the original work. Why? Because the narrative style is not popular with old bookworms. What I mean is that the best thing to do is keep writing. Finish the book first and then talk about it. Come on! Ten thousand words are omitted below.

Overall, it's okay. It's understandable. You can take it slow. There are many people who like it slowly, but don't be too wordy. Restrain your desire to express it. Also, don't popularize science in the article.