Quick Transmigration: I'm the Male Lead's Foil

Xiaotang has changed his style again. The writing is very good so far, and the story concept is good. As long as the follow-up does not fail, I will keep following it. I like this kind of fast-traveling novel.

The author's writing style is really good. Although the plot design is still the same as that of Kuaishou, the plot design is not conventional. Although there are also shortcomings of most Internet writers who lack historical knowledge, they are basically unconcealed. I also sincerely advise the author not to include private goods in literary works. For example, if you love dogs, it doesn't matter if you love dogs. You can express it normally, but your almost devilish comparison method in the chapter of the Supreme God actually brings down the overall style of your article.

It's really good to watch. I feel that he is one of the top writers in Kuaishou. The author is very good at portraying characters and mobilizing emotions. He can portray the original male and female protagonists as quite hateful. Their reactions from disdain to panic to panic, fear and regret as they take revenge step by step are also satisfying and very satisfying. This is what I want to see when reading Kuaishuan! [Learned]

This book is really good, I fell in love with it as soon as I listened to it. I really like Fu Sinian. This man is so infatuated and dedicated to the heroine Yan Qing. He is not at all like those playboys and scumbags. Infatuated men are the cutest. Reward the author with a big thumbs up. More and more exciting

It's good-looking. The male protagonist has a good outlook on life. I like it very much. I just suddenly thought of giving the author a big idea. It doesn't matter if he writes or not. I just read an article and the male protagonist's outlook on things made me furious. It's like this: the male protagonist is a modern krypton gold player who travels to a low-level world of martial arts. Then the golden finger is the game backpack and the function of drawing draws to summon fairy beasts. More functions require faith to unlock. Then the male protagonist pretends to be a god. The theme is quite good. It's high-profile, but the male protagonist has a cunning operation. In order to collect faith, he deliberately summons and releases ferocious beasts to kill people, causing panic and fear to innocent people, and then wears a vest to solve the problem. I really can't stand it when I see this. A large number of people in the comment area think that the death of more than a dozen people is not too many and is normal. They also say that those of us who don't agree, Holy Mother, really want a real god to come and expose this false god and slap him in the face. To be honest, she is really not the Holy Mother. If her life is threatened, it is understandable to kill innocent people. After all, people will not be punished for their own sake, but it is a bit excessive to take human lives in order to collect incense of faith. You can collect it slowly, and you don't have to use such extreme methods. So later I stopped reading and left a message, hoping to write about this kind of world 😘[Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Starting from the sixth plane, the male protagonist looks so good, hahahaha. It always feels like a junior high school student playing the role of a domineering boss. It's so immature that it's funny. The plot is quite boring, so it's suitable to listen to while working. You won't miss any key plot points when you come back from doing something else. Too much water is added and the grinding becomes irritating.

The male protagonist is very awesome, staying away from the original heroine and not being a dog licker or a stepping stone for the original hero. This is a plot setting that I like very much. It would be better without CP. Mainly, I have seen a similar setting in the first world. The appearance and setting of the new heroine are also very similar, but because Zhuyu is first, the heroine in that book is very cute, the character is very attractive, and the interaction with the male protagonist is also very loving. Therefore, under a similar setting, the heroine's shining point in this article is not shown at all. I don't feel that there is anything about her that can attract the male protagonist. It is better to just have no CP. I have also seen the exact same setting in the fourth world, and I remember it particularly well. In the one I read, the male protagonist traveled through time and copied the spirit of his junior brother and sister into another junior brother and sister, making the junior brothers and sisters feel the same. However, the copied original male protagonist ended up falling in love with the replica of the senior sister, and the senior sister who loved the original male protagonist suffered the consequences. Both endings are good, but they are too long. I don't really like the subsequent scenes of Substitute Marriage and True and Fake Daughter World. I feel that it's too slow to torture the scum. It's a bit of a drag... I only wrote 5 chapters of the past life plot... I'll write it from the original heroine's point of view, then I'll write it from the original male protagonist's point of view, and finally I'll write it from the original protagonist's point of view... I'm speechless. Isn't the more summarized the past life plot, the better? However, the plot of the main text is still good, and the nodes of time travel are also good. Third comment: The latest worlds are very ink... The plots of the previous lives are stinky and long... Then the plot develops slowly, and the male protagonist is slow, and it feels like he is telling a story slowly. The revenge is not until the finale. Anyway, it is not as good as the previous world. The more it is written, the more ink it gets. Fourth comment: The author's writing style has completely changed... It has become like a foot wrap, long and long, the plot of the previous life has to be introduced three or four times, the original heroine once, the original angle once, the original protagonist's angle once... And the beginning is very frustrating, and it is no longer the vigorous and refreshing novel before...

The protagonist Goldfinger is powerful, and the anti-routine plot is very satisfying and enjoyable to watch. About eleven or twelve worlds later (about 800 chapters), the author's thinking and writing power feel like they have improved to a higher level. The bad guys are no longer too stereotyped, and they pay more attention to exploring the hidden points of the original plot and the complexity of human nature. The plot is not very exciting later on, it drags on, and there are also issues with the sense of values...

Ahem, I entered it by mistake, thinking it was a story about two male protagonists, but it turned out to be a story about men [covering face][covering face][covering face][covering face], which successfully made me stay. This is the first time I read this kind of article, I feel pretty good

It's not bad at all. It was just a normal quick-travel story at the beginning, but in the middle and later stages, the author kept making tricks, which was like 666. However, the author likes soft knives for grinding meat, and those who don't like it may find it a bit harsh.