The Invincible Gengar of the Elf

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. Demining completed, Goldfinger + Pokémon + civilian trainer. It's a Pokémon fan, but it doesn't follow the original plot. The plot is okay and has growth potential. Parts of the plot are a bit bloody, but overall it's passable. Still support the new book and like it.

The civilian stream is quite good [like] I have seen some Kanto starters before, but the initial Pokémon are either quasi-gods or quasi-gods from other places and I really can't stand it. This book is good. Although Fang Yuan is included, it is consistent with reality. This is very nice [like]

So far, the plot has been online, and it is very interesting. I hope to write more emotional lines of women and Pokémon story lines. I feel that some pets are still mentioned after they are obtained, but they have no sense of existence, such as the rumble stone that followed at the beginning. The author can also construct items that can help Baddie break through the limits. Otherwise, it feels like the original pets have no sense of existence😭

There are really very few people who are popular among ordinary people, and your writing is actually very good, and the ideas and themes are also very good, but there are some parts that are difficult to describe in words. When you are free, look at your works from the perspective of a reader. The problems you see are also ways to improve yourself. I will give you a gift to encourage you. I hope you will not lose motivation because of this work. I hope that the next work can be more perfect. In fact, you see what I have said. On the contrary, it does not mean that the ideas and themes of your works are very good, but there are more or less problems. I hope you will continue to work hard.

It's a great Pokémon novel. It describes the relationship between the protagonist and Pokémon very vividly. I really like the feeling of knowing you with just one look. The battle aspect is also okay. Pokémon's strength has improved just enough (not too fast, not too slow). As for the first part, it's not that good. I think it's okay after reading it, and it's not uncomfortable. Of course, there are many places to complain, but it doesn't affect the viewing. The more you read later, the more interesting it is. The description of the alliance in the first part is The dark moments of the movie touched me a lot. Why is Team Rocket so powerful in the Kanto region? If the Alliance gives more preferential treatment to civilians, they will not join Team Rocket. The Rockets all know that the slogan is: for the sake of civilians, the alliance is still rotten, especially when A'du looks at the leadership of the Kanto Alliance later. The kind of self-mockery, I feel tired for A'du, and he went to fight with the male protagonist without even finding out the reason. Later, I saw that the author was talking about the late stage. I really don't want this book to end. I can continue writing while I'm sitting. I'll write about the male protagonist becoming the Four Heavenly Kings, or even the champion, and accepting a few apprentices. Of course, I can continue writing about the relationship between the male and female protagonists (double female protagonists), but not too many warm moments in one or two chapters will be enough. After unloading the championship and traveling again, encountering mythical beasts, or recycling the beginning of why Arceus has a problem, etc. I really don't want this book to end. I really like it. These are just my personal suggestions. I hope the author can think about it carefully after reading it. Thank you [send heart][send heart][send heart]

The author's writing is good. Just talk to Pokémon more and don't even bark twice. The big fight is your trump card. Try not to expose its strength. The road ahead will be more difficult for you. Don't take off the Dior Mask. If you don't hang around here in the future, others will recognize your hidden identity [laughing and crying]

At the beginning, I looked good, but after all, I was not the Rockets, and I was no longer a bad guy in the league. I was shocked when I looked at the league, the Rockets, and the Rockets. I was threatened to go to the Rockets [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] and I knew that you and I were not from the same group.

The details of the battles in Pokémon battles are very detailed and can be imagined in the mind, which I like. However, I personally hope that there will not be too many female protagonists. The high-scoring Pokémon books are either more daily-oriented and rich in emotional scenes, or they have more battles and details, and the explanations of Pokémon are more detailed. For now, I suggest that the author take the second approach, with less emotional drama and a focus on battles and adventures. The plot is as compact as in the Kanto region, so that readers can more easily get involved and arouse interest in reading.

To be honest, this is the only Elf novel with more than 1.8 Million words that I have read besides the Rock King. It is also the only novel about realizing the dream of the Masters. It is the only setting where ordinary Pokémon can compete with the mythical beasts through hard work. Unlike other legendary mythical beasts, which are completely superior to others, legends can only deal with legends, and then their combat power begins to collapse. The story is very exciting. It has rich character descriptions and detailed battle plots. The protagonist unexpectedly comes to the world of Pokémon. The insect-catching boy who has grown up from a rootless level finds where he belongs and his lover through his own calculation and hard work. He reaches the top step by step. It is a very exciting story. Except for the protagonist catching Kyogre's lover and being caught a little poisonously, the rest of the feeling is very good. Five-star praise!

It was a bit boring for a while at the beginning, but it was very interesting after leaving Team Rocket. Overall, it is very good. It is much better than other Pokémon stories. It has two female protagonists. The plot is smooth. It is really worth recommending. Never underestimate any Pokémon. Although it is a bit mid-range, it is true. The race value does not mean everything. There is indeed a little water word count in the front, but there is no water in the back. Anyway, one word is good.

More realistic and close to real life. Some of the characters in the play have pretty good IQs, unlike some bad books that have low IQs. The descriptions of people are very real and appropriate. The kind of walk-on characters also have their own descriptions. Of course, those unimportant characters are not there, and they are extremely unimportant.

A very good book, no matter where it is, there must be a dark side. I feel that the author's writing is very real and very good

Commoners + Pokémon, it's a bit of a bummer but it doesn't help the protagonist too much. However, I feel that the plot power is a bit weak in the end. The rest is still very good. The early stages generally become more exciting as you read later.

The author's writing is okay, much better than what I have read before. I was planning to give up after reading it before, but now I feel good about it, but I would like to make a small suggestion that those who are soy sauce can also try to let them go to some gyms or fight in the wild or fight with passers-by. After all, those Pokémon who accompany the protagonist in the beginning are not very useful in the early stage, and it is not fair to them that they are not very useful in the future.

You can take a look. Although I didn't follow the main line, it was my own journey. There are no outrageous settings, and a display attribute is also convenient for reading. In the later stages of technology, physical fitness can also be measured. Being able to fully read the ending shows that this book is still worth pursuing. Pig's feet are also clear-cut and decisive in killing. Not the Virgin. [Smile][smile][smile]

So far, the plot of this book is very reasonable. In the early stage, it would be better if v6 could be explained in a few words about the difficulty of obtaining it. In the later stage, V5-6 is no longer important when it reaches a certain level and can be obtained. This may be the reason why I read it in one day.

To be honest, the writing is quite good, and it can be regarded as a commoner genre, but there are many adventures. How can I say it? It's hard to comment. If there are no adventures, I feel like I can't beat the enemy, but too many adventures feel a bit contrary to the original intention of the commoner genre. Anyway, with so many Pokémon novels at the moment, it is still worth reading!

The content of the book is very good, and the plot is also good, especially Gengar, who is my favorite elf. However, I hope the author will not add too many emotional lines of the heroine or the female supporting character, because if it is not well written, it will greatly affect the reader's senses, and the elf world should focus on the elf. I personally think that it is good for the protagonist and the elf to live and travel together.

The content is good, some chapters moved me very much, and they are relatively realistic [cool]

There may be some unclear sentences in the front, and some descriptions are not very well thought out, but it does not affect the reading. At least starting from the civilian pet, joining the Rockets, and the brotherhood of harmoniously developing and making progress together with the team members, I think it is well written, and I hope the author can continue to work hard.

It's pretty good, but there are too many data, and Pokémon's abilities feel limited. Pokémon are spirits with infinite possibilities. There still needs to be a difference between reality and the game. After all, the game needs to balance some things.

This is my first time reading a Pokémon novel. I have read what others have written before, but I stopped reading them halfway through. The author's writing angle is also different from others, which is quite novel. Others grew up traveling in the Kanto Alliance. Except for the heroine Ling Meng's writing which makes people want to go to a knife, overall it's okay (personal opinion)

This book opens up the uniqueness of the Pokémon genre and gives it a different feeling. Unlike other books about mindless challenges to gym invincibility, this book is more exciting and very real. The protagonist went from having nothing to nothing, truly relying on himself, and describing the persistence of a small person.

I rarely write book reviews. The plot of the book is quite good. Common people want to be in power, but they are not ruthless and cannot stand firm. It is a bit dark, which is normal. The protagonist has no background and no money. It is commendable that the author can write such a wonderful story about the protagonist's struggle. Whether it is the league or the Rockets, there are good or bad things and people. Good luck to the author. I hope many people will read this book [Like][Like][Like]

It's quite interesting, but it's a bit outrageous at the beginning, but it gets better and better as you go on.

It's very good-looking. The plot is ups and downs, highlighting the darkness and corruption of an old alliance. Compared with other eunuch protagonists of the same type, the protagonist of this book is flesh and blood, and more like a normal man.

It's pretty good. It's much better than the fake ones. To be honest, it's a Rasengan and an open mode. There's also an elf with two characteristics. I hope the author won't stop updating in the middle.

It's a very interesting novel. I've read more than 400 chapters. Although not many people have read it, the author is still working hard to update it [Adoration] Love it

A very good novel, compared to other similar Pokémon novels, it is still very good, but it is almost finished [crying]

It can be regarded as an alternative to cultivating immortals. Generally speaking, it is very good. It is just like cultivating immortals. It is good in the early stage, but the combat power collapses in the later stage. Divine beasts appear and cannot defeat the soldiers [laughing and crying]