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The wind is blowing in all directions, and conspiracies are constantly happening. When the evil and vengeful princess of Nanfan entangles the innocent and hypocritical His Highness Xiping San, one chases and the other retreats. He plays with people's hearts and controls the overall situation. With a knife and a candy, the sugar content is overwhelming! For the sake of the country and the people, he went to Xiping to make peace, and what kind of conspiracy was behind it? Whether he would go or stay was already determined, and sometimes it was just a matter of fate.
During the massacre of the city, Dongyue was almost destroyed. One was the crown prince of Dongyue, and the other was the regent of Beizhan. They had completely different stances. She could only leave it to fate as to the outcome. Some things were still sweet even if they were forced. She had no doubt about this. Looking at the mountains and rivers thousands of miles away, Chen Zinian smiled, the Empress of Dongyue was nothing more than that, she would give a big gift to everyone.
There are turbulent undercurrents in all directions, and there are many shadows. What is uncovered layer by layer is the conspiracy, and even more so the hearts of the people...
Reader comments
Give it 1 star for over 600,000 words. I'm sorry for the author, I can only give one star. I'm afraid that if I don't tell my true thoughts, it will delay future readers [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]. To be honest, I don't know how many people will have the courage, time and patience to read it to the end [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]... Let me briefly talk about my thoughts [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]
Let's get started. I feel like the article is a bit messy and there are too many clues. There are also a lot of characters. For this reason, I specially sorted out the characters, otherwise it would look too messy.
The more I read, the less I could stand it, because I never give up on writing, so I could only keep reading and found that there were too many bugs.
First, many places are illogical. For example, the Queen Mother leaves the palace as casually as she goes out to go shopping. There are many illogical places, so I won't go into details one by one.
Second, the plot design is similar to that of the Hong Kong and Taiwan videos from more than 30 years ago. It is quite bloody. This group of people are trapped in inextricable relationships, and they are all entangled in them, and they cannot break the situation.
Third, many people who died felt that they were forced to death. They obviously didn't need to die, but they had to be forced to die for an unreasonable reason. It was very baffling.
Fourth, the author wrote many of these characters that are inconsistent with their previous ones. It was obviously a persona at the beginning, but the way they talked and acted later was different from what they wrote at the beginning [face covering], which made me look like Shen Jingbing [face covering]. I couldn't think of a person who could say that at first, but later I couldn't figure out why he could say other things that deviated from his soul, and the things he did were also deviating from the persona (deviating from the soul)...
Fifth, the author may not have a thorough understanding of the language and thoughts of the characters' age groups. These characters are of different ages, but through their words and actions, they cannot detect big differences...
Sixth, many of the descriptions of the environment are quite abrupt. When written, I don't feel that they are meant to set off or express anything. They are disconnected from the plot and characters. I thought they were just used for water figures [face covering]
Seventh, the author may be afraid that readers will get confused, so he often writes the time and place at the front of the chapter. However, because the article involves 4 countries, tribes or clans under them, and many characters... Anyway, it does not have a good effect, it is still confusing... If other readers take a look, they will understand what I mean by confusing [face covering]
Eighth, the author may not be able to deeply understand the various manifestations of love, family affection, and friendship. For example, in the love category, there are indeed various CPs in the article. Some of them are that you can't tell there is love from the interaction between two people. You have to Only when the author writes "Do I like her?" Can we understand, oh, there is love [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Some write about friendship, click, and it turns into love, and I don't know how it changes. It just changes [cover face] [cover face] [cover face], and some also write about loving relatives, and it can also turn into love (pseudo-orthopedics). Brother-in-law and sister-in-law, son of a friend, enemy between enemies, comrades-in-arms... It's not that I don't accept it, it's that the writing is too hard, telling the reader that he (she) only likes him (her), you know it, the reader has to say, he (she) understands it. The writing is unnatural, very unnatural.
Ninth, the entire book, you say it has an ending, but it does. Basically, every cp has a bei ending. Some are either one dead or both dead; some are both alive, one is gone and the other is waiting stupidly, or one is gone and the other is looking for... The ending of the plot is also difficult to describe, 4 countries are still 4 countries, the layout of the book is a bit small, and the grand momentum of the battlefield is not captured...
Finally, let me say that the author may have written more smoothly at the end. The last few short fragments were well written. Emotions, logic, character psychology, all aspects are much better than before.
Come on, author. There are many good articles on Tomato. If you don't want to waste time reading it yourself, if you need it, I can recommend some good articles to you, some that focus on the big picture of family and country, some that focus on small love and small happiness, some that involve great battles between good and evil, and some that involve suspense and plotting in the palace or in the workplace. You can learn from them.
When you open a book for the first time, you may want to write more, but because there are too many, your control is not perfect... In fact, many of your stories can be opened separately and written in detail...
I wish the author can write more high-scoring articles. 2023.12.13
Give it 1 star for over 600,000 words. I'm sorry for the author, I can only give one star. I'm afraid that if I don't tell my true thoughts, it will delay future readers [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]. To be honest, I don't know how many people will have the courage, time and patience to read it to the end [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]... Let me briefly talk about my thoughts [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Let's get started. I feel like the article is a bit messy and there are too many clues. There are also a lot of characters. For this reason, I specially sorted out the characters, otherwise it would look too messy. The more I read, the less I could stand it, because I never give up on writing, so I could only keep reading and found that there were too many bugs. First, many places are illogical. For example, the Queen Mother leaves the palace as casually as she goes out to go shopping. There are many illogical places, so I won't go into details one by one. Second, the plot design is similar to that of the Hong Kong and Taiwan videos from more than 30 years ago. It is quite bloody. This group of people are trapped in inextricable relationships, and they are all entangled in them, and they cannot break the situation. Third, many people who died felt that they were forced to death. They obviously didn't need to die, but they had to be forced to die for an unreasonable reason. It was very baffling. Fourth, the author wrote many of these characters that are inconsistent with their previous ones. It was obviously a persona at the beginning, but the way they talked and acted later was different from what they wrote at the beginning [face covering], which made me look like Shen Jingbing [face covering]. I couldn't think of a person who could say that at first, but later I couldn't figure out why he could say other things that deviated from his soul, and the things he did were also deviating from the persona (deviating from the soul)... Fifth, the author may not have a thorough understanding of the language and thoughts of the characters' age groups. These characters are of different ages, but through their words and actions, they cannot detect big differences... Sixth, many of the descriptions of the environment are quite abrupt. When written, I don't feel that they are meant to set off or express anything. They are disconnected from the plot and characters. I thought they were just used for water figures [face covering] Seventh, the author may be afraid that readers will get confused, so he often writes the time and place at the front of the chapter. However, because the article involves 4 countries, tribes or clans under them, and many characters... Anyway, it does not have a good effect, it is still confusing... If other readers take a look, they will understand what I mean by confusing [face covering] Eighth, the author may not be able to deeply understand the various manifestations of love, family affection, and friendship. For example, in the love category, there are indeed various CPs in the article. Some of them are that you can't tell there is love from the interaction between two people. You have to Only when the author writes "Do I like her?" Can we understand, oh, there is love [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Some write about friendship, click, and it turns into love, and I don't know how it changes. It just changes [cover face] [cover face] [cover face], and some also write about loving relatives, and it can also turn into love (pseudo-orthopedics). Brother-in-law and sister-in-law, son of a friend, enemy between enemies, comrades-in-arms... It's not that I don't accept it, it's that the writing is too hard, telling the reader that he (she) only likes him (her), you know it, the reader has to say, he (she) understands it. The writing is unnatural, very unnatural. Ninth, the entire book, you say it has an ending, but it does. Basically, every cp has a bei ending. Some are either one dead or both dead; some are both alive, one is gone and the other is waiting stupidly, or one is gone and the other is looking for... The ending of the plot is also difficult to describe, 4 countries are still 4 countries, the layout of the book is a bit small, and the grand momentum of the battlefield is not captured... Finally, let me say that the author may have written more smoothly at the end. The last few short fragments were well written. Emotions, logic, character psychology, all aspects are much better than before. Come on, author. There are many good articles on Tomato. If you don't want to waste time reading it yourself, if you need it, I can recommend some good articles to you, some that focus on the big picture of family and country, some that focus on small love and small happiness, some that involve great battles between good and evil, and some that involve suspense and plotting in the palace or in the workplace. You can learn from them. When you open a book for the first time, you may want to write more, but because there are too many, your control is not perfect... In fact, many of your stories can be opened separately and written in detail... I wish the author can write more high-scoring articles. 2023.12.13