
After Rebirth, I Presented the BE Script to the Heroine Fish Pond
重生后我为女主鱼塘献上BE剧本
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 895k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Modern Romance High-Concept
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 12mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
17Reads
6.9Score
416Chapters
1Listens
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Nice. But I feel like I'm being controlled by others, and I feel a little frustrated. I hope that she will be a growth-oriented heroine, and her body and mind will gradually become stronger. Come on [currently in development] The memo clearly said to stay away from Gu Huai, but she refused to listen and fell in love with him... She deserved to be hurt. I can accept weak heroines, but I can't accept idiots.
It gets better later on, the heroine is not a strong woman, the true face of the system gradually emerges, and I look forward to the day when the heroine can truly grow up and get rid of her fate.
Very nice! I hope you can continue to maintain it, come on! I will keep following the updates, and I have seen a different heroine. Mianmian is very tenacious, and I have learned something from her. Thank you Mianmian, and the author Dada~ Please don't stop updating, [love] [love] (because this is my spiritual motivation, hehe) Mianmian is a growth-oriented heroine, which is bound to be a long process. It's an honor to read Mianmian's story and the process of accompanying her. I just hope that Mianmian can live a shining life without being manipulated. Maybe her unhappiness reminds me that I have been having a rough time and am confused, but there is nothing I can do to change it. I feel that the author has buried a lot of questions, and I am very much looking forward to the next plot. Mianmian, hurry up and become stronger, you are the kind of person who can stand alone. Be the wind of freedom. Me too, grow up quickly.
I usually only review books that I like. Regardless of negative or positive reviews, this book is well written. The special debate competition was so real. I was also a debater three at the beginning, and then I got first place in the class twice and was able to participate in the competition within the school. In the final competition, the girl in the same group as me had a better social relationship than me. She was originally a debater four, but when it came to the final competition, she regretted it and said she didn't want to be a debater four. She wanted to change positions with me, so I went to the debater four. She held the position of debater three and was silenced by the other party. As expected, we lost. The article written by the author is very logical and I feel that he has a lot of experience. Every detail he writes is very real and has a microcosm of social reality, so it seems to be very real. The author is good at writing extreme pulling. I enjoyed reading this. Many people in the comment area were saddened by Gu Huai, which is normal, because they were all taken away by the heroine. Whatever the heroine's mentality is, the readers will also have the same mentality. When I watched it, I knew that the heroine Jedi would fall in love with Gu Huai and then fail. I was not sad. I have experienced this kind of thing before, but it was a little different. I hope that the heroine will only love herself, and then be a scumbag and live the life she likes happily. Men can just have fun (meaning starting a harem! But the heroine only loves herself) The author writes really well! ! Although there are more suppression scenes, I am still looking forward to the follow-up.
The author is waiting for your update. When can the heroine counterattack? I like her indomitable spirit, but I still feel a little frustrated after reading it. I also hope that there will be someone who can always prefer Xue Mian. She is really pitiful
I really like Ling Yichen, he is really nice, and I think he is the first male protagonist who treats the female protagonist well and has no prejudice. As for Gu Huai, I feel uncomfortable. From some of the words he said to Qin Zhirou, I feel that he is a little bad.
I finished reading it in one go. The author's writing is really good and it hit my mark. The heroine here is a growth-type heroine. Some inappropriate behavior in the early stage is expected, but in the later stage, I was really touched when I saw the growth of the heroine. I really like Xiao Ling [blowing kiss] Master, master, go ahead, Xiao Ling hides his emotions too deeply, and the heroine feels insecure because of the vague memories of her previous life, but Xiao Ling really gives the heroine enough preference and is really good to her [crying] [crying] [crying] Please, let our young master be the male protagonist (it doesn't matter if he is not the male protagonist, but the palace). Cheers to the author, your writing is great, I will continue to support you! [Blowing kiss]
It's good to watch, and the male protagonist's character is very suitable for me. But I really like Ling Yichen's arrogance. Write more, it's awesome. Also, the plot is too slow. After more than 100 chapters, the progress is only more than 10%. Do you want to write 900 chapters at this rate? [Hold face][Hold face]
(I was desperate. I just typed more than 500 words. Then I went out to get something. When I came back, I restarted and cleared everything.) What a treasure book! Why isn't it popular? ! Scream The men who have appeared so far all poke me very hard, every one of them is so addictive. There are really all kinds of characters, and each character is written in a very three-dimensional way. Gu Yan is really silly and cute at the moment. Every time I see him and the heroine together, there is a very relaxed and warm feeling, noisy. The puppy really loves to cry, and I haven't noticed that he is a little crybaby before. The puppy is also really well-behaved and will remember every word Mianmian said. He is also very silly and will write down Mianmian's words very seriously and then feel sad. The puppy will also secretly write a diary to record his continuous life Sure enough, the prerequisite for a good time is to have Gu Huai supporting him in front of him. I really love Gu Huai, who doesn't love this kind of gentle and considerate person? It can be said that he has initially solved the knot in Mian Mian's heart, and he is also the first person Mian Mian fell in love with. But! Gu Huai is actually...! (No spoilers hehe) Well, it's miserable anyway. It's really hard to tell the main character. I hope it will get better in the future. Xiao Ling is also very cute. He is a cute and arrogant big cat. I also love Xiao Ling very much. But Xiaoling doesn't know how to express himself. He doesn't say anything and gets angry himself. The child also suffers from this. But it was better in the back, mainly because Xiaoling was the first one to get a kiss! And kissed me many times! But it was still miserable later. Do you know how panicked I was at that time? I thought Xiao Ling died there. You stubborn child, just move your mouth a little and leave Mianmian alone. Mianmian doesn't really hate you, it's because he doesn't feel safe enough. Daling, how should I put it, is a very manly model, simply a male among males. It's so manly that I don't know what to say. Every time Mian Mian Yi and Daling are together, I feel like my brain is running out of energy. Sure enough, conversations and thinking are reserved for smart people. When Daling appeared, I instantly felt like this article suddenly switched to the set and became a brain-burning reasoning. Mr. Huo is a very gentlemanly man. It's a gentle style, but unlike Gu Huai, he doesn't speak Chinese well, so I don't know how to describe it. I'm really curious about what it will be like after he falls in love with Mianmian. However, Mr. Huo is probably a big brother figure that Mianmian is relatively unfamiliar with at the moment, and he has a filter highlighter in his heart. However, it does not count as a filter, he is really excellent! That's all for now, anyway, I really love it Mianmian, a super cute little cake, kitten, little sparrow, little hamster hh. At the beginning of this article, Mianmian's handling of Xiaoyu's incident was really great. It didn't rely on anything but Mianmian's own bet and hard work. This can be regarded as the first major turning point when Mianmian comes back from his reincarnation. It is obvious that Mianmian is growing up step by step, getting rid of her own shackles and the shadow caused by her previous life step by step. The debate session is also very well written. This is the first time I have seen such a serious and lively debate session in a novel. I seriously doubt that the author really likes the debate session. To be honest, I really didn't expect the plot of the fight between Mianmian, Fatty and that other person. It was beyond my expectation. I thought that there would be that old-fashioned scene of being rescued. ! ! We Mianmian successfully completed the ultimate counterattack on our own! ! Really, I started to have a more comprehensive and new view of Mianmian from this point on. The character Mianmian also becomes more alive the more she writes about it. Of course, many of the female characters appearing in this article are also very attractive, such as Senior Jiang and Ms. He. It's really strong. And objectively speaking, Qin Zhirou is actually a very powerful person and a very strategic person. Unfortunately, he and Mianmian have different positions and are currently in opposition. That being said, I have a bad opinion of Qin Gan The plot line feels like it's still quite long, and there are still a lot of mysteries to answer. I still don't understand why these men are so protective of Qin. Grandma Qin seems to be a powerful person as well. All in all, it's very interesting. Please give it a thumbs up, author! Come on, Mianmian, come on, those guys! (Okay, what the hell am I cheering for) Looking forward to the follow-up development~~
I think this book is quite good. The plot has twists and turns, the contradictions are very prominent, and the characters are very typical. Especially the character of the original heroine Qin Zhirou is very well created. The character of the heroine is very distinctive, and many characters are interspersed in it, which is very exciting. I don't know what kind of novel this is. If you think of it as a novel with a female protagonist, it's actually not very good. My own point of view is that the female protagonist has grown a lot from the beginning to now, but the plot of the female protagonist often revolves around the male protagonists. The female protagonist and the male protagonists do not have a strong sense of boundary and are involved. IMHO, people with a strong sense of morality will find it uncomfortable to watch. The female protagonist is very emotional and slightly negative. I personally feel that the heroine's rise is a bit long. To be honest, I have always felt a sense of wimpiness in my heart after reading this article. I don't know what will happen next. This only represents my point of view before the heroine has risen. (The subject matter is very novel. To be honest, I personally feel that if it is written as a Po article, it would be quite exciting. If it offends me, please forgive me. This only represents my personal opinion. Just to clarify, if you don't agree with my point of view, you can point it out, but please don't use radical language, because I may be more crazy than you.}
It's very good-looking. It's not the usual cool novel where everyone loves me from the beginning or slaps me in the face immediately. The heroine's growth is an immersive experience and has a certain microcosm of society. The heroine is portrayed very realistically and is considered a smart and motivated ordinary person. The characters' psychological language and other descriptions are delicate and real. The integration of several male protagonists can sometimes just buffer the tension and heaviness caused by this reality. The plot is foreshadowed and advanced step by step without falling into the trap. It is worth watching.
Look good, look good, look good, look good, look so good [please update] [KISS] It's so good, I hope the author will update eighty chapters a day [crying] [crying]. Currently I'm optimistic... Actually, I'm not optimistic about anyone, because everyone and Xue Mian are enjoying it, and I'm just a piece of cake. Gu Yan, he still can't tell whether he likes Qin Zhirou or not. I'm really looking forward to him chasing his wife to the crematorium and then getting jealous. It was so funny when Gu Yan and Xue Mian met for the first time. Gu Yan spoke confidently about Xue Mian~~ Gu Huai and Xue Mian, who knows the ambiguous atmosphere between them, it was so funny but I didn't feel how much he liked Xue Mian. Maybe the next second he obediently listened to Qin Zhirou's words and did something that made Xue Mian a little sad, which made me feel chilled through the screen. I can't guess what happened between Gu Huai and Qin Zhirou to make him so obedient. At first, he said "I miss you too" to Qin Zhirou, but later he served her with barbecued meat. Ling has had very few appearances in recent days. He treats the heroine like a pet or a kitten (right?), So I am very much looking forward to the fact that he will later realize that he does not have this kind of emotion for Xue Miancai, but likes [admiration] and [admiration], and he is actually a few centimeters taller than Gu Yan. This setting is OK and he will go straight to the big score. Xue Mian has also grown a lot, and in my eyes she has made a qualitative leap! I am brave enough to participate in debates and dare to criticize others directly, especially when I said to Qin Zhirou, "I am optimistic about the position of senior sister because I don't know anything else." I feel so happy! ! Don't flatter or please, I love the hostess's character [shy][shy]. Even though he knew that he was insignificant and knew the direction of his life, he still resisted at the same time, so everything that happened next happened. She took a small step towards freedom and happiness. This small step is by no means an ordinary small step, because there will be a second step and a third step in the future... Then she is still far away from true happiness. I really regret it. If I had known earlier, I should have read this book later. Although the author updates it on time every day, I really can't read enough. So painful [sad].
Ahhhhhhhh it's really beautiful I'm curious about what Gu Huai did in his previous life, and the heroine's first message was to stay away from him, but... He's really hard not to make people fall in love with him [crazy] I feel like the heroine is a little influenced by Gu Huai's emotions. Although I don't know what happened in the previous life, can I not abuse the heroine [I'm about to cry]
There are some minor flaws, but it's pretty good-looking. Don't give up. The one star missing is because it's not good enough. I feel that Gu Huai's obedience to the original heroine is a bit like the example given by the system: Mianmian's mobile phone will break after going around for a long time, and then he buys the same mobile phone as in his previous life. This reminds me of Mianmian ignoring the remarks and falling on Gu Huai again. (Of course the person who hurt her in the previous life was Gu Huai's other personality?) The two people, Ling Yichen and Mianmian, always seem to have different brainwaves, like the male protagonist who has no words to explain and the female protagonist who doesn't understand. (This is also related to Ling Yichen's childhood experience). There is a lot of sexual tension between the two people, and the author is very good at this. Besides, Gu Yan, a boy who is simply twisted, is very interesting, and the head of the Huo family, Bai Yueguang, feels clean. It is really not easy for Mianmian to lack love and often face a PUA system. She is not perfect, but unique, just like each of us. I hope that the author will let her have full love in the end.
The heroine is not strong, but she can struggle tenaciously in an isolated and helpless situation. The friendship with Himawari really makes me cry. The friendship between girls is indeed the best.
A growth-oriented heroine will grow in every aspect, whether it's emotional or character. In this process, what we pay attention to is not just the simple individual, but also the surrounding environment, as well as family, friends and other things related to her. The author writes very thoughtfully and very well.
It's original and looks good so far. While reflecting real-life problems, the characters are also very full. ! Gu Yan really hit me xp! [Almost crying][Admiration]
,! ! ! Mianmian, don't be in love! Don't be fooled! ! !
Very well written, very logical thinking, keep up the good work At the beginning 2 was okay, but the heroine became more and more like a fool as she got to the back, 6-_-||
Doesn't anyone like the young master? I love young master so much
I really, really like my brother and young master. There must be something hidden here. I'll keep an eye out for it! ! ! ! The author writes so well! ! !
It's good-looking and good-looking (*˘˘*).。*♡Thanks to the author
So far, I've won my heart. Although I really don't like the abuse of the heroine, it's really great that Xue Mian gradually stood up in the setbacks. I liked Ling more at first, but later I felt that it was better for the heroine to be beautiful alone, unless someone who has always been by the heroine's side appears. Then Huo Wo Zundu liked it very much, and I look forward to the follow-up plot development. I will give it a five-star first, and the author will do my best! !
This book was really hard to read at first, but later on when I saw the heroine's inner struggles and her sense of powerlessness, I felt that the plot of this book was good, and I will continue to read it! ! ! !
Ling Yichen is really... Very exciting! I don't know why, I've always been scared! (๑•́₃ •̀๑)
Hey, can you be nice to your baby girl? I don't want her to get hurt again and again. I feel really distressed. When can I get rid of these men? Dumei, I want to make them suffer and regret until they want to die! ! !
I thought it was okay when I first read the introduction, but this time it was incredible. I read 131 chapters in a row. There are really few books that suit my taste like this! ! ! I just like how many male protagonists are ambiguous about the female protagonist, and the female protagonist is very smart! Especially the plot of the debate competition in the article! I like it so much!
I think it's pretty good-looking. Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]
It's very interesting. The plot is novel and worth watching. I really, really like her. Sometimes I feel sorry for Mianmian who lacks love. I hope she will get better and better [love] [love]
It was boring at first, but it got better and better as I watched it. I watched too many boss bosses, and the crazy male protagonists with weird personalities were quite new. It is also different from other plots in which the "female supporting character" in the guide is either very smart or has obvious cheats. This kind of step-by-step description of the heroine's growth mentality and process attracted me to continue reading. The content of the plot is also attractive and worth watching, but it's a bit fast to catch up on. I have to wait for the author to update a few chapters. It's difficult to sleeve.