Abandoned Disciple******************

No one commented? Then I'll be the first. Generally speaking, it's okay, but the main character has returned to the world of immortality from his ancestor and is already the strongest in the world. There is no need to play those stupid games. Also, the issue of realm is unclear. Finally, the performance of the battle is a bit weak. After all, you are writing fantasy and not martial arts. You can totally exaggerate.