[Beast Control] [System] [Escape] [Single Female Protagonist] [Slow Heat] [Easy] [Evaluate it, don't be shy]
Time travel is a serious time travel, and beast control is a serious beast control, but the system is not a serious system.
Tang Zhanxin: I want to become stronger.
System: That's krypton life.
Tang Zhanxin: What should I do if I die?
System: Then make up for it after you become stronger.
Tang Zhanxin: Then how can I become stronger?
System: That's krypton life.
Tang Zhanxin: ... Then I don't want to become stronger, so let me be a showoff.
System: Unbinding also costs lives.
Tang Zhanxin: vocal... (Birds singing and flowers fragrant)
System: You won't move forward without giving you some motivation. In short, come on.
Tang Zhanxin: Add your dam...
How can any system risk its life to trap the host? So Tang Zhanxin was carried forward.
I will improve my life, my beast will become stronger, and we will all have a bright future.
When Tang Zhanxin climbed to the top surrounded by his beast masters, people were curious about his training method. When someone asked him about his training method,
Tang Zhanxin smiled bitterly, pretending to be incomprehensible and said: "Try your best."
Reader comments
On the one hand, I really hope that you can ask me questions, but on the other hand, I don't really want you to ask me questions because I am not strong-willed and I am afraid that I will not be able to bear the spoilers.
Although I don't like the quality grading of the Taming Beast, it's not a big deal.
Because I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 5.
I really don't understand what it means for the protagonist to suddenly call a strange old man his uncle.
You can say that the protagonist was exposed, and then the old man couldn't stand it and covered it up.
But you have no mental description of the two of them at all. I am a reader, not a roundworm in your belly.
What's even more incomprehensible is that you still have to write a system to "ding" and "ding". It was also inserted in the middle of the dialogue between the two, and then these dialogues were "glued" together, which was extremely uncomfortable to watch.
There are various small details that have not been handled well in the first few chapters, and I am too lazy to talk about them.
Give me four stars for encouragement, bye bye.
You average one chapter a day. If you don't work hard, how can you make our little money [angry]
Well, the protagonist's system is based on krypton life. He already has gray hair. Doesn't the protagonist have any means to increase his lifespan? Otherwise, he may die of old age if he keeps knocking like this.
The book is good. To be honest, the emotional line of Wenren was not well written or handled well. It felt a bit abrupt, especially the few paragraphs about buying flowers at the end. I almost persuaded me to give up and let the book become ashes. Those few paragraphs are really too classic [facepalm][facepalm]
The book is good, but I don't know how to write the emotional line, so I gave up first, and suggested that the author finally write without the heroine if he doesn't know how to write the emotional line.
Okay, worth a look
Beautiful, love watching.
The author is so short.
The writing is okay so far, but the main character's speech is always weird, and it always feels like the numbers are deliberately extended for the sake of water.
The writing is good, but the fact that enlightenment can be refreshed with lifespan can also become a knife. If you don't give the protagonist some ways to increase his lifespan, he will die young.
Some light flavor. . Especially the protagonist's emotional scenes are a bit templated.
See Chapter 13, three stars cannot be higher
It's okay. I haven't read it for a long time. The author's writing is okay, with a little bit of pen and ink, but the logic needs to be sorted out. There could be more foreshadowing. The character's personality is not very outstanding, and it feels a bit irrational. It could be more rich. I support it and hope to see more.
Few. . . . .
There's something wrong with the protagonist's character. He failed to create it. He's too idealistic.
It's very interesting so far, but it's just one chapter a day, which is a bit short. Also, why don't we have a female protagonist? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]
Is the male protagonist toxic?
Nothing to see
It's good to watch, but now it's too bland, and there are too few updates. I tell the author, wait until you get the outline back, then you'll have ten updates a day.
Ah, I read the wrong heroine again, but the author wrote it very well. I'll check back when I accept it.
On the one hand, I really hope that you can ask me questions, but on the other hand, I don't really want you to ask me questions because I am not strong-willed and I am afraid that I will not be able to bear the spoilers.
Although I don't like the quality grading of the Taming Beast, it's not a big deal. Because I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 5. I really don't understand what it means for the protagonist to suddenly call a strange old man his uncle. You can say that the protagonist was exposed, and then the old man couldn't stand it and covered it up. But you have no mental description of the two of them at all. I am a reader, not a roundworm in your belly. What's even more incomprehensible is that you still have to write a system to "ding" and "ding". It was also inserted in the middle of the dialogue between the two, and then these dialogues were "glued" together, which was extremely uncomfortable to watch. There are various small details that have not been handled well in the first few chapters, and I am too lazy to talk about them. Give me four stars for encouragement, bye bye.
You average one chapter a day. If you don't work hard, how can you make our little money [angry]
Well, the protagonist's system is based on krypton life. He already has gray hair. Doesn't the protagonist have any means to increase his lifespan? Otherwise, he may die of old age if he keeps knocking like this.
The book is good. To be honest, the emotional line of Wenren was not well written or handled well. It felt a bit abrupt, especially the few paragraphs about buying flowers at the end. I almost persuaded me to give up and let the book become ashes. Those few paragraphs are really too classic [facepalm][facepalm]
The book is good, but I don't know how to write the emotional line, so I gave up first, and suggested that the author finally write without the heroine if he doesn't know how to write the emotional line.
Okay, worth a look
Beautiful, love watching.
The author is so short.
The writing is okay so far, but the main character's speech is always weird, and it always feels like the numbers are deliberately extended for the sake of water.
The writing is good, but the fact that enlightenment can be refreshed with lifespan can also become a knife. If you don't give the protagonist some ways to increase his lifespan, he will die young.
Some light flavor. . Especially the protagonist's emotional scenes are a bit templated.
See Chapter 13, three stars cannot be higher
It's okay. I haven't read it for a long time. The author's writing is okay, with a little bit of pen and ink, but the logic needs to be sorted out. There could be more foreshadowing. The character's personality is not very outstanding, and it feels a bit irrational. It could be more rich. I support it and hope to see more.
Few. . . . .
There's something wrong with the protagonist's character. He failed to create it. He's too idealistic.
It's very interesting so far, but it's just one chapter a day, which is a bit short. Also, why don't we have a female protagonist? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]
Is the male protagonist toxic?
Nothing to see
It's good to watch, but now it's too bland, and there are too few updates. I tell the author, wait until you get the outline back, then you'll have ten updates a day.
Ah, I read the wrong heroine again, but the author wrote it very well. I'll check back when I accept it.