[Slow Pace + Chat Group]
Compared with an eternity that seems forever out of reach, endings are often close at hand.
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After becoming a transcendent, Feng Mo finally returned to the world that had once been his own.
But after millions upon millions of years had passed, why had only a few years gone by in this world?
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With the Tian Shang Empire's reforms complete, can the throne finally see its end in this era?
Yingzhou was once a tiny island. What could possibly have let it subdue a raging dragon that had roared for millennia?
Was democracy in the Northern Alliance really so far out of reach from the beginning? Is true unity really nothing more than wishful thinking?
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Feng Mo and a bunch of ridiculous chat group members looked out at the world after all the chaos, the spiritual qi revival, and the wars between nations…
“Everyone,
do we have to destroy the world all over again?”
This book is quite good. It reminds me of the teacher's expression when he looked at my composition when I was writing it. He really wrote whatever came to mind. This book is very watery. For example, "a police car with a siren approaching from a distance" could write "a car with majestic and eye-catching white and black stripes on its body, the blue and red police lights on the roof flashing like crazy, and at the same time making a sound that scares all evil." It's too watery. There is almost no logic, just like this sentence: Feng Mo put his hands on the armrests on both sides of the interrogation chair, his slender white fingertips were in contact with the iron armrests, and the index finger of his left hand was slightly raised. "Da——" The crisp sound between fingertips and metal sounded in the interrogation room where there was only the sound of breathing and fans at the moment. However, none of the three people paid attention to this extremely ordinary behavior. They just glanced at Feng Mo and had no idea what was happening to Qianshan Public Welfare, the underworld organization that was being torn to pieces by lightning that kept falling by "coincidence". 6, Too 6 Clumsy and illogical
A very funny invincible novel, the writing is also very good. Sure enough, Invincible's writing should be funny. If Invincible's writing isn't funny, then look at it.
How can I put it this way? The story line is very confusing, often hard to understand, and it's just too watery.
It looks so messy
One word is "chaos", the rest is fine
His head hurt, the characters were not prioritized, and the overall layout was very messy.
It's so messy. The whole plot, I can't say that I don't know what it's about at all, but it just feels very messy. It's so messy that it's hard to watch.
The author's book seems a bit painful to the brain
It's still pretty good-looking, but there are so many million dots. Short
You're so slow-paced. It's so fucking chaotic. Where's the main plot? As for the branch plot, your story is almost like an accident! Stop writing and start again.