A Sleep*************

To be honest, I was really looking forward to this novel reaching one million words, but I really didn't expect that it would end at about 150,000 words, which is a pretty good subject matter. It can be used as a literary template (although I personally don't like templates very much, as the mode is strict like translating classical Chinese). If the author can expand it, it can definitely be expanded to more than a million words. For example, I think the order of the plot can be adjusted (the following is the million standard). Mao Ka and related characters (such as Li Qin) are placed in the middle and late stages, and the meeting between Ye Bai and his parents is placed in the middle and early stages (more scientific, After all, it takes time to see people's hearts). As for Bai Qiyi, you can just discard it (it's just a personal opinion, it's a bit too fantasy). As for Fu Zhen's life experience, I personally think it shouldn't be too outrageous (China's families with assets over 100 million only have hundreds of thousands, and everyone knows the market value of a group). Finally, the plot can be stretched a little more, and they get married in half a year, which compresses a considerable amount of creative space (it can be started in two or three years, this is not a sentence). You can even write about things after marriage (personally, I think there are three important ending points, ① when the child is born, ② when the child is born, ③ the child's early years), such as writing about life with the child(ren) (it is not recommended to write too many). Of course, overall, the author's conception and logic are very clear, and it is a rare masterpiece. But I still hope that the author can reproduce it properly. This figure is so amazing that I thought a mere 150,000 words would not be enough to match it (I have no intention of mocking the author!!!). Finally, I would like to thank the author greatly (I really don't know what word to use, I can only say thank you^ω^)

I said to my cat, "Change it for me"

It's mainly a stimulating thing, but the author is a bit slow in updating it. Can it be made faster? The update speed has increased, and the content has increased. Today is Children's Day. I don't know how big it is. Anyway, I am here to wish everyone a happy Children's Day. Keep up the good work, author, I will always support you here

I feel like I'm going to get diabetes. I really want to get a cat.

It's awesome, I love it, but compared to those popular books, the writing style is definitely better than others. The writing style can be strengthened, and the character description can be more detailed. There is still a lot of room for improvement.,,,,,, Give the author two options, either publish a new book quickly, or release a second season [laughing]

It's very good, very sweet, and the character creation is relatively successful. It's a relatively good book. For novices, there is one thing that is really good and even a bit over the top - if the sugar content exceeds the standard, will you really not get diabetes? (No). It can also be seen that the author's writing style has improved significantly. Continue

I hope there's no knife in the back

It's very good-looking. Although it's a bit imitative, it's generally good. It would be nice to use it more in daily life.

I've seen a lot of similar movies, and the male protagonists all seem like hypocrites [laughing and crying]

Good to watch, love to listen to, a story that will be loved by everyone😍😍😍 Children can actually comment on 666. Can the author see this? ? ?

Very good, thank you to the author!

Okay, the third to last one is a bit sharp.

The book is good, come on, be cheerful I'm waiting for your story every day 😉

Very sweetly written. The rhythm of the emotional line is okay and slightly tight. That is, the heroine's skill set and learning ability are too fantasy. The change of perspective does not need to be written directly, which may be a bit strange to some people. In theory, if the author's writing skills are better, he can not change the perspective and show the overall event through a large perspective and soft and silent words.

It looks good and I love watching it (don't watch it if it has IF lines)

Five points? Must be five points!

Must be a good book

Short light novel, very good

Good books good books good books

Hehe, I usually just look at the title, and it looks pretty good.

It fulfilled one of my fantasies!

The only bad thing is that it is too short and not enough to see👀

Ten points of punishment. There is a knife inside. Please eat with caution.

Author✍️Come on, if you can keep coding every day, let me see it take off🛫✊

Author! The second part will be released soon! I! Return! Think! Look! ! !

Very nice! Just a little short

Good! Very good! Very good! So good that it explodes!

The writing is still very good, keep up the good work

It's pretty good, everyday, cat girl, who can say no to it?

The plot went by a bit fast But it's still pretty