At the Beginning, the Great Sage Xumi and the Little Grass God Mourned

The speed of this book is moderate and will not cause huge loss of nutrients. Yanzu readers can read it with confidence.

To be honest, the combat setting is a bit broken, and the plot is not deep enough, but the advantages are outstanding, so I give it four stars. In my opinion, excellent fan fiction must first have sufficient understanding and knowledge of the original work, especially this kind of work that is constantly being updated. It is very difficult to write fan fiction. You have to have your own opinions and ideas, and you are afraid of backstabbing. The author has undoubtedly done a good job in this regard. The second is the plot and writing. The rhythm of the plot should be compact and interesting, not too tense and tiring to watch, nor too loose to retain the readers. The writing should also be reasonable, not too brainless and childish. This is also achieved. The last thing is to have a sense of reality and rationality. The plot development should be reasonable and logical, so that readers will have a sense of involvement. A lot of worldview needs to be added. Original plot, details, and psychological description are very important. Although this is lacking, it is outstanding in being light and funny, and it is completely acceptable. Only if there are no too many poisonous points based on these, can it be considered a good book. The advantage is that the writing is good, there are many interesting things to do, and the funny jokes are the highlights of this book. Although Invincible makes people feel relaxed and happy to watch, it is a bit too easy. The system cheat factor is too big, and the original plot has been greatly changed. Generally, I don't dare to write like this if I don't have the ability. It's too easy. Explosive Poison, this book is not bad, but I feel that it is not long, invincible is too early, and the pace is too fast. Even the setting that everyone has left in their memory will cause a lot of trouble. Even though the protagonist is aware of it, he still does not restrain himself. The subsequent plot is a bit worrying, but judging from the picture, it is not bad.

As someone who is a fan of chaos and evil, I really enjoyed reading this book. I wanted to catch the author and starve him in the basement for three days, and then write ten chapters for a coward [laughter][laughter][laughter] Where are people? Come out and speak, get up and finish writing before you die.

Not bad, not bad. At least among the analog novels I have read, this book is considered top-notch in terms of plot and characters. There are too few chapters, too few chapters, and the story is over before we even start.

It's quite interesting to watch. The main character is not the kind of person who keeps imitating traditional routines and seems silly and doesn't affect reality. This makes it very comfortable to watch. Although he becomes invincible very quickly, the follow-up plot is also very interesting.

The writing is so beautiful, the writing style is the kind of sudden saucy, the kind of funny writing that flashes my waist, but the writing is very smooth and coherent. It will not be funny just for the sake of being funny. The other characters are not out of character. In the simulation, there are some epic descriptions, warm and delicate descriptions, very powerful👍

Yes, yes, you are very popular with me. I will always pay attention to Aiqing if she continues to show off her talents.

Apart from being a little bit free in the simulation, it still suits my taste. The world simulation novel needs more emotional portrayal of the characters and a clearer code of conduct for the protagonist (because the personality of the protagonist in each simulation is different). I hope the author can write it well later. There are still many places that can be expanded upon, and I hope the author can control the pace.

It's great. Halfway through the game, I feel like the protagonist is the master (referring to a mental state). Unlike other simulations that end with regrets or perfect endings, most of the simulations in this book are about bringing disaster to the seven kingdoms and destroying the seven gods. The changes in each simulation are quickly reflected.

A very good work that made my car spin. The protagonist is meticulous in his actions and decisive in killing (?). He is a character with high IQ. Although the title of the book mainly gives people the impression that this book takes place in Xumi, in fact most of the book is in Liyue → Mondstad → Daozhu. Occasionally, there are easter eggs from Bengtie and Bengsan. Overall, the whole story makes people feel very comfortable. It is a pity that the work suddenly ended in the rice wife chapter because of the power outside the world. It is a pity. But this book is still a book worth reading for book lovers who can accept multiple female protagonists.

I personally think it's a great book, and I won't accept any refutation.

It's a bit rushed, author~ I really enjoyed your book. It's nonsensical but has a bottom line. It's not like some pure nonsensical books with no bottom line. The relationship development with the female character will not be too embarrassing. It's already very good. Come on~ The short novel is also very cute~ I hope you can continue writing [laughing]

It's a very good book. I hope I can continue to write thousands of chapters. At the beginning, we write about the Seven Kingdoms of the Gods of the Teyvat continent. In the early stage, we can write about the deep background of Genshin Impact, connecting the Quantum Sea and the Tree of Imaginary Numbers. In the early and mid-term, we can open the map of the Quantum Sea and the Tree of Imaginary Numbers and write about Honkai Impact (if Genshin Impact and Honkai Impact are not enough, we can write about part of the war between the Queen of the Quantum Sea and the Tree of Imaginary Numbers and connect it to the middle stage). In the mid-term stage, we can write about the Quantum Sea and the Tree of Imaginary Numbers. At the same time, a new map background can be introduced to simulate the situation outside the battlefield of the Quantum Sea and the Tree of Imaginary Numbers. Of course, you can also write down some foreshadowing in the early and mid-term I won't write the rest for now. Just finish writing these first. Come on author [like]

It's really fun and interesting during the simulation, but a bit awkward in daily life. Overall, it's pretty good.

It can be seen that there are quite a lot of funny elements in it, but the current simulation has not actually been to Honkai Impact III and the Star Dome Railway. At most, it is just being hit by the Star Dome Train and touching Xi'er's jade feet [eating melons] in the hope of actually participating in the plot.

The writing is very interesting and the writing style is also very good. It is also one of the best among the simulation essays I have read. There are typos, but they are few and do not affect reading; I suggest the author write more plots about Bengtie or Bengsan. The part where the train set hits the protagonist is very interesting. I hope the author can write more. I suggest waiting until the sun comes out from the west to finish it.

An okay simulator, but the world will be destroyed at the beginning Brave, the fanfic drastically changes the original plot It's not a cool article, but it can be considered rather evil and exciting. If the camp wants to talk about it, it can be regarded as evil and neutral. As long as I am happy, it is a common protagonist in novels. The protagonist's good and evil value between plus 500 and minus 500 should be around 100, which is kind-hearted. Personal rating 9.1 Points

After watching half of it, I found it quite interesting, but I found that there was not much interaction with the loli characters. It seemed that the loli characters who appeared in Genshin Impact didn't appear much. The only one who appeared was the incarnation of Ruoduo's evil thoughts, but overall it was quite interesting.

It deserves five stars. The humor in the writing is often funny and a lot of fun. The author's ideas are very novel. There are many heroines but they are not studs. You don't fall in love with each other. The simulation content is interesting and the simulations are not particularly frequent.

Come on, author, don't finish the book, don't abandon the book, please [cry], this is the best Genshin Impact fanfic I've ever read on Tomato. What I appreciate most is that the character descriptions of the characters in it are very realistic, such as Hutao, Beidou, and Keqing. It's not like other fanfics, either accepting this or that. There is almost no emotional description and it is very stiff. This one is very good👌🏻[Love][Like]

An excellent piece of purely entertaining writing. The writing style is a bit white but the overall look and feel is comfortable. There are no details on the settings and there are no poisonous points. It highlights a cool aspect. The most important thing is that the author can recognize himself clearly. He has written hundreds of chapters without making any mistakes. The whole article is funny and funny. It is very happy [laughs evilly]

Basically every simulation in Genshin Impact is very good, especially the second one (I've only finished the second one so far, but that doesn't mean I don't know the previous one!!!). I cried when I saw it TT, King of Sumeru! The flawless throne! ! ! (I'm sick) Generally speaking, I don't actually like reading simulation novels. This one is really good＼(`Δ')/, I recommend it. [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

The plot is very interesting (a lot of fun), the protagonist's personality is stable, and there is no inconsistency (he is always very slutty), and the original characters are not seriously OOC. The only pity is that it was cut at the end, but it is also a very good simulation novel. Summary: Worth watching.

Specific content: cannot be described, cannot be embodied, cannot be explained. It can only be said that he is a relative of joy, a happy planet; where there is pain, there is him, and where there is him, there is happiness. When he encounters a planet with life, he will step up the accelerator and enter it to bring "happiness" to people. As for what will happen to the planet without people, you don't care. The content is very explosive and exciting, you can only watch it by yourself, it combines many elements [smile]

It's so funny, a very interesting novel

The writing style may be a little poor, but the content is novel, five stars.

The author is a fundamentalist, and the world view he gives is very complete, involving a lot of history and plot, which is much better than most spoofed fan fiction. It's a pity that I couldn't finish it in the end

It's very good, especially when it writes about Mondstadt's Free Church. The words of the Free Church Archbishop gave me a very strange feeling for some reason. Coupled with the description of the light cone in which the protagonist is inside, it makes me feel like the protagonist has really become a god.

It's very beautiful and matches my taste. I will continue to follow it. It disappeared all of a sudden, which was very unpleasant.

This is the best book I have ever read. Love to watch! But why? Why is the tail docked at the back? Obviously I feel like I can still write! Do you know how uncomfortable it is when you see that paragraph? One of my favorites so far! The result tells me that there is obviously still there, but it is not written anymore? Blue thin mushrooms~