From the Start, I'm Sumeru's Great Sage, and the Little Grass God Is in Despair

The speed of this book is moderate and will not cause huge loss of nutrients. Yanzu readers can read it with confidence.

To be honest, the combat setting is a bit broken, and the plot is not deep enough, but the advantages are outstanding, so I give it four stars. In my opinion, excellent fan fiction must first have sufficient understanding and knowledge of the original work, especially this kind of work that is constantly being updated. It is very difficult to write fan fiction. You have to have your own opinions and ideas, and you are afraid of backstabbing. The author has undoubtedly done a good job in this regard. The second is the plot and writing. The rhythm of the plot should be compact and interesting, not too tense and tiring to watch, nor too loose to retain the readers. The writing should also be reasonable, not too brainless and childish. This is also achieved. The last thing is to have a sense of reality and rationality. The plot development should be reasonable and logical, so that readers will have a sense of involvement. A lot of worldview needs to be added. Original plot, details, and psychological description are very important. Although this is lacking, it is outstanding in being light and funny, and it is completely acceptable. Only if there are no too many poisonous points based on these, can it be considered a good book. The advantage is that the writing is good, there are many interesting things to do, and the funny jokes are the highlights of this book. Although Invincible makes people feel relaxed and happy to watch, it is a bit too easy. The system cheat factor is too big, and the original plot has been greatly changed. Generally, I don't dare to write like this if I don't have the ability. It's too easy. Explosive Poison, this book is not bad, but I feel that it is not long, invincible is too early, and the pace is too fast. Even the setting that everyone has left in their memory will cause a lot of trouble. Even though the protagonist is aware of it, he still does not restrain himself. The subsequent plot is a bit worrying, but judging from the picture, it is not bad.

As someone who is a fan of chaos and evil, I really enjoyed reading this book. I wanted to catch the author and starve him in the basement for three days, and then write ten chapters for a coward [laughter][laughter][laughter] Where are people? Come out and speak, get up and finish writing before you die.

Not bad, not bad. At least among the analog novels I have read, this book is considered top-notch in terms of plot and characters. There are too few chapters, too few chapters, and the story is over before we even start.

It's quite interesting to watch. The main character is not the kind of person who keeps imitating traditional routines and seems silly and doesn't affect reality. This makes it very comfortable to watch. Although he becomes invincible very quickly, the follow-up plot is also very interesting.

The writing is so beautiful, the writing style is the kind of sudden saucy, the kind of funny writing that flashes my waist, but the writing is very smooth and coherent. It will not be funny just for the sake of being funny. The other characters are not out of character. In the simulation, there are some epic descriptions, warm and delicate descriptions, very powerful👍

Yes, yes, you are very popular with me. I will always pay attention to Aiqing if she continues to show off her talents.

Apart from being a little bit free in the simulation, it still suits my taste. The world simulation novel needs more emotional portrayal of the characters and a clearer code of conduct for the protagonist (because the personality of the protagonist in each simulation is different). I hope the author can write it well later. There are still many places that can be expanded upon, and I hope the author can control the pace.

A very good work that made my car spin. The protagonist is meticulous in his actions and decisive in killing (?). He is a character with high IQ. Although the title of the book mainly gives people the impression that this book takes place in Xumi, in fact most of the book is in Liyue → Mondstad → Daozhu. Occasionally, there are easter eggs from Bengtie and Bengsan. Overall, the whole story makes people feel very comfortable. It is a pity that the work suddenly ended in the rice wife chapter because of the power outside the world. It is a pity. But this book is still a book worth reading for book lovers who can accept multiple female protagonists.

It's great. Halfway through the game, I feel like the protagonist is the master (referring to a mental state). Unlike other simulations that end with regrets or perfect endings, most of the simulations in this book are about bringing disaster to the seven kingdoms and destroying the seven gods. The changes in each simulation are quickly reflected.