The Immortal of Bad People

5 Chapters a day or 5 million words per chapter, choose one

Suddenly there was a blur in front of my eyes and I felt dizzy. I endure the discomfort, I squatted down slowly, fearing that the sudden weightlessness would make me fall over. On the ground. There's a burning sensation in my lungs, as if it's on fire Feeling,. I knew I was sick again. I try to keep myself cold Jing, dialed 120 and asked the ambulance to take me to the hospital: I am Hong Ruo I asked the doctor with my eyes how long I could live. The doctor pushed up the bridge of my nose. He wore glasses, frowned, and hesitated for a long time. At this moment, I am asking about time. The Buddha was still, and it seemed like ten thousand years had passed. The doctor suddenly sighed. I was angry and told me guiltily: The condition is not optimistic. I said clearly He said An Lie: "It's okay, doctor, you don't have to blame yourself, I I understand the body. The doctor slowly opened his mouth and said "How many times have you If you don't listen, don't read unfinished articles again. "

Hello fellow bad people, Welcome everyone, I hope you all enjoy watching it^_^ Please also give me a little love for this newbie [send heart][send heart]

What do you mean, Ji Ruxue was touched by Shangguan and still looked at her? ? ? ? ?

This is no longer a matter of skill. With the Zhenzhen Fruit, the protagonist can penetrate the bad world by himself.

The protagonist ends all regrets with his invincible appearance. The fanfic is so cool, it fits so well, and it tastes so good.

Nothing much to say, a must read for harem literature lovers

It's okay for a new author, just practice more and it'll be fine

Objectively speaking, it's very good. It looked better when I watched it in the early stage, but when I watched it later, it lacked the same feeling as in the early stage. But overall, as a new writer, it is worth watching.

Delinquent fanfic. The protagonist travels through the world of delinquents. The system arranges it. He has a very awesome identity. His appearance is also top-notch. His strength is perfect. There is a system. There are elixirs for immortality, appearance repair, etc. It is not difficult to obtain. My favorite female characters are all in the protagonist's harem. I really like this book. [I learned it]. There are no poisonous points [I learned it]. I have read a lot of delinquent fanfics on all major platforms. This is the first book I have finished. Although there are very few, it won't be like other books that grind on one thing. The protagonist will take action if he has the strength [full]

Thank you to the author for the wonderful work. I have read a lot of novels and grew up reading the works of bad people, eh! I am very touched and like the content of this type of works. The content is very novel. Sometimes it is very similar to the original work and can bring emotions. Sometimes I feel that the author is very bold, but there is no lack of innovation. I have read many works. Although this one is a bit short and not very detailed, I am still willing to read it. It is very interesting! This is also the first work I reviewed, and I'm still thinking about it, so that's it! It's a bit clumsy to say too much, but I still like this work very much. Great! ! !

It's well written, but the harem doesn't feel very good.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, two words, good-looking!

After reading it, I don't have much to say, so I can still pass the time and read it. Okay, that's it. Writing a book is not easy, five stars encourage you! Many female literary yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Five-star reviews, the best update is over 100 chapters a day [laughing] [laughing] I read an author who has more than 60 chapters a day 666

The protagonist travels three hundred years into the future and is bound to Yuan Tiangang and Li Chunfeng at the beginning. The setting is very interesting. The rhythm is not sluggish, and it is okay if it is refreshing. It is suitable for old fans to read sentiments and passers-by to read refreshing articles. It is worth a try.

It's not easy for a newcomer to write a book. I'll give it five stars. Personally, I don't think there's any big problem with the plot. The character creation for newcomers is pretty good. There's nothing bad about it. It's just that it ends a little quickly. Come on! [Working on draft]

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Overall, it's good, but there is one problem. The protagonist is so strong. Even if the commander dies, the world will not be in chaos. Li Maozhen is the protagonist, and Li Siyuan is dead again. Who will cause the world to be in chaos? It can't be the man named Meng on the must-kill list.

What does the author say? Just you, eh, um, eh, eh, eh, eh, hey, just don't run away.

Gelaozi, no matter what kind of Zhenzhen fruit you choose, you will be invincible. You must choose a functional one. Just start reading from Chapter 4. The protagonist is quite capable of putting on airs [face covering] The time-travelling character has no personality, but it looks pretty good in the Tomato Delinquent fanfic.

It respects the original plot and has its own innovations. The protagonist has a distinct personality, there is no cliche plot of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, and his fighting power is unparalleled and he does not hold back. But the later part of writing about emotions was a bit perfunctory.

I have been fooled by 5 stars a lot, and I have developed a good habit. I give 5 stars regardless of whether my writing is good or rubbish. As an old bookworm, although I am immune to all poisons, I cannot try poison alone. There is you, there is me, there is everyone. Drink it with you all!

Although I don't understand it, I like the ending

The plot is okay, good for newcomers

It's very nice. Keep going and don't stop.

Highly recommended. This is an article with a certain "emotion". I hope netizens can read a few chapters before making a decision. .

It's very interesting to watch, not much to say, except that the main character has too many harems, it's basically uninteresting, and it's an incomparably enjoyable story.

Yes, it looks good, come on, author [Chigua]

This is a really cool article. Books written by others are invincible and hard to beat. Your system has a personality, the protagonist is thoughtful and decisive, and it's a good book. I suggest you write more of it.