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It's very interesting, I hope I can keep updating it until it's finished. Personally, I would rather have it without a female protagonist. But if the author really wants to write about a female protagonist, he hopes that there will be fewer emotional lines (it is best to have emotional lines marked on the title), and that chapters can be skipped to the point where the book can be read smoothly. [Ps are some of my suggestions. If the author plans to write a love line, I hope he can adopt a little [sending heart] (of course, it is up to the author to decide whether to adopt it or not. After all, Tomato's free articles generate electricity with love). After all, the emotional lines I have seen on Tomato are really terrible, and the reading experience is extremely poor [crying][crying] It would be a pity if such a beautiful theme, story background, and writing style were really ruined [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] (praise)] From the current perspective, it's a very comfortable read, and the career line is particularly great! I really love the plot of focusing on my career (for me), and I am also looking forward to seeing what the abbreviations for the follow-up in the previous article will look like. By the way, in the novel I read on Tomato, the author's plot summary is really good. He omits a lot of plots that may take several chapters to describe in other novels. At the same time, it can be read clearly without the context being abrupt and incomprehensible. This is really great! [Send heart][Send heart] Finally, I would like to ask the author how many gifts and updates are required? When will it be decided whether there will be a female lead? Don't be unfinished, don't be unfinished, don't be unfinished, wow Tomato's writing is so easy to be unfinished, I'm so scared [face covering]

There is flesh and blood, and the protagonist is decisive in killing and not a virgin, nor does he pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger. It is very suitable for people like me who are tired of watching pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.

This book is my favorite. It's good everywhere. But the author is not good. It's too short and not enough to read. [Exploration] The main character kills decisively and kills the family at every turn. He won't let him jump. It's really cool. And there is no ambiguity under the banner of not having a heroine.

[Crying] [Crying] It's a pity that such a beautiful novel has a female protagonist (no) I vote for no female protagonist! |･ω･｀)

First of all, the emotional description of siblings in the early stage is too poisonous, and it has a feeling of orthopedics. I understand that this way is to reflect the protagonist's image of protecting and loving his family, but since other family characters have been created, don't catch one character alone. Too many times, there are hints of orthopedic tendencies, and I always want to love my sister. I can only say that it is poisonous. Secondly, the theme and character creation are very good. If you can accept orthopedics, then this book is indeed acceptable. I originally wanted to give it to Samsung, fake? Orthopedics is really too poignant, even if the author has something to say at the end, it would be okay to accept it. But after thinking about it, I still feel that this is indeed a very good work, and I still can't bear to give it a low score [get it]

The full text is well-founded and well-organized, with harmonious family relationships, stable career development and a promising future. He is decisive in killing and beheading without talking nonsense. The protagonist has grown up and has never felt aggrieved or aggrieved. He sees clearly and understands his own position. He writes it according to the current trend. After more chapters are added, the weight will be enough, and he may not be liked by most readers in the future.

This book is very good. I often read Jin Yiwei's books. This is by far the best basic book. The plot is very good. It doesn't have to be a running account, and the word count is not good. Everything that is not necessary is mentioned in one stroke. Each character has a distinct personality. If you stick to this quality, it will become popular.

I don't give it five stars because there are indeed some issues in the first twenty chapters that I personally think are not very good. For example, the portrayal of the biological mother is a bit blunt, and the relationship between the siblings inexplicably develops into the elder sister liking the younger brother, giving people the feeling that Jun is not Jun Su's sister, but his childhood sweetheart. However, after I became familiar with the writing style later, I felt that there was nothing wrong with this [thinking]. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. I like the overall non-protracted writing style and the concise yet essential description of the fight. The protagonist is intelligent and ruthless but doesn't talk much. It really reminded me of a favorite novel I've read before. (Author, if you want more, I can add another star [laughing]) Yes, when you finish reading the middle plot, this book will enter the infinite resurrection mode of ancestors, in which only some characters are acceptable. The rest are all flat and unremarkable after quoting some classics. A large number of repetitions of the resurrection of strong enemies - becoming stronger after defeating - daily warmth - strong enemies come back to life. The general direction is correct, but the period is full of pale character dialogue. Some people have hundreds of photos and still complain about those words. To put it simply, in the early stage, it felt weird but interesting, in the middle stage, I couldn't get enough of it, but in the later stage, I didn't want to watch it anymore and it made me feel uncomfortable. Overall, it's an average three-star restaurant. It's not as fresh as Pica, and it's not as exciting as the food.

It's very good. If the number of chapters is a little more, it can be rated as eight points. If it can maintain this style, it can be almost rated as nine points. A little more chapters would be fine. The author's six chapters only surpass others' three chapters. . .

Here's a warning for book friends who haven't read it: The introduction says single/no heroine, which means it can be viewed as either a single heroine or no heroine. But I personally think that without a heroine, the protagonist will most likely not get married and have children in the future; the reason for the single heroine is because the protagonist has a sister, who has one-sided orthopedics. She will cuddle with the protagonist but not fall in love, but not necessarily in the future (I hope the author can let the sister and the protagonist have a sense of boundary. I feel that the sister is too dependent on the protagonist, too lively, and has no respect for the strong. Don't blame me🙏🏻). The protagonist Che values ​​​​family affection very much. He is not purely cold-blooded and ruthless, but is very tender to his family. Book lovers who like to see the protagonist purely invincible or purely ruthless can avoid this. I personally can barely accept it. To sum up, the protagonist is reborn, decisive in killing, vigorous and resolute, pushing all the way, a genius story, a great battle. The protagonist is not completely invincible, he has evenly matched opponents and friends; he has a sister who is the daughter of destiny. The protagonist will confiscate the enemy's house and destroy the family. There will not be bloody plots or soft-heartedness when meeting women. He will be tolerant and tolerant to his family, be tolerant, patient, gentle and considerate. The author's writing style is humorous and the language is witty. Each character is three-dimensional and well-shaped. The plot is not rigid, procrastinating, or cliche. The content is novel. The author is not clumsy. He keeps updating and keeping it up. There is more than one female protagonist, and they kiss each other directly at the beginning of volume 20 [laughs awkwardly] Can't the introduction make it clear? It says that if there is no heroine, there should be no ambiguity. If there is a single heroine, there should be no group of women surrounding the protagonist. Is it going to open a harem? Don't you write like this to chill the readers who see it now? [Facepalm] I don't know how to curse. I've been trying to endure it since I wrote about my sister. Now I can't help but say a few words. Someone please help me curse [I'm about to cry]

It's quite good-looking, but every time I see the male protagonist's sister, I feel a little uncomfortable. It's not that I'm not allowed to write about the female protagonist, it's mainly because I can't accept orthopedics. His sister's feelings for him are actually a bit inexplicable. Does she regard family affection as love? The article seems quite enjoyable, and the character of the male protagonist is also very enjoyable. Mainly, I think this kind of Jianghu novel combined with love is a bit family-friendly. This kind of novel is more suitable for the love of family and country, and the overall view of friendship, love and family love. Later, there will always be women around the male protagonist, and even the pet that delivers messages must be female and feel possessive of the male protagonist. There are also a few women who fall in love with the male protagonist in a very simple and cheap way. The male protagonist's personality charm can not only be expressed through the love of the opposite sex... Maybe I haven't read much, and I have only seen the fourth volume.

A very nice book... It's not a bad read at all Protagonist's personality: Decisive in killing, scheming and skillful, not a virgin, only warm-hearted to the people he cares about... The story is fascinating, the plot is funny, and the ups and downs are high

I'm really lucky. My favorite works are always being updated. I'd like to ask if I have any orders yet. If the male protagonist's sister is the female protagonist, I think the author will have some kind of reincarnation in the future...?

How to say it? The author is simply a genius. He wrote about many things, but he didn't feel complicated at all. He just had a complicated simplicity. The plot progress is not draggy at all. Very silky and comfortable to look at! Really, I like this style so much and it's so enjoyable to read. I have been a bookworm for 6 years. After reading books for so many years, I feel very comfortable reading them. This is the only one that has always been comfortable. It does not have the swords of "Dragon", nor the calculations of "Sword Comes", nor the complicated emotional entanglements of the tenants! It doesn't have the sweetness of youth love literature. I feel that the author has a vague feeling of reaching a new peak. Books like Tomato are really rare. It has no system, no ring grandfather, and no peerless magic weapon (I'm talking about the kind that my mother killed randomly under level 15), and there is no younger brother who requires you to sacrifice your life to gain one-time powerful power. There is only one fate that can grow as long as you kill. It's cool, but not brainless. Moreover, the author is not that good. Unlike other authors, it takes a long time to describe an environment, a half day to describe a plan, and think of every possible way. So simplicity is the first reason why I like this book. In today's fast-paced social life with great pressure, there is a shortage of books that are particularly enjoyable to read. This book is really the most enjoyable one I have read on Tomato, so the enjoyment is the second reason why I like this book. To be honest, I am a bookworm who likes to keep books. However, the only ones I don't keep a lot of are this book and two others. I've read it several times. Alas, two updates a day are really not enough! However, considering that the author may not be full-time, forget it and update it slowly! After all, a good work needs to be carefully crafted, not seeking high productivity, but seeking high quality! I sincerely hope that this book will get better and better, and the story will become more and more exciting. In addition, @yan, I also wish you that everything you do will be smooth and everything you want will come true!

If you came here to watch the movie without a female protagonist, if you don't want to see the playful tongue-splitting aunt, the clingy sister, and the wonderful comment section, then forget it. Then girls, don't look. It's really good except for the subtle plot.

The author's writing is very beautiful, but who is the main heroine? As far as I'm concerned, no one will write it, and then a side story will be made [OK]. Everyone will be happy by then, one for Li Junsu and Li Junyi, one for He Jianwu, one for Snow Owl, and one for Su An (bushi [sneaky laugh]), everyone will be happy (I'm sure)

Great, needless to say, I have been following this book since the beginning. The early stage is very eye-catching and refreshing. Needless to say, you will know it by yourself. In the middle stage, some historical elements begin to be added to the plot to enhance the senses. The narrative structure is very well grasped, and the writing style is also top-notch. The only ones I often read on my bookshelf are Li Junsu and The God of Drama. They are not hard-hitting and are not old-fashioned. The more characters appear in the later stages, the more worth reading. Each character has a story for each character. It can be called a very good group portrait. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it [shy][shy][shy]

There are not many novels these days that people can read in one sitting. The characters are very well drawn, with flesh and blood, and can completely draw people into it. The environment is also well described. You can probably get an outline of it after you go through it in your mind. The male protagonist Li Junsu is really The writing is perfect. The depression after killing people is perfectly overshadowed by the various interactions with the supporting characters. The backgrounds and personalities of the different characters are explained very clearly. It is really full. I finished the book in two days. The author continues to update. I really can't get enough.

I don't know why this book's ratings are not high, but the plot of this book is still well written: 1. The author is a fan of Li Shimin. Everywhere in the article, you can feel the author's unrestrained praise of the emperor based on Li Shimin and the prosperous times of the Tang Dynasty (Daqian in the article). 2. There are many real historical events mixed in. For example, the story involves Li Shimin teasing the bird, and then Wei Zheng came to remonstrate with him. Li Shimin could only put the bird in his sleeve until the bird was muffled to death. I also have little knowledge and only learned about this piece of unofficial history after reading the comments. 3. Focus on the career line, supplemented by the emotional line. Although there are many single arrows pointing to the male protagonist, at least in my opinion, there is no clear female protagonist (although there are multiple single arrows, it is not a harem novel!) Among the multiple single arrows in the article, the one with more descriptions is Bai Xingling. It appears not too early. New book friends can take a mental precaution (it's okay if you don't do it. This single arrow is quite acceptable. I am simply afraid that some book friends will be picky) 4. The protagonist's views on good and evil are very clear, as is his stance. The protagonist will respect people who have good intentions but have different stances, but will not be merciful. This means that throughout the article, the protagonist does not have a Holy Mother's heart, but he will not kill innocent people indiscriminately for his purpose. In short, the logic is online 5. In a true group portrait novel, even the villains have their own righteousness. For example, in the article, the abbot of Shaolin Temple Liao Hui, the leader of the Qingshan Sword Sect (I forgot what it was called)... As long as the author has written about the people, they must have their own life. 6.————New book friends need to pay attention to this———— There are many historical characters mixed together in the article, such as Xuanyuan in ancient times, the legendary Jade Emperor, and Fang Mou Duduan in the Tang Dynasty. Some book friends may not be able to accept the mixing of these characters (of course, the author will not randomly change history, but only make changes based on the original characters) 7. It was previously said that the author is a fan of Li Shimin, which may not be accurate. When I recently followed up, I deeply realized that the author is a pure Mu Qiang. All people in the world who strive for people's livelihood deserve praise. 8. The author's definition of the ancient magic sect in the chapter he updated recently made my eyes light up. The magic sect monks are also human beings, and they also accumulate virtue. They are not hostile to the righteous way. They are just magic sects, pure magic sects. 9. Some people may ask, if the Demon Sect is not the villain, then who is the villain? I think there is no villain at all. Everyone is just in a different camp. Even if they are some very derogatory characters when they appear, when we laugh at them, you must admit that they are heroes. What's more, this book is written on the basis of history. Who can leave a name in the history books? Who has not made a great career, become famous throughout history, or is infamous? (And this point of view is also worthy of application when we study real history. There is no right or wrong in history, let alone villains)

Disadvantages: The combat power and realm systems are like a joke, purely for decoration. The higher the realm, the higher the realm. Even if the realm being surpassed is the highest realm The protagonist's aura is too heavy, everyone in the protagonist group can surpass the realm, and the opponents will always be surpassed. Then, anyone of the opposite sex (regardless of species) who has something to offer must like him. It's a slight harem, because the protagonist Mu Mu is not confiscated. Whether he will accept them in the future, and if so, how many will be accepted depends on the author. The advantages are also obvious, except for combat power, the logic is smooth and self-consistent. The plot is tight and there is no Virgin. The author's history is obviously good. Anyone who can't accept a little bit of harem and cultivating immortals should find this book interesting.

It's so good, I finished it in one sitting. If there is no heroine, if you confirm the relationship with one person, the other will get angry. If there is only one heroine, there is only Maomao. Ordinary people can learn a lot about literature and history, and enthusiasts or liberal arts students can smile knowingly. The characters have distinct personalities. Except for Shaolin, there is no one who repeatedly pulls the same force and the same person more than once. The protagonist proves it by killing.

They're all good, but there are too many girls. Some of them are understandable, but 8 or 9 out of the ten important supporting roles is too exaggerated. There's also Li Junyi. The normal relationship between siblings is not very good, and it feels like they have to do orthopedics. The rest is pretty cool.

It's pretty good. I saw the protagonist looking at the mountain. It's considered to be above average among the novels I've read. However, there aren't many descriptions of the character's demeanor. I'm not opposed to emotional scenes and having a female protagonist. I just hope that the characters' micro-movements and demeanor can be more vivid. In this case, the characters' The next time he appears, he will no longer be the same person in so many chapters, but what kind of person he is, and his distinctive character traits will make readers feel more deeply. Instead of a sudden change of emotional drama, which will make me suddenly feel the emotions of the character, it will be difficult for me to resonate with him. There is also the description of the protagonist's inner emotions, such as the protagonist giving up his mountain. There should be a process of transformation, at least an emotional change in the short term. The protagonist is one of the most important characters, and the narration of the inner emotions will make readers more aware. At least I have not seen many narrations of the protagonist's inner emotions. (No negative orientation, just readers' insights)

Four stars, I recommend this book, it's worth reading. I haven't written a long review for a long time, and my level is limited. The following only represents my personal opinions. If you don't like it, please feel free to comment. Let's talk about the advantages first. Regarding the description of details, group portraits, writing logic, and writing skills, other book friends have also commented, and they are all very good. The sentences should be concise and concise, which is very necessary in martial arts novels. If it is too wordy, it will not express the meaning if it is too short. The author controls it quite well. The male-to-female setting of "Jiansushan Reverse Sword Mastery" is interesting, I like it very much. Next comes the fly in the ointment. After reading about three hundred chapters carefully, most of the important characters appeared. Although the template is to prove the truth through killing, the protagonist's growth has been so smooth and he has never suffered any major failures, so the plot can be roughly guessed at a glance. Due to the protagonist's tendency to attract others, most of them become good friends with the protagonist, whether they are stupid or smart, prominent or poor, lovers or heartless, good or bad. This leads to a problem: the protagonist has too many helpers, the backers behind him are too strong, the enemies are too few and too weak, and the enemies do not know when they will become friendly forces, and there is no fixed big boss planning everything behind the scenes and causing significant damage to the protagonist. Therefore, the climax part, which is the most important plot driver, this sharpest point seems to have been diluted and evenly integrated into the development structure. The emotional outbursts are scattered and somewhat lacking in stamina. That's all. It's a good work. Criticisms, corrections and discussions are welcome [Thinking]

Now I have read the latest, and I am following it every day. Now for my personal opinion, just take a look: Now Junsu's martial arts is very high, and the battle aspect is also very exciting. As for the emotional line, my opinion is that Junsu is very good to his friends and subordinates. Friendship and family affection are enough. Junsu's love will be given to Qingya. Finally, when Junsu is able to After that, he pulled Qingya and Junqi over and asked Qingya to take control of the town and swear his sovereignty, just like the author wrote in big letters: Qingya will tolerate Junsu, and Junsu will protect Qingya. They are a match made in heaven. It's a bit uncomfortable to read other people's feelings for Junsu [face covering]

Overall, it is a very good book. I have only read part of it, but I can still see the obvious aura of the protagonist. My personal opinion is: if the protagonist has never failed in the whole book, and has not encountered an opponent who can match his wisdom, strategy, talent, and ability, then this book will eventually fall into the cliché of the aura of a brainless protagonist.

I just read Chapter 16. So far I think everything is very good, the details are in place, and there is nothing poisonous about it. I actually don't like to see that kind of family, warmth, etc., But the family here is different, and it feels pretty good. The author continues to work hard [love] [love] [love] If you read more, I will follow up with comments [Blow a kiss] I have read more than a dozen chapters of the fifth volume, and I am really speechless about the bird. I felt weird when I read the author's description before, but now it's better, and it can really change its shape. The protagonist's sister also likes the protagonist. I can tolerate all these messes, but I really can't stand the bird that can transform. I hate stupid and cute characters the most. If you say it sounds good, it sounds stupid and cute, but if it sounds bad, it sounds like a heartless person. I can't stand it anymore, it's a bit uncomfortable, but I finally came across a good article, eh. Having watched it so much, I won't give it a too low score. Please keep up the good work, author. I am just expressing my personal opinion. Some people may also like that type of article.

It's good-looking, and the protagonist has a very charming personality. No matter how high he is as an official, his subordinates will never forget him and will think of them every time something good comes to him. The protagonist is tactful and understands the ways of the world. He destroyed Japan (a favorite point) and killed decisively. He is powerful and famous. [Laugh]

There are three views, the protagonist has a high IQ, and the whole book is very rigorous

First of all, the overall evaluation is that the book itself is really good, with decisive killing, political checks and balances, smooth writing, and vivid characters. It is a rare good book. But as far as I am concerned, the main text of this book and the description of the protagonist's character in the introduction are completely incompatible. The protagonist can also be said to have no "human touch" (it reads a bit "distinct"), and the ambiguous pseudo-harem story has no heroine or orthopedics. I resist this kind of behavior. To sum up, the book is a good book, but it has a lot of flaws, which I hope all book lovers will know (you will be happy if you don't care about the above flaws).