Urgent! What Should I Do If I Accidentally Traveled Through Time and Became Planet Aquamarine?

Ah? No one has reviewed it... It seems that this book is very new... As for this book, the first few chapters don't look very attractive... Judging from the writing style, the writing style is very soft... I'm afraid it's not written by a newcomer... But the progress is still visible to the naked eye... It's okay to become more proficient... This book is a writing practice... Just read it casually... Don't be too stingy... The bad reviews won't be... The good reviews won't be there... From the plot point of view... Well... I've only read seven chapters... Although the appearance of the protagonist seems a bit too much... But it seems to focus on describing the content other than the protagonist... There are still a few changes in the protagonist of this book... My suggestion is to enlarge the pattern... Don't take the fantasy route... Although it can be written... But it is somewhat less attractive... It is recommended to follow the route of planetary civilization, and the reincarnation of civilization goes like this... One civilization is destroyed and another is reborn... The protagonist sits back and does nothing, participates according to his mood, and after encountering various alien civilizations, he works hard to become stronger and develop a new power system to make the protagonist at least have the ability to resist independently. This type of story can somewhat increase the appeal... Let's set it up... It's a bit deliberate to write the protagonist's lifespan at the beginning... The protagonist's character is also somewhat pure... It is recommended that the protagonist's memory gradually recovers later... The previous purity was just because the memory lacked natural expression... It is recommended that the various light points swallowed by the protagonist at the beginning be set as gold fingers... The performance at the beginning is just to make people inside the planet think that it is just the revival of spiritual energy... You can add some other changes later... Of course... This review is just a few suggestions... If you want to change the article, don't listen to all the suggestions. Think about it and combine it with your own ideas... If you don't change it, nothing will happen... After all, you are just practicing writing...

The writing was pretty good, but there was too little plot about the protagonist, and I almost thought the older Taoist priest was the protagonist.