HP Penny's Rose

Very well written. Especially the heroine Penny, I feel that he is a very powerful person, not in terms of external strength, but in terms of inner strength. To be honest, I really want to complain about it. I feel like many of the stand-ins in Harry Potter have very fragile minds. Voldemort's whole person mentally makes me feel like a rebellious second-stage bad boy. The professor feels like someone who is always at odds with himself. The kind of person who can never reconcile with himself. As for Dumbledore, I feel like he has been completely sealed, maybe even more powerful than Voldemort. To be honest, I don't think there are many sane people in the Harry Potter books. Back to topic. The relationship between the professor and the heroine is not abrupt at all. To the Savior Mother Lily Evans. There is no shame in being black for the sake of being black.

I stayed up all night to read it. It was a good read. I will read it next time if I like it. It was really good, and the relationship between the heroine and Professor Snape was such a warm feeling. It was really exciting. Oh my god, it felt like reading a romance novel. There wasn't too much about the magical world. It just focused on daily life. I don't know what's behind it. Will it be different? But I really like it in the early stages. Well, in the first few pictures, when the heroine was still young, the relationship between her parents and her sister might be a bit disgusting to watch. But later on, when the heroine moved out, um, and then started a sweet love, it was very special. Well, I recommend you to take a look. PS: I beg the author to read my comments. I want to know if I will abuse them later? I want to read sweet articles, thank you

A very novel setting. The heroine is reborn as a time traveler in Penny's body. As a Muggle, she indirectly participates in the first wizarding war in the British wizarding world and her love story with Snape. There's nothing wrong with the introduction. Except for the fact that the heroine is mature and rational, it can be offensive to basically everyone - it's not a complete denial of everyone (for example, Lily is still partially awakened in the later stage), but it shows everyone's human weaknesses, so readers who can't accept darkness should watch it with caution [laughing and crying] because the early stories will really be angered by the actions of many people [Petrified]

It is an easy daily HP fanfic that does not require any substitution of the original work. Even among the many settings of the White Demon, the Dark Lord, and the Professor of Hogwarts, this setting of a completely ordinary person is refreshing. And there is no such thing as saving and being saved because the male protagonist is a professor. The female protagonist initially just wanted to survive her parents' preference for their little daughter. At the beginning, it was also because the original Penny's soul did not completely leave (not intentionally) and suppressed most of the memories of the 21st century. Only some ambiguous and fuzzy memories existed, and the help of the childhood professor was also limited. It was out of kindness. After my memory was restored, I had some vague feelings for the professor. I even thought that the professor still liked Lily as much as in the original plot, so I suppressed my vague feelings. Later, I treated the professor more like a sister or a relative. In short, the story of the young love between the two of them until they confirmed their relationship made me want to stop. Hehehe... Personally, I think it deserves a high score of 5 stars. The only minor problem is that the plot details at the end may be a little unclear and incoherent due to the author's interruption for some reasons, but it does not affect the reading. Of course, the reason for the low score may be due to the author's previous discontinuous updates (it is also possible that the time-traveling character is Penny. There is some controversy in the commentary about the content of the young Lily competing for her parents' favor at the beginning of the plot, but I personally don't think there is a big problem, and it will be explained later). I hope this book will be read by the majority of HP fans. If you like it, I wish you all a happy reading~

The writing is very good, and I think Penny is already very good, why should she be treated like that because of Lily?

It's really good to read. The professor has a normal relationship, family, mother, wife, daughter, a complete home, and the description of the magical world and real life is very smooth, without any sense of contradiction. Although the daughter has time traveled and has no gold finger, she is very individual and insists on the life she wants. Regarding relationships, the family planning is very clear. It will not make the heroine be humble to the professor like some time travel novels. In a true sense, it gives the professor a love, family affection, and friendship that is in line with normal people, so it is definitely five stars! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]

First of all, the characters in this book are relatively full-bodied, and there is no one trait throughout. The writing style is very delicate [like] Secondly, when will I update the article? It's winter vacation. Do you want to challenge your coding speed? I think a great person like Dad can definitely double the update [Sending my heart]

It's good to watch, it's my favorite so far

I really like this novel that doesn't change Petunia's Muggle identity! ! ! ! !

This book describes the relationship between boys and girls in a very delicate way, and the writing is really good.

The writing is very good, and the later part is beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The part where the child is a child in the beginning is a bit annoying, and the child Lily is so annoying. Moreover, the objective environment in the real world is very bad. As a result, their parents are partial and treat them differently. Fortunately, the heroine later moved out. Looking forward to the author's next story [thinking] [laughing]

Come on, ma'am, I'm looking forward to the next episode [Blow a kiss]

The writing is generally good, and there are no surprises. Although Severus feels like he has changed too much later and is like an empty shell, at least the daily life is warm and good. Even when the prophecy appeared, I didn't like the development of the plot at first. It was too slow and had no priority. The heroine was also aware of the plot and did nothing (the birth potion came from Sif, and she didn't even reveal some prophecies to people who love her and will not betray her. Then from a God's perspective, I It was really tiring to watch Peter make trouble, and then watch Horcrux without any progress. It was really tiring to watch the heroine playing with the cat and her daughter for a long time. Although it was not very interesting, it was really good. Thank you to the author for making love.

From the previous words, I felt that Penny was a little frustrated, but in the middle period, she was fine. She was in a sweet love relationship and was very easy to live with. Later on it felt a bit bland. But overall it's okay. You can take a look.

It looks very ordinary, but as a sister, I was really fist-bumped when I watched the front. Lily and my brother are exactly the same.

It's really beautiful ah ah ah ah ah [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Not bad, not bad, one of the best books in recent times, and I feel like the author is no longer a child. As someone who doesn't like Lily, I am satisfied with Lily like this. Only children with older siblings (cousins, cousins, cousins, as long as they are close) can't help but know how terrible it is for children to compete for favors. Moreover, I believe that "human beings are born with evil nature", and I also feel that Lily's growth has been very good. After seven years at Hogwarts, she still recognized the unintentional or intentional harm to her sister, and then she and her sister still live in harmony despite their different positions. This change is very realistic, which is why I say that this is finally not written by a child. Sev falls in love with Lily or Petunia. Essentially, he loves everything in his life.

"HP Penny's Simple Life" First of all, I hope the author can come back and finish it as soon as possible. I quite like it. It relies on the original text but is entirely the author's own content. The characters are seriously OOC, so it is recommended that you do not bring in the characters. Completed! I really love this fan fiction that is different from the original work! Penny traveled through her soul, fell in love with Sev, and Erin returned to the family. The whole story is very heartwarming.

The author gave a happy ending to the unlucky Penny and the beautiful and miserable Sif. The relationship was slow and warm. The ambiguity and pull were well written. It was just a normal love relationship. There were no surprises. Just focus on the key points. At the same time, mainstream events in the magical world are interspersed, and Sif and Penny are just a small part of it. Since the original world view is relatively grand, it will not make you feel uncomfortable watching it. Personally, I feel the overall score is 8.5-9 Points

The youthful love of teenagers begins to be as sour as an immature persimmon. But the rest is still good and well written. After reading it, you will understand that the male protagonist can only be Sif

After reading it, overall it's okay. It's not an exaggeration to blame everyone. It really criticizes everyone. It can be read as a novel that has nothing to do with the original work. I feel like I hate good people. Dumbledore is written as a conspirator, haha. It's very dark, but it can be read as a brainless sweet novel.

Very good-looking, I like Sif like this

It's good-looking, and there are very few HP novels where the heroine is a Muggle. Very good. After reading this book, I have the CP of Sri Lanka in my heart [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's so beautiful. The characters in it touched my heart. But what makes me most regretful is that Petunia doesn't have magic.

It's beautiful. Even if she's a Muggle, Penny here is the most beautiful girl [facepalm]. It completely subverts the impression of Penny that she has always had. The whole ending is also perfect. All the regrets are basically solved perfectly. I like this kind of ending.

Petunia

It's a relatively relaxed hp. There's no big deal about taking sides. It's just ordinary daily and love stories, hp sweet stories, very good, and the writing is also good.

Although, I feel that all the characters are a bit different from the original work. But author Mi, the characters in this article are not stretched and are quite smooth and pretty, the new Sri Lankan second student haha. It is true that Penny was a little aggrieved at the beginning, but it was explained later, but she was really aggrieved at the beginning and could easily be persuaded to quit. Overall, it is pretty good-looking, but it has nothing to do with the original character [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] Watch it again, Ershuala [eating melon]

It's really well written. The title of the book didn't appeal to me at first. I saw recommendations several times but didn't click on it. I clicked on it yesterday because I really didn't know what to read. I didn't expect it to be so good. I only read this book when I wasn't sleeping. I was satisfied with the ending for everyone [laughs]

Good-looking (๑>◡<๑)😍ooc must exist in every fanfic, but I don't think this article is serious or deliberately slanderous. If you like Lily, don't come looking for trouble.