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I don't know how to describe it anymore. It's the most beautiful novel by Ye Luoli that I have ever read. The author's writing style is very good. I don't know why you are scolding her. Anyway, I am the first to agree with the author when I open Shuimo CP. I will wait for your update❤️

Very good, I like it very much. It's well written. Let me talk about the advantages first. The heroine's character is a bit polarizing. Although she is ruthless in doing things, she is also very decisive. I like it very much. Pang Zun's character is very well portrayed. She is a composite of the original character, but because it fits the character so well, with the heroine, how can I put it? The relationship progress is very slow, but it is very interesting. The heroine is also very strong, but not In my understanding of the romantic heroine, the guide is to help him unconditionally and clear all the obstacles in his way. That's why people in the comment area said he was a bit licky. It should be because he has never been in love. Moreover, the setting of this book is that he himself is powerful and his weapons are invincible. There is no need for the author to give him a guide. He can be beautiful alone. It's just that the cp is a bit unclear, why is it so undecided? Is it Pangpang or Li Hui? I feel that Li Hui is pretty good. From what Pang Zun said, I feel that everything is unilaterally contributed by Ah Ying. Moreover, if Li Hui and Ah Ying are together, it will be a great alliance to destroy the world. Overall, the writing is good. I like it very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it as soon as possible. It's not enough to read. It's only one chapter a day. Sometimes I don't update even one chapter. If I don't update it, I'll give you four stars.

The content is rich and interesting, with ups and downs, and the plot is so enjoyable for me [Thoughts]

Wow wow wow [flying kiss] [flying kiss] is really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I like the heroine's character so much. It's so beautiful. I can't wait to see the plot behind it [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] Please update quickly [shy] [shy]

It's super good-looking. The author really writes well. The character of An Ling is really well created, but the ending is B. Although it's very uncomfortable, I still feel that this is a relatively perfect ending. I really like the CP of Pang Zun and An Ling, but actually I also like the characters of Yu Wang and An Ling. The heroine is really strong and cold-blooded. , But it's really good. I especially like this kind of characters. Baobao's writing is great. I hope Baobao can write more books by Ye Luoli, preferably with characters like this and personalities. I really, really like it. I recommend everyone to go and read it. Moreover, the author Baobao's scoldings are also very enjoyable. If you don't like it, don't read it.

This book is really beautiful. I express my views on this book from the perspective of objectivism. Indeed, the heroine dies in this book, but the heroine uses her death to let all the negative fairies gain true freedom. I think this is very enlightened and righteous. (Of course, I don't mean to evaluate this book. I feel that I am not worthy of it because I think that this book is the result of the author's hard work. I am not worthy of evaluation.) So I hope the author will continue to work hard. Let's work hard together!

It's really good-looking. I cried like a fool at the end. Holy shit, it's really good-looking. Bai Guangying in it is really hateful. Especially in the end, everything was successful. Just because of Bai Guangying, the heroine was gone. And Yin Chen didn't catch the baby in the end. I'll regret it later. It was obviously just that little bit short of catching the heroine [crying]

This book suits my taste very well, but I don't really like the combination of Li Hui and An Ling. I want to see the wedding photos of Pang Zun and An Ling! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Blow a kiss][Fly a kiss][Flow a kiss][Sneak smile][Sneak smile][Sneak smile]

I have been reading the book for 23 years and it has been 25 years now [cover face] [cover face] How can I put it, it feels very good, but I feel a little tired after reading too much, and it has changed after reading too much, but after a while, I still read it with gusto [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

The plot is very good and interesting, but I don't know if it was the author who wrote it first or why I feel that sometimes the logic is a bit confusing and hard to understand. Also, the author has a lot of digressions, too much. I hope to write less, or put them in the comment area. In short, I hope that there will not be so many author's thoughts in the main text.

The conditioning is very clear, the writing is very good, but there is a bit of water in the later stage. The hostess is sober and not a holy mother. The world failed her but then backhandedly destroyed the world. I want to say here that it may tear down a lot of CPs. In fact, it does not count as tearing down CPs because the world will be destroyed later. Some Yan Jue Poison Empress is awesome. If you don't like it, don't read it. The author has said it, don't read it if you don't like it. And then, you can also read it in the article. I saw some Wang Mo fans clamoring there, ah, in short, this book is not sober in the world. The heroine is black and black. Those who like to read novels with villains or those who like to watch big heroines can give it a try. Then, the CP of the heroine is Li Hui, and the next vote is Pang Pang. The CP is Pang Pang, very sadistic, and it ends in be. But the author is very conscientious. There are also extras of Pang Pang and Li Hui.

Really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really really cooks very well. The heroine is not a virgin but also rational. I hope the author will be faster. I look forward to Pang Zun remembering all the memories [Love] [Love] [Love]

The subject matter is very novel, but the ending is a bit unfinished. I think Bai Guangying killing An Ling in the end is a bit ridiculous, but the ending of the extra chapter is very interesting and overall very good. The story background of the heroine is perfect, and the foreshadowing is also very good. If you like the article about the heroine, you can read [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss]

The writing is very good. I can't say how good it is. Although you said later that your previous writing was relatively immature, I think the whole story is very interesting, but the ending is a bit sad, especially in the last few sentences. The righteous protagonist can always win, but it's a pity that they don't have the aura of the protagonist. How can they fight against the way of heaven? What does it express about those villains? I can't tell you. I also read your second book. I think the villain written by the author is decisive and decisive. I support you very much. You don't need to care what other people think. The first book was indeed a bit immature. You care whether readers think the characters you wrote are more cold-blooded and ruthless, but I don't think it is necessary. Just follow your own ideas. In your second book, the protagonist is very strong, decisive and cold-blooded. , I am so happy to see it. I hope that the characters in the author's novels in the future can follow his own ideas. If you want to kill decisively, then kill decisively. If you also want to write stories about friends and family, I will also support you, come on! ! !

I have finished reading it. I have been in a serious book shortage recently and wanted to read Ye Luoli's novels. I just happened to see this novel that is completely in line with my taste. I really like this book. It is the only one among so many Ye Luoli novels that I have read to the end. It has received great reviews, and the author is great! Anyway, I like it very much o(≧v≦)o

Author! Update soon! Your updates are the inexhaustible motivation for me to keep reading! It's so pretty. When can the heroine meet Pangpang [I'm about to cry]

I really like the heroine and Pang Zunda! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

It's very interesting. The heroine is not born evil, but she was persecuted by everyone because of her birth and became evil and destroyed the world. The heroine succeeds, but the halo of the protagonist is useless. This is the first time I have read a book that kills off the hero and heroine. I recommend it! ! !

Woohoo, I thought it was a sweet story. It was the first time I saw this kind of ending for Ye Luoli. [I almost cried]. I felt pretty good. [Send my heart]. As expected, be is the most unforgettable (although I don't like to watch sadistic movies because I can't slow down [I almost cry]). I felt unsafe when I looked at the ratings. I was afraid that I would need to press the score later, so I didn't give it five stars.

The idea is complete, not confused by love, has a firm goal of revenge, be literature, there is he extra story, fighting against heaven, using the world as a chessboard, and the common people as chess pieces, strong strength, outstanding IQ, awesome, I have read all of them without missing a beat, Meiqiang (the memories are miserable, the article is not), I like it 😍😍😍

This book is just great. This book has two main lines. One main line is the protagonist's confrontation with Heaven, and the other main line is the protagonist's emotional line. The part where Pang Pang regained his memory made me really cry. Later on when the heroine returned emotionally but died, I really felt a little bit upset. I really recommend this book, it's very good.

Ahhhh. There are so many fairies, a different world of fairies and demons, come on!

I cried to death at the ending!!! Author, you are so unkind, how could you make me so moved that I burst into tears? ... Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, I, that's the chapter about the Shadow of the Water Prince, I made a goose sound, hahaha... Very kind! . . Uh-huh-huh... What do you want me to do? ... Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo?

The author is so cool! I love it, Pang Ling pokes me! Looking forward to the follow-up! [Note][Note][Note]

Good looking, slightly cruel. But it can't stop her from looking good

It's good to watch. It would be great if the author could make a sequel. I really want to see A Ling be happy [cry][cry][cry][cry]

The capital letters are super, super, super nice. [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]. The incident started with Fairy Light's 'mission' and ended with the 'mission' [I'm about to cry]. It directly echoes [Shy] from beginning to end. In short, the capital letters are good [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

This book is particularly good-looking. Then, it mainly introduces the chance encounter between the heroine and Pang Zun, and then a series of actions of Heguang Fairy Bai Guangying. Among them, the heroine has a background in Mutian Pavilion, and the memories of her own amnesia are not available. Then later on, probably in the 50s or 60s, he regained his memory. I really loved this book. Later, the author also created a few special love stories about the black protagonist group.

I like this book very much. The characters in this book have distinctive personalities and the plot is full of ups and downs. It can't help but make people's hearts go up and down with it. It's very unforgettable for me. I was thinking about this book when I was sitting in class. This book is so well written, I like it very much (｀Δ´)!

The first Ye Luoli fanfic I read is also my favorite one, the heroine is so strong! Pang Zun's writing was a bit strange at first but then it became a bit sadistic, but I still like it. The heroine is cold and lonely, but I am strong and I like it! Still a good review!