Naruto: I'm Not Your Brother, Why Are You Controlling Me?

The writing is so good, I know that the final male protagonist is Uchiha Madara, but can the author develop more lines? Senju Tobirama is really delicious! In the end, it doesn't matter who the male protagonist is. I just hope that he and the protagonist can interact more and let me drink more. I really like this pair of CPs. If I don't have the feeling of losing them, I won't cherish them. Let Brother Ban experience the power of his competitors, the Shura field, competing with each other, etc. It's very exciting just thinking about it! This is so interesting! The teacher's writing is really great. In the past, I had always read it just for fun, but it was the heartthrobs! This single CP is really fine. I want to cry when I see it.

It's really, really good-looking, please give me more updates! The main character's emotions are very delicately written, and the most important thing is that it's not OOC. I feel that according to the development in it, the main character will really do this. Woohoo, I really like the development of the main character in it. I read novels just to make up for my regrets, but in other novels, the protagonists are all killing everyone, just one or two, it is really boring if there are more, but this Naruto really solves the problem from the source. After reading it, I will feel much happier. I hope that the protagonists in it can be happy. This is the wish of a reader.

Big cheers for the author! Really nice. However, I originally read it for the point that "the CP is Madara", but the more I read it, the more I felt that Tobirama was good. After all, in the latest chapter, it is really easy to leave a mark that makes people unable to stop smiling. Madara is also good. If, I say if, the author has not decided on the CP, I will be more biased towards Tobirama. After all, the way these two get along is really good, keep up the good work! The author is great To add, my memory is actually not very good. To be honest, from the first chapter to the latest chapter, I really thought Tobirama was the male protagonist. If someone hadn't mentioned it, I really couldn't remember it. The main reason is that the two of them are really at odds with each other, and Madara still has to keep working hard.

Let me start by saying that you won't lose money by investing in shares! ! ! Trust me, don't hesitate, it's really beautiful! ! ! I like it very much 😍, the plot is attractive and not draggy, the characters are full of personality, and the protagonist is very cute haha, and I think the characters in Naruto are really difficult to write. From the character's personality, behavior, and abilities, this book is very faithful to the original work. Moreover, the Warring States period did not appear many times in the original work, which shows that the author is really good at it. I express my sincerity to the author here [blowing kiss], I can find that it is really not easy to write a book that suits my taste. My only hope is to ask the author to give Tobirama a chance (put your palms together), open a side story or something (I understand) [shy], and finally, I hope the author can write more and take a good rest at the same time! [Blow a kiss][Send a heart][Send a heart]

So far, it's pretty invincible. OK, I don't care what you think. Anyway, please don't stop following me. My child finally found a book he likes to read, so don't let me down, okay?

It's pretty good. Although I haven't watched Naruto, it doesn't stop me from reading it. I don't have to watch Naruto before I can read this book. Moreover, the protagonist and I get along really well. It's a pity that it's not an official movie.

It's so good~ Although I watched it for Ben Ye's cp at first, but after watching it, we still fell in love with each other~ It's really sweet. I watched it more complicatedly and didn't have enough time, so I just skipped to watch his extra chapter. It's good, not bad~ 101's Ben Ye is also very good🌝🌝

It's indeed a good book, and the writing is good, but it may need some further study. Of course, it is not unacceptable if the author updates twice a day. Author, come on, give me gifts and give them to you a few more times, okay?

It's so beautiful, but the reviewer keeps staring at Lao Yan, and he doesn't describe it in detail. But it's really beautiful. It's great if he can describe it carefully. I saw the critical moment (it didn't) and it made me scratch my head. Can't you describe it in detail? Why do auditors keep an eye so closely? I don't feel like there are any sexy scenes -_-||But it's beautiful anyway (๑•.•๑)

The author's writing is very good, and some parts are handled well. Moreover, the characters' emotions are gradually developed step by step. Come on, author, don't be defeated by difficulties. This book is really good. I think it is very good in a Naruto fanfic with two male protagonists! Come on! ! ! ! Comparison

It's so sweet, the cp is flying ෆ(˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ, happy, looking forward to the follow-up ψ(｀∇´)ψ! , Madara is quite gentle. The fanfics I read before were all about Madara after he turned black, but he was a bit cruel (*ﾟ∀ﾟ*), this one is just right for me.

It's really super good. This is the first big book I've read. There's another Kamui book I haven't finished yet, and Sasuke is still updating it. It's so good. It's not that I don't want to read the other Kamui book, it's mainly because it's deleted too much. I'm really too lazy to complain about Tomato's mechanism, but It's just supported by the huge writing style. Oh my God, it's really not like other Qingshui novels. It only writes about the protagonist's experience and emotional rise. In the end, he gets married and then does that and so on. In the finale, there's nothing else. I really like this kind of writing. This is the real story. Real writing, how can Uchiha's character be so timid? It's so cool to see, my dear, you are simply the most perfect creature in the world, I really love you to death, and the author really nailed the character of the protagonist he wrote so well, it's like a living person standing in front of you It's like I acted in a drama before. After watching it, I fell in love with every Uchiha. The author really showed the charm of Uchiha perfectly. My mother, I can't stand it anymore. When will the author write about Itachi? Please publish a book. The child is starving to death. I am originally a Itachi pusher, the kind of pusher.

I really like the protagonist in it. It's really nice and interesting. Your plot is very detailed. I'm looking forward to who the protagonist will be with in the end. Is it Madara or Tobirama? I hope the author can maintain this update speed and not stop updating.

Finished reading! So happy! Uchiha Madara and Senju Tobirama are both very, very good! DaDa even made a special extra line for Tobirama. Happy! I love sweet love the most! But being rejected for Tobirama's confession in the main plot is still very sad and my heart aches [crying] Fortunately, I have sweet love to heal me. Everyone is so nice! Izuna is also awesome. Her writing skills are very good!

Good looking! The emotional scenes written are very delicate! Like!

In fact, I have always felt that Tobirama is more suitable than Madara, but I have to admit that he and Madara are also very sweet! This story is really wonderful! ! I like the linkage article the most! !

It's good-looking, really good-looking, but don't expect me to say any particularly good sentences. The whole person is very simple, and the brain is really like, oh~ it's so beautiful! Oops~ It's so annoying! I hope there are more interactions between the protagonists, hehe~

Izuna-sama is also very nice, super cute. Although I love Tobirama very much, and he and Chike are very easy to get along with, I still stand firmly with Madara. The extra is so good to watch, ahhhhhhh, so sweet to me. Can Madara and Qian Ke interact more, hahahahahahaha.

Author, the book you wrote is very nice. Don't worry about other people's opinions. The two CPs in the book are very good, one is Uchiha Madara and the other is Senju Tobirama. I feel that the emotional writing is also very good. I have been reading this book for the past few days. It is very comfortable to read. The plot in the book is vivid and interesting. It also makes up for the regrets of some characters in the original anime. Everyone has a good ending. It also makes many people like that character, but he has a bad ending. It also has a good ending. Although this book is not my first favorite book that I have read, it is the first Naruto fanfic that I remember the most. The ending is full of flowers💐💐

It's good to watch (/ω＼) Shy, the good thing is that it's finished, and it feels very relaxing to watch, but the plot of love can be more detailed, hehehe (it would be better if there is a process, evil smile) Jie Jie Jie (being locked up in a small dark room)

This kind of fanfic is almost the most difficult to write. It's hard to find good writing that can't break down the character design. I think this article is quite good, but I have only read dozens of chapters and I still don't understand the plot behind it. I hope the author can write better.

So delicious! It's been a long time since I've seen a fan with such delicate emotions. The character design is very stable, and the overall rhythm of the whole article is very good. It can be seen that the author has a very solid foundation. Although the arrangement of the plot lines sometimes... Well, the traces of carving are a bit obvious... But the flaws are not concealed, the emotional line of this book is so excellent! Totally impressed me! To this extent, it is an immortal product! Such smooth and delicate emotional descriptions are so rare in fandom! So I gave it five stars without hesitation. I hope this article can be read by more people.

This is the first book I have read carefully, there is no excess water in the middle, it is absolutely amazing [Adoration]

It looks good. Yukina didn't understand it. Too much was deleted. In fact, I want to read the original version but it's still very good. Sometimes it would be better if the main character's CP is Senju Tobirama. I like the pair of Senju Tobirama more. [Smirking] [Shy] Please come in and read this book quickly.

A very good novel that revived my love brain (=^▽^=) Although I didn't see the 101 I wanted, I still had a good time hehehehehe This is the first novel I have finished (｡>ㅿ<｡) and I plan to read another one by the author later.

I read it in one go⋯Like it, the warm and everyday style looks very comfortable😌

Just 4 points for objective evaluation. I prefer 1v1. Giving Tobirama Madara's clothes to wear was a bit shocking. Others are okay. The protagonist's emotions are too slow and always makes me feel like I'm in a tea mood. Others are pretty good.

The plot of this romantic novel is full of twists and turns, making people fall into one surprise after another. The storyline is cleverly designed and the emotions are deeply expressed, making people unable to extricate themselves. This novel is so beautiful! The plot of the story is twists and turns and the characters are vivid and vivid, making people feel like they are immersed in it. The author's grasp of details is also very good, making the whole novel more real and touching. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading.

I really like the scene between Tobirama and Chike. I really like them both. Hahaha. Compared to Uchiha Madara and Chike, I still like them more. They are really close to each other. I love that the author can make Tobirama and Chike.

Finished reading🤤🤤😋😋🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😋The author wrote it super well! ! ! ! ! !😋😋😋😋😋😋，！ Only the time arrangement of Chike from the age of 12 to 18 in the middle is a bit inconsistent (there is a reason for this, because the author is often blocked, so it may be better to write about 18-year-old adults). Although a lot has been missed in six years, the plot is also superb 😋😋😋🤩🤩