Ye Luolifirst Love, Refreshing Wine

How should I put it? The author has made up for the shortcomings of the original drama very well, and also brought forward the advantages of the original drama very well. The key is that this writing style is top-notch among Ye Luoli fan fiction!

It's been a long time since I read this book before I write a review. First of all, overall it's really good! ! This is definitely one of the best Ye Luoli fanfics I have ever read. There were many novels that I couldn't stand after reading them for a while, but I have been following this one, staying up late to catch up [laughing and crying]. The author's writing style is really good, it is not boring to read, it is engaging, and the funny parts are really funny, and the serious parts are also unambiguous. There are many descriptions of the scenes and processes of the battles of Ye Luoli warriors that are really graphic and detailed. It can be seen that the author has learned and prepared a lot in advance, which is great! The plot is handled very well. Shui Mo has a sweet love relationship and doesn't neglect his career. Watching their sweet love story made my mouth fly to the sky. The most important thing is that this water prince is not oily! (I watched the domineering Prince Water before and it made me autistic. He has clear water. How can he be oily?) The pace of the plot is fast and not draggy. Some of the added settings are very interesting and make the plot more reasonable. There is an unexpected and reasonable feeling. The characters are also well described. I really love Mo Mo, who is beautiful, sassy, ​​powerful, and interesting. The descriptions of other characters are also very vivid and full, and each one has his or her own characteristics. In terms of character relationships, the bullies have not been whitewashed, and the friendship between Ye Luoli and the warriors has not dissipated. Even if times have passed and we meet again, we can still be good friends who can fight side by side and have a tacit understanding. I really like this feeling. The friendship between Nana and Mo Mo is the best in the world! Finally, I have to praise the author's writing style. When I read it, I exclaimed countless times, "You are really good at writing." It is not childish like a primary school student writing essays, and there are many places that are so beautifully described that I can just copy the notes. I hope the author can take a good rest and recover as soon as possible. Taking good care of yourself is the most important thing! Looking forward to the day when normal updates resume [blowing kiss] Come on, duck✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I accidentally discovered this book from the author's perspective. At first, I just read it with the mood of eating candy, but as the plot deepened, I found that the author's integration of the background and the original work was very logical, just like Mo's identity. Why was it once ordinary? Because it was her mother who prevented Mo from being snatched away and asked Mo to be low-key in everything. Just be regular. I really like this setting. [Adoration] The setting of the four major aristocratic families and the eight wealthy families also brings in Gao Taiming and Chen Sisi. The author is not just limited to Mo, but writes from the perspective of a group portrait, but also highlights the style of Mo's heroine. Ye Luoli's team went crazy and made trouble together, reached for the stars and the moon together, and went into the sea together. The youthful like-mindedness described the friendship in a very passionate way. (I used to particularly like group portrait articles. Who knows how excited I felt when I saw Ye Luoli's team [Admiration] [Shyness] This article is shaped from the three aspects of family, friendship, and love, and Shuimo has no shortage of sugar, and the plot is rare in fan fiction that can withstand in-depth exploration. Wow, wow, wow, I really love the author, and the author must have put a lot of effort into this article. I really like it very much. I haven't followed an article like this in a long time. I wish the author a great article🔥. If I haven't read this fanfic, I will be really sad. It's so sweet that I can't stop talking about Shuimo's scenes. The author's writing style is also very good, and it's a skilled one. The descriptions are particularly beautiful. I love it to death [Adoration] Show them all to me! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Super pretty! ! ! The ending comes to an abrupt end, and the story is full of excitement and excitement! I love such free and easy silence and the water rushing to each other! The story is wonderful and the logic is smooth. It transitions from childhood love to universal love, human darkness and human glory, fairy preference and fairy compassion. The group portrait article and the heroine can coexist in one article. The tacit understanding of Ye Luoli's team and the nirvana of the heroine are really amazing! ! ! It's so beautiful. Why is such a well-written article rated so low (ಥ_ಥ)

There are few authors with good writing skills. I like this Mobao hahaha. The random thoughts are very cute and I like it. Although the writing is slow, each chapter has 4,000 words! Looking forward to the next plot! [Blowing kiss]

Saw it from the first chapter. Really nice to look at. There is no definition of a big heroine. The love in this book is love and a double success in career. To be honest, I have been reading a lot of books with big heroines. It seems that there is always no man in her heart, only career, and she is the heroine. With this kind of love and career, some people call her a little white heroine. I think there is no definition between the big heroine and the little white heroine. And the writing here is very proactive. Watching our main drama, Brother Shui is the one who takes the initiative. Now I feel like he's super proactive since Mo Mo's temperament changed! ! It's really easy to take the initiative, but it's just too big. [Hold face] I was honestly embarrassed to watch it in the cinema. [Hold face] [Hold face] Overall, it's great. I would like to say a word to Mo Mo for the main drama. In this era where big heroines are the mainstream, please give the little white-flowered heroine a chance to survive.

I really like this Mobo! I hope the author will update as soon as possible!

It's very good-looking. The author made up for the shortcomings of the original comic and made the heroine stronger to match the water prince.

Highly recommended, it's really good-looking, the content is really novel and interesting, there are so many jokes in the book, the fights are really funny, and the ending of the main text is also very good. The only regret is the lifespan theory of humans and fairies. Shui Mo is really annoying, but the lifespan theory really hit me. I really cried at the ending of the extra chapter, everyone left. Shuishui could only find Momo alone, and she really cried because of the knife. Although the final ending is in the form of OE, I believe it can be he. I believe Shuishui can definitely find Momo, and everyone can come back together to live and play together [air kiss]

Come on, this is my favorite Ye Luoli fanfic so far. I really like it.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, super good looking! ! ! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

It's really beautiful, and Shuimo's love is always there! After the first sight, the Stillwater Lake has never been calmer again. Mo Mo has always been Shui Shui's preference and exception, and Mo Mo will also favor Shui Shui and accompany him. Moreover, Mo Mo is the main heroine here, which is amazing! I am so fascinated by Shui Shui that I am so excited!

，，❤️I can't help but write a book review to express my love for this article. It highlights the special features of the article and attracts more readers' interest in reading (no, it feels weird until the end) [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's good to watch. I skipped a section in the middle. I just felt that the one about Mo Mo's mother was too miserable. I didn't dare to watch the last section. The finale was about the newlyweds. It was good. I added a side story about Chinese Valentine's Day. I thought it was sweet. But it turned out to be about longevity. It's so cruel. I was deceived by this Chinese Valentine's Day title. I knew I shouldn't read this chapter. I feel even more uncomfortable after reading it [crying]. Shuimo is very sweet, but Momo's family and mother are a bit too miserable [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's really beautiful. I highly recommend everyone to watch it. Most of them are Shuimo. Anyway, they are very beautiful. It's just that the updates are a bit slow. Everyone should support the author more. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

My mom is so beautiful. I really didn't have high expectations at first, but the more I watch, the more I watch. This Chinese Valentine's Day special is heartbreaking for me. Shu Yan is so miserable. As a time messenger, he has to watch his friends leave one after another, leaving him alone. It's so tragic [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's very interesting. The content is completely different from what I've seen about Ye Luoli before. It's very novel. I highly recommend it.

Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Is so beautiful. The writing is really good. The CP is also very sweet and not bloody. Overall it is very funny. The plot is quite novel and the concept is very sophisticated.

The author's writing style is good, (absolutely OK, my writing style is not good, I can't describe the author's kind of spirit) The plot is also quite funny (part of the dialogue and plot) The point is, the article is not very long and can be read in about 2 or 3 days (which fully satisfies my desire to read it all in one go). In addition, the author fills in the pitfalls of the main drama very well, without any sense of violation (it is recommended to quote it from the official website, let's just say [thinking] [smirking])

It's so good, even better than the original drama, which was so damn crazy. The plot of the novel completes some of the settings of the original drama. It's a very high-quality piece of writing. The writing is also very good, but the last extra chapter is a bit too sharp. I'm too old to read knives [crying]

It's really super good, but I've only read a little bit of it. I will insist on finishing it [Blow kiss]. When I read the first few chapters, especially when Shui Mo kissed me, I was really happy [Shy] There are quite a lot of silent vests. The author writes so well. I really recommend everyone to read it [Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart]

Really, very beautiful! Forgive me for not having much vocabulary, pen and ink, and not very good at expressing myself, so I cannot express the advantages of this book very well, but this book is one of the best books I have ever read. First of all, the author's writing style is very good, and he can portray the characters' movements, language, expressions, and even their eyes vividly. There are many articles that describe eyes and expressions. There is only one word in the whole article, which is not easy to read. However, the author of this book can describe each eye in a more detailed way, allowing people to truly feel the thoughts and emotions of the characters at that time. The descriptions of scenery, environment, etc. Are also in the right place and the right length. Everything is just right, no more and no less. It can arouse people's emotions and make readers empathize with them and immerse themselves in the scene. Especially in the chapters of the final battle, my heart beat very fast and I was very excited. I was afraid that something might happen to them, so I won't spoil it here. Then there is the plot. The author has written the plot and characters superbly. It is more than a thousand times better than the original drama, and it is really much more reasonable than the original drama. The characters in the book are more realistic and can make people really feel that they are living a good life. They have personalities and a kind side, but they can also be willful and selfish. They are not blindly good or evil. The characters are three-dimensional and not one-sided. The plot does not drag on, and there are no holes that cannot be filled. It's not just about love, there's family ties, friendships, and choices that have to be made. (By the way, this is Jin Luo.) In short, you must read this book. Don't be fooled by the score of this book. I thought this book should have at least a score of 9.7 Or above.

The dream of being a great painter when you were young may not remain the same after many years, but for two people who love each other, how can time bear to separate them? The silence described by the author is very bright and warm, and the world is peaceful. She does not need to envy the free and easy love princess. She can also be herself, a free and easy person, and no longer feel inferior in love. Prince Water does not need to be the coward who dare not pursue love because she has the world in mind...

A masterpiece. . . I have read so many Shuimo novels, but I have rarely found a masterpiece that is particularly well written and fits the characters so well. . . . How could He Dehe eat such delicious food? . . Has the author considered publishing a book after it is completed? I really like it [cry][cry][cry]

It's good to read. I am the kind of person who neither hates Ye Luoli nor likes Ye Luoli. I am not interested in Ye Luoli. But this book satisfies all my secondary fantasies about Ye Luoli when I was a child. Crazy silent and bottomless doting Shuishui, this book is a blast.

It's really good. I've seen that the relationship between Wang Mo and Ye Luoli's warriors is not very good in most books, but this book shows how they unite and fight against each other and never give up on each other. This book is very proactive.

It's super, super, super good-looking. The author's writing style is very delicate and his views are very upright. I came here from another book by Ye Luoli written by the author. The overall text is very gentle and very good, and the extras are super sweet. The only regret is that the main text of the book is be. I cried to death. I hope the author will publish more books [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The emotions between Shui Mo are described very delicately, with a hint of sweetness and cruelty, and the portrayal of other characters is also very good. Some scenes use metaphors, which are also very good. The wedding part of Shui Mo really shocked me, and I also like each character's personality. They are all very good. In one sentence, the writing is great, the plot is smooth, and it's great.

It's very interesting, very interesting, and well-written. It's one of the best among the fanfics. It's just that the water prince is a bit broken, but it's also very good. The water prince's character is actually very extreme. Mo Shuiyu can see it, but he doesn't show it.

It's very interesting. The author's writing style is good. I feel like Wang Mo has become a heroine. Good luck to the author!

It's very beautiful. It's the best novel by Ye Luoli that I've read so far.