Online Gaming: The Sword Rises Across the World

Okay, give me some encouragement. /ᐠ - ˕ -マ Ⳋ 👍 💕 Personal suggestion: The novel progresses a bit too fast. From the time you first enter the novice village to the time you leave the novice village, you can write at least a dozen chapters. If you delay a little longer, you can write more than 20 chapters. The author can use a little more water. "Concentration is the essence" is too concentrated, and it is all the essence. A game where the protagonist can dream of entering (maybe the author wrote it from the beginning, but I didn't see it), such as: making money, saving the world (the game comes to reality, the human race is defeated miserably, and then the protagonist is reborn and returns to the time when the game is started. Just to give an example, this is not suitable for the author's book, so skip it), health care... Etc. The author can also add some stories about NPCs or minor characters (supporting characters). For example: at night, the protagonist is walking leisurely on the path (there is a stream next to it) and hears a pleasant singing. He runs to the place where the singing is coming and finds no one. The protagonist wonders who is singing, and then the hidden mission is triggered. The next day, after getting to know the fisherman here, it turned out that the singer was a mermaid, and then... (I won't talk nonsense later) the protagonist completed the task and lamented that the story of the mermaid was tragic. You can describe the scenery appropriately, but not too much, otherwise it will just be a literary description of the scenery!!! This novel by the author is okay, but I may read more online game systems and rebirths... I may not find this novel very interesting. To be added later…૮₍ ｡•.•｡₎ა

It's okay, just a little rushed, and there's no rendering, a very bland style? I feel that if this speed continues, it will have to be completed in 400,000 words. I can add some plot to describe the characters, main tasks, activities, etc. The combat power is also a bit wrong. The golden boss is a bit too easy to kill, giving people the illusion that the level 60 golden boss only has 20,000 health. At the same time, a yellow boss The gold boss explodes with three golden weapons, which is even more devalued. If your character is not at level 200 or above, I don't recommend you to write like this. Compress it. As for how to compress it, there will be a system update. It is said that this is the novice period. After the end, I will add a task or the like. I have read half of it now. Overall, it is good. Come on, newbies.

Give yourself a five-star review, come on, author! The first hundred chapters are all kinds of foreshadowing, so they are relatively dull, but after one hundred chapters it will definitely be exciting. If you like this kind of novel, you can collect it first and fatten it up before killing it. Thank you for your evaluation, thank you.

I read it in one sitting and it was not enough. Nice